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To be honest, your plug-in is quite innovative, but your plot and characters' personalities need to be polished.

You can't listen to this book, you can only read it briefly. It would be really embarrassing to hear how a female character behaved for the first time, or how a female character never behaved. I didn't grow up in a nunnery.

It was okay at the beginning and had some characteristics, but then it completely fell apart. It was written as a lap and revolved around women! It seems that if you don't color, you won't be able to write. This golden finger is not used to learn and develop technology or practice martial arts to seek transcendence and immortality. Instead, it is used to fuck women. Just like female channel novels and current TV, everything can be fucked and fell in love.

There are several stunning beauties. Before the protagonist had no money, they were indifferent to him. After the protagonist got rich, they all pursued him. Isn't it true that there is only one rich second generation in the entire university town? The most indispensable thing for beauties is the pursuit of the rich second generation. Your rank is too low. At least you need to be a famous figure. How about you change your skin and make the protagonist a black man?

Bull brother! The plot and setting are perfect. Except for the women who fall into a bit of a cliché, the others can almost be said to have the potential to become a big hit. Stay calm first, don't be crazy about recruiting women, take your time, and update more!

I hope that at 7 o'clock, we will launch a function for readers to block these rubbish eunuch authors!

This book is both vulgar and crude, but I read the novel just to relax, and I personally feel it is quite good.

In fact, some authors now know that they cannot write emotional dramas well, so they simply stop writing them or try to reduce them as much as possible.

To be honest, the storyline with the counselor was very bad. After receiving the gift, the younger sister asked her older sister to introduce it, but she was unwilling to do so? The protagonist is not a succubus either. Wouldn't this way of writing make the book full of nymphomaniacs? ? Every heroine is like this. The protagonist becomes domineering and domineering as soon as she gets rich. I'm tired of seeing it.

It's pretty good, although a little exaggerated. At least it's not poisonous, it's refreshing and straightforward, and it's not as awkward as some great writers.

It seems pretty good so far, but the heroine's name is too Internet-cultured, not like a normal person's name, a bit like an Internet name for the adaptation of an online drama and anime.

I also suggest not having too many female protagonists, focusing on the career line, because the selling point is the certificate, and women are just seasoning.

Author, please do not delete the comments 😅, 14 comments will appear fake to others at first glance

The setting is interesting, but it won't just be about women in the future, right?

No more updates. Has the author been criticized for being autistic? In fact, although the recent plot has some problems, I think it's okay. You might as well learn from the mentality of the author of "Wealth Freedom". It was very poisonous in the past, and naturally a lot of people criticized it, but I still insisted on writing it down. Now Wan Jun, including me, has endured the poisonous points and chewed them off.

The writing is quite good, and the white and white intersperses are normal. It's not bad, it's great.