No Money, No Magic

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The plot feels a little too rushed. Most things are just briefly passed and then moved on to the next plot when the meaning is reached. Although it is acceptable, it still feels too rough. Except for the outline, the writing style can only be described as boring. But at least there is no problem with the logic, everything is progressing in an orderly manner, and there are no flaws that would make people sick of seeing it. Secondly, the character design is a bit dull. Apart from the innate purpose, there are really no personality differences between the characters other than their names. At least, the differences are not obvious, and the personalities are not unique enough. I am looking forward to a character that is eye-catching enough to appear, or waiting for a highlight that will completely bring the existing characters to life. To put it bluntly, the character creation currently seems to lack depth. I hope to see clearer and stronger character emotions that are easier to empathize with.

Is it cruel? Is it a waste of practice to become a god? If you still value it, confiscate it all, reissue the money, and shuffle the cards.

The writing in the previous book is quite good. If the author is not sure, he can write a few books first to practice. I have also seen authors who wrote one book very well, but later found that they were not sure to write according to that standard, so they wrote other books first. I hope I will have the opportunity to read the follow-up of that book in the future By the way, eunuchs should not make a habit of it, it is very scary. Looking forward to the performance of your book

The first real battle at the beginning is against the dean, who is at least a mini-boss in other novels. Around the 30th chapter, a god-level magic is used to change the map. Although it is not as outrageous as the forbidden spells, forbidden curses and forbidden spells that appeared soon after the beginning of the previous book, but the threshold is also set too high at the beginning. The subsequent upgrade and growth of the protagonist will make people feel very unrealistic, and the spell system will also appear weak. The author's twists and foreshadowing are actually good, but the too-fast pace will cause readers to feel like they have indigestion of information. Appropriate foreshadowing is helpful for the reading experience. Fighting monsters to upgrade is old-fashioned but useful, and details of life can help enrich the character. Although fast food is becoming more and more popular nowadays, people who read long novels still prefer a slower pace, otherwise those short stories that can be read in ten minutes are better. I wish the author can write better and better.

This kind of online article can only be read for fun... But I still hope that the author can know it well and can write online articles that readers both want and want🤓

Bro, has the new book project been approved? Have you created a new folder? Can you give me an accurate letter? Don't just stop writing in the future.