1985: My Literary Era

Don't spend too much time talking about how the protagonist's works make readers and critics crazy. The reading experience for us real readers is not good. You have to devote your energy to writing about the daily trivial matters of your family and family. Wenchao is just an introduction. You can't use Wenchao as a staple food for us. We will get bored easily.

I've been reading this book for a while, so I subscribed for a few more chapters. Tell me how I feel. After the novel is released, there are too many chapters in the novel where the author is self-proclaimed and boasts about how clever and awesome the novel is. In fact, it is difficult for these points to give readers enough stimulation. Usually period writing will add more elements of life, and bring more changes to family, friends and society through the change of the protagonist's destiny after writing. Let your family live a better and happier life. It feels better to date a heroine whom I couldn't touch before. It's cool to show off in the professional field. If you only rely on the novels copied by the literary youth to please yourself, how awesome are they? If you copy too many novels, you will get tired of aesthetics. Look at the number of subscriptions

You should write novels at any age. Unless it is a fantasy novel, would you believe it if you asked an 18-year-old boy to write novels with realistic themes such as living and longing?

It can't always be the same process [Code – Submit – Publish – Praise]. Repeat. Write more realistic plots such as the interaction between the protagonist and other writers and daily life. After all, the protagonist is a living person, not a code machine with no emotions.

At first, this book was driven by the plot, and I naturally started writing poems. Later, when I wrote a novel, I felt that it was delicate and attentive. The author introduced the novel with his own understanding. The first part was very touching. I personally like this writing method, but after reading it, I discovered some problems. The author is writing this book in the third person. The book contains too many long words in each chapter, large-scale science popularization, introduction, explanation, and too little dialogue between characters. I personally feel that it would be better to use the dialogue between characters to promote the development of the plot. It will not be so dry, and there are space jumps. It is not necessary for the plot to suddenly jump to Yu Hua and Xingxing in these chapters. , My personal feeling is that the writing is too scattered, and the main plot is very sudden when written well. The best thing the author did is that there is no hydrological copy content, but the comments you wrote and other people's opinions, mixed with a lot of popular science introductions and explanations are really too long-winded. I was very irritated when I read it. I skipped to read it, and now the details are gone. The text was copied too fast. , This kind of writing will be uninteresting later on, you can't live the same feeling as a single-player game, there is no life, no social interaction, no family and friendship, except for the protagonist, the other characters are like NPCs and have no memory points or characteristics. Don't write it like a propositional composition, pretending to be empty and cramming the word count. I hope the author can write better and better. I like the beginning of this book.

I don't know why the protagonist is so small. The book also has to match the protagonist's age and background. It's impossible for a 17-year-old rural boy to write novels like love letters and atonement.

Not bad, not bad. I just like this kind of Chinese translation of foreign movies, TV dramas and novels. Nowadays, in many eras, entertainment articles are based on domestic literary works, which is boring. It's interesting to gather things from abroad and enrich things from home. Just because of this, I am going to start reading this book. I would like to make a small suggestion: write more stories about life. Most people who like to read periodicals like to live a little more.

Just write a book. Writing poetry feels too pretentious and embarrassing...

I have been listening to the book, and there are still a few chapters that I haven't read at the end. The author's text description should be concise. Listening to the book sounds like a lot of nonsense. There is no problem if you want to make readers feel powerful. But repeated descriptions seem verbose! I hope the author can improve it!

Grade: Grain+ Advantages: 1. The novels adapted from the two films "Love Letter" and "Unreachable Lover" have very unique entry points. After all, it is not "Wrangler" and "Romance in Lushan Mountain" anymore! 2. It's not a running account model, at least it's still a bit daily, which is pretty good! Disadvantages: 1. The two movie adaptations of "Atonement" and "The Time Traveler's Wife" are a bit bland. European and American worldviews and values ​​​​find love or values ​​to be very awesome. Oriental perspectives always find it strange, and I personally feel that it is very wrong! 2. It always feels awkward for a writer to write well and also write poetry part-time. Poetry is really, really difficult to write in a way that both refined and popular people can appreciate it!

Reading more than 20 chapters in one go is not enough to satisfy the protagonist in the early stages. I don't know where the author found such illogical figures as a salary of 19 yuan and a rent of 4 yuan. According to this reasoning, in 1985, 19 yuan could only make ends meet for a family of three. Ordinary literati were not the protagonists, as long as they were good at poetry and novels. If they could write one article a year and get it published in a magazine, it was considered good. And the protagonist who wrote three or four top-notch poems actually didn't write letters to his younger brothers and sisters? Being famous throughout the country does not have a fanatical atmosphere. Compared with Qidian, it can be understood that he wrote three or four masterpieces, let alone a masterpiece that was published in top publications in the 1980s. The top literati of every era are not short of money (painters are not counted).

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The writing is quite good, but all the works published by the protagonist so far are about love, which is a bit...

The plot doesn't drag, it has its own thing. Forage

I can still think of the eleventh day you wrote

It's well written, but not updated well. The most important thing is that it cannot be updated or mentioned in advance. Self-imposed! What a waste! It is recommended not to read it.

It's well written, why haven't you updated it?

Start writing again, don't write in such a sad way, I haven't seen enough in the past few years

Why don't you update it? Continue writing.

So far, it seems that the writing is okay and it is worth getting into.

The writing is really good. The first poem "I Love You" was well chosen and very touching. The development of the plot is also slow and unhurried, I hope it will be maintained.

So far, the quality is pretty good, but it's too early to jump in and I'm not satisfied with it.

Can't sleep at night