Return to 80: an Industrial Giant Who Started Out Hunting

What is your goal? Without goals, the company has no strategy

There are only four comments in one hundred thousand words, including the author's 🙂

I have read 54 chapters so far. Just say it briefly. Let's talk about the conclusion first, Liang Cao Wen. Worth reading for book lovers. Well, at least so far, everything I write is okay. Not too poisonous. I don't know what will happen next, after all, it hasn't been updated yet. The portrayal of the male protagonist is okay. There is nothing I dislike about it so far. It's just that the length of the story is short, so the writing is a little dull. Other male supporting characters are relatively weak and can be strengthened appropriately. Whether it's a follower, a partner, or a father, you can spend more pen and ink to make the character more three-dimensional. The female supporting cast is just average. Currently they are all NPCs and have no memory points. Next, it depends on the heroine and how the author writes it. Author Jun, I would like to give you a suggestion. If you can't write about the relationship between a man and a woman well, don't force it. Even if you use Spring and Autumn style, just a few strokes will do. Don't write awkwardly, force misunderstandings, or pretend to slap the Dragon King in the face. . . Even thinking about it makes me shudder. Emotional aspects, especially between male and female protagonists, are difficult to write about. It is not easy to write well. But if you want to write bad, it's too easy. All kinds of poisons. Well, it's a bit long-winded, so I'll skip it. Go on, the next plot can be sped up a little. More than fifty chapters. One hundred chapters, one hundred chapters at most. If the plot is still bland, with no climax or major conflict, it will generally be difficult to retain people. The word count is too few, please update more. There is also a golden finger. Friendly advice, don't open it too much. Real! Time is limited, so I'll write this first. Author bacteria, come on!

This year's readers are too aloof. If I couldn't see someone reading in the background data, I would have thought I was on a single machine 😵😵 Can anyone comment in the comment area? Otherwise, it always feels a bit weird. In addition, I beg everyone not to keep books. The new book seedlings pointed to this point to pursue reading. I would like to thank you all 😡😡

Isn't this book a book with more than 200,000 words and it hasn't been published yet? It has over 100 chapters and is well written. What's going on? I'm afraid that I won't write it if I feel that the author won't publish it.

The writing is getting better and better, Liangcao

I quit when I saw a system. Rebirth is already the biggest cheat, but there is a system... What do you think?