Starting from Cutting Down Mountains and Destroying Temples, He Began to Conquer Thousands of Roads.

The author's writing skills are poor and sloppy, and in the early stage of Lingfu training, shouldn't it be enough to kill him with just two or three moves in the early stage? Even if it's transformed, shouldn't Lingfu react faster than Lianfan? Can't you just take away a set of combos? 🤔🤔🤔You still keep listening to nonsense, why don't you just beat him down or cripple him and then ask questions? 🤔🤔🤔

Generally speaking, as a new writer, the writing is pretty good, and there is still a desire to follow more. In the description of some scenes, it can be seen that he has a certain skill. However, maybe as a new writer, his experience is still a bit insufficient. The description of the plot is still a bit too long and not delicate enough. There are still some small flaws in the plot coherence. Personally, I suggest that you can add some jokes. Go in, after all, I still want to relax when reading a novel. Personally, I still prefer a more relaxed and pleasant plot. I feel that the protagonist's personality can be appropriately adjusted to make the description of the character more full. Others may feel differently. Of course, in the end, it still depends on the author's outline setting and understanding of the protagonist. Come on, I hope to see better works.

It's still too draggy, and the fighting feel is very poor.

Traveling through time to Miao Zhu, he got the Kung Fu sword and was transferred to the official service, which was a bit poisonous. I'll try the poison again later.

Come on

? ? ? Once you wake up, you will become an official? ? ? ? Don't be so cliché!

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing is not strong enough, just like a running account.

Just like what I said in reply to the boss downstairs, Bao will not be a eunuch. That would not only let down the readers who support me, but also degrade my character! ! !

When I read Chapter 10, I felt familiar. Did the author draw lessons from Shen Yaohuang's book? In particular, the process of killing the pig demon was very similar to the process of Shen Yaohuang slaughtering the dog demon. Demon Emperor Shen uses Demon Shou, and the protagonist uses incense, tsk... I hope the author can write a different and exciting story for the following plot!

The demon's strength and rewards are not directly proportional. It's too exaggerated.

As a new author, the writing can be done without delay or pressure. The story also has ups and downs and is attractive. Complaining about it, the monster's reaction is a bit repetitive, looking down on the protagonist and then being shocked by the protagonist's cultivation.

If you can write, just write. If you can't, don't mess with it. I chose all the damn ones and spent money to watch them every day, which made me feel lonely.

If you haven't finished writing, don't send it out. What you send out won't be connected to the previous content, and it will be very tiring to read.

The first two chapters and the last few chapters were written by the same person? This gap is too big!

Why are the contents of the same chapter different? I can't understand it.

No, your patch will start tomorrow, brother.