Douluo: Wuhun Qimen Formation, Control All Things!

In the original work, Jiang Nannan awakened the martial spirit for Xu Sanshi in order to save his mother, and exchanged it for a Xuanwu magic elixir. It seems that if this elixir is used by ordinary people, it may be too powerful and hurt people. Xu Sanshi originally thought that Jiang Nannan was just for money, but later he found out that he was just trying to save her mother. After his mother died, he spent his martial soul essence to refine the power of the Black Tortoise Pill to prevent Jiang Nannan's mother from dying. And because the two of them were different in the original work, Xu Sanshi planned to take responsibility and make up for his mistakes. How did Jiang Nannan, a commoner, get a letter of recommendation at the level of a city lord? Is Xu Sanshi helping here? I don't know

From the beginning, it looks so-so, which is a bit interesting. But as you go to the back, it becomes more rubbish, and the finale is so unfinished that you can't watch it.

He dared to go to Liangyiyan with a soul saint in his first ring. Is he too crazy or does he not regard Tang San as a god?

It's a bit unbelievable. A soul saint takes a level 20 and a level 40 to the two realms of ice and fire. . . . We also discussed keeping one of them, and the day after tomorrow was even more of a test, so we didn't start eating grass jelly randomly. No, the original book was about testing it first and then specifying the kind of grass jelly to eat. There is something wrong with what is written here.

The protagonist doesn't feel like an adult time travel at all to me. The small head controls the big head. The author's protagonist's thoughts on women are too straightforward, and they are not attractive at all. The setting that mental power far exceeds that of the physical body has been seen in books a few years ago. The protagonists written by different authors have them focus on finding solutions to their problems and worry about their physical condition. Emotional lines are all natural. But Zhou Xuan was so straightforward that it made people uncomfortable, especially when he emphasized that he was just doing it casually, which seemed like his previous offer of help was too deliberate. It feels stupid to record everything on Tang San. I can't stand it, but I can't stand it. As a result, Tang San felt that the situation was small. There is no problem in inferring the other three. Looking at the five films, the character Tang San is indeed very bad. But this gives me the feeling as a reader that the author seems to be unable to write anything other than inferences. The time-travelers who went to college under the nine-year compulsory education have lost all their demeanor. Moreover, the protagonist in the novel shows his disdain for Tang San, and the author also wrote a separate chapter to learn secretly and obtain the Tang Sect's secret knowledge. Tang San's behavior was despicable, wouldn't the protagonist's behavior be despicable? He also specifically wrote that the purpose was to steal some unique skills.

The relationship line is so bad, you might as well write the heroine as a brother and then replace the name with the heroine

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Because of the subject matter, it turned out that the author basically did not write about Fenghou Qimen. It's all about mental strength, just relying on mental strength, and deliberately lowering the level. Although Douluo belongs to the fantasy sewer, he does not deliberately suppress his strength and delay the plot. If you drag it too much, the tail will be too big to fall off. Regarding the description of Fenghou Qimen, I suggest that he develop his space and time abilities, add ultimate attributes, combined moves, and independent formations to easily build the protagonist's power system. When fighting Tang San, you can end well by relying on your formation ability.

It's pretty good now. I just watched 33 pictures. Now, I feel like the single heroine is pretty good now. I hope there won't be too many.

The author writes so well, I love reading it so much, just keep it like this and don't worry about anything else

The male protagonist is also a love brain, and the description of emotions is very blunt. It would be better not to write it at all.

Does the heroine have Xiaoxiao

Author, the reason why your book has such a low rating is firstly because it has no special features, and secondly, you don't accept a few Lexuan Zhang as the heroine. Neither do you, Shrek's famous beauties. Receive. The writing is actually not good enough. If there are more female protagonists, there will always be people who like to watch it. Listen to me, collect a few more and sit down. It's usually the case when looking at Douluo. It depends on how many female protagonists you accept before deciding to join the trap. You don't have many character pictures and you don't even have a male protagonist. It's weird that the ratings are high, but the heroine doesn't accept it either.

Now that you have accepted the heroine, you have to play a single heroine. Can you charge a few more?

Updates are too slow and I often ask for leave.

Write more female protagonists, more than a dozen. If you don't write more female protagonists in Time Travel Douluo, it's almost as bad as writing more female protagonists. It's OK for the author to write more female protagonists.

The author, you write me, you don't write too much, and you have written more than 10 Douluo swords at least and you still don't accept them. Then I can only say that you are very good. Even if you have to write eunuch articles, you still accept them. The author listens to my advice, most people who watch Douluo like to watch as many female protagonists as possible 😁

I'm curious. When I thought of Qimen before I watched Ren Xia, I only thought of these functions: prediction, feng shui, and deduction. Does Qimen not have these functions now?

I won't talk about the first part, but what I wrote later is just a piece of shit.

Douyin comes, and prices have plummeted to no end. Xuanwu Divine Pill costs 300,000 gold soul coins. In order for the protagonist to take the freshman exam, a class teacher from an outer college gave him an attached soul bone as a reward. This is the first time he has seen such a drop in prices. The strongest combat power is a Soul Sage, and he dares to break through the ice and fire two rituals, and he brings an eighth-level soul guide cannon. Let's not mention that it is impossible for you to buy this eighth-level soul-fixing cannon. He doesn't even have the combat power of a titled Douluo, and he dares to think of Tang Fozu as a protector of the place 😅

It's okay but it's not finished It's a little watery in the middle, so I almost gave up on it.

The martial soul is a strange formation, why is the soul ring an illusion? It's not compatible either.