Swallowed Star: Lord Lingxiao

I was speechless after watching the protagonist try to hide the specialness of the earth through his coquettish actions. First of all, since the protagonist is preparing to participate in the genius battle, there is no point in hiding his birth planet. From the fact that Luo Feng received an external mission and returned to Earth to rectify his family, it can be seen that Virtual Universe Company has background checks on core members. Otherwise, it would be impossible to find out that the descendants of the Luo Feng family are doing evil on Earth. So the protagonist's behavior of changing his own planet is simply not feasible. He only needs to go over and check it out. On the contrary, this act of covering up the planet of birth arouses suspicion. Secondly, the protagonist found a reason for the indigenous planet to connect with the universe, and specially accepted a maid to be promoted to immortality. This behavior is simply insane. The Earth's specialness is not something that the strongest people in the universe cannot detect at all. After all, people on Earth's special minds cannot be found out by others as long as they don't take the initiative to expose it. But there are too many ways to check things like age in the universe. An immortal is less than a hundred years old. Anyone with a normal mind would know that something is wrong, and the problem could be found out with just one look. The secret of increasing the appeal of immortality in batches far exceeds that of the earth, okay?

If the writing is not good, you can criticize the protagonist, but after criticizing the protagonist, you cannot criticize the author😜😜😜

Exquisite egoist! Look at the description of the protagonist to identify the social attributes of the author. It is recommended that the author watch the battle between the strong man on earth and the golden-horned beast several times to cleanse his selfish soul. Although it is said that if a person does not serve himself, he will be destroyed by heaven and earth. But online novels can barely be regarded as literary works. Please be more positive.

One thing to say, it was very uncomfortable to watch, and I felt like I wanted to be Long Aotian but put restrictions on myself. The whole Yiluo Feng Chance Plus version has three clones: the water unicorn corresponds to Luo Feng's golden-horned giant beast, and that sea of blood corresponds to the Nine Nether Sea. I am really helpless. He didn't write his own thing and didn't describe it as clearly as the original work. Moreover, the most vicious plot is: He wanted to avoid exposing the earth and not befriend Hong and Thor, but instead went to enslave a beautiful woman, then use a plug-in to upgrade to immortality, and even fucked her? Not to mention that there can't be too many emotional scenes with the heroine to swallow this kind of novel. Just talk about what kind of purple neon clothes can flirt with the protagonist after recognizing the heroine? ? ? You don't want to be in the state you were in after you recognized your master, right? You can't stand it anymore and you slipped away, it's extremely poisonous 😒

After reading the book reviews, I found that both of them had incorrect views. No one told Hong before he broke into the fantasy sea what it means to break through this thing. He probably only said that the more he entered, the more resources he could get to cultivate. As a result, everyone who read the novel felt that Hong had cheated the earth and Luo Feng. What is a trap? That was because he knew there was a trap but still did it. This is obviously because Hong was also fooled. Others could stand up to protect mankind in the era of Nirvana. When they were strong (before Luo Feng rose up), they did not stop eating beef on earth. How could these book reviewers have the nerve to scold them? They have a villain mentality.

As soon as Chapter 13 came out, I couldn't stand it. Luo Feng's early stage was all dragon blood and the heart of a thousand-year tree, the middle stage was all nutrient solution, and the later stage was direct cosmic initiation. You are a human being, but you are still the lowest human being on earth. Does the warrior level pay attention to basics? Neither Giant Axe nor the Lord of Chaos City is qualified to say this.

Unbelievable, you are also playing with the time and space paradox. Can you still have the same timeline after traveling through time? I found that many authors are like this, forcing the concept of time and traveling through time at every turn. To put it bluntly, otherwise the world you traveled through would be so terrifying that you wouldn't be able to enter it at all. Any world you can travel into, then you must have affected the timeline, and all the "plots" you are familiar with will change because of you. Why does the original protagonist always go back in time and kill the fan protagonist? It's funny. I can only say that it's really outrageous.

Because I was afraid that the giant ax would go back in time when it came to the earth in the future, I was timid from the beginning and looked a bit useless.

Originally, the previous chapters were pretty good. There was no slap in the face, no pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger, and I was still lucky. I found a copy of Earth Start, but there was no such badly written plot as Extreme Martial Arts School - Team xx - Offending Li Yao - Elite Training Camp. Especially Zhang Zehu's chapter, it was handled very well. There was no brainless plot for revenge. It was relatively good among the Devouring fanfics. Before starting, or after the protagonist rises to Luo Feng, after all, this training camp, the world within the world, the genius battle, etc. Are all poorly written. The same period as Luo Feng is no longer popular. If it must be written in the same period, it must be innovative and have new plots. As long as it's reasonable, readers will buy it. Judging from your previous chapters, as long as you write well, the results will not be bad The latest chapter is like this, right? It's a big deal, and it offends Li Yao. Without this plot, you won't be able to write it, right?

I don't like this book. The main character gives me the impression that he is a nouveau riche and has a small family mentality.