I've Been in This Entertainment Industry Before

Could you please revise Chapter 15? It's a bit too much. A country boy trying to make money in the stock market asks his newly acquainted godfather for a million yuan, back in 2005! What is that supposed to mean?! If you were to make an excuse about needing a few thousand yuan to improve your life and then gamble on football, I could accept that, but borrowing a million is just too much. It's making me want to quit.

What was the author thinking? The protagonist's character and background are all written to be incredibly impressive, but he doesn't do anything productive? All he does is sleep with female celebrities, and he keeps emphasizing how amazing his genitals are! He knocks female celebrities unconscious all the time? Are you sure the male lead is from Earth? And is this even a romance novel?

The author keeps praising Jiang Wen, which is unnecessary. His films are niche art; who needs a commentator to watch a movie? Those who don't understand mainstream aesthetics can't become great directors.

Pretty, isn't it?

After reading four chapters, I noticed a problem with the author. Specifically, the author seems to want to write something, write a little, ramble a bit, not finish, then continue writing, ramble a bit more, and again not finish… This is particularly evident in all four chapters.

This isn't a harem novel, it's a total harem novel and a beginner's version of erotica. He's either sleeping or on his way to sleep.

The writing is too bland. Since it's an entertainment harem novel, you should have gotten him to the film set and interacted with the female lead. This is ridiculous; all his interactions with the female lead are outside, involving trivial matters. It's become a mediocre story. 🙂 Also, the girlfriend should at least be a big star. Controversy is fine, but with Kan Qingzi, there's no discussion at all; it's just been censored.

I read over 200 chapters, but I couldn't continue. Of all the actresses, why did they have to choose Kan Qingzi as the female lead? If the author had just looked at the comments and changed the character card to someone else, so many people wouldn't have given up and left.

The title could really be changed to: "Rebirth: My Life as a Smoker," author, please consider it? Cigarettes, cigarettes, constantly being smoked. This is far too much; it far exceeds the normal length of writing.

What is this writing? Didn't I come here to take a look after reading the previous book? It's a huge disappointment.