The Road to the Sun

I admire the author's persistence, and I would like to support him a little 🤓

In fact, I admire the author very much. Not everyone can write alone for so long without giving up, but there are some things I feel I have to say. I have read dozens of online articles from all eras. Nowadays, Internet writers, especially novices, if they still have the same writing style as before, even the master platinum is at risk of being thrown away (for example, the knife is sharp and the goose is the old five) I saw that the author's starting point number is more than a thousand days, but it seems that he has not used it much, and I don't know how many cool articles, small white articles, literary youth articles, and sacred books the author has read. There is a very enthusiastic master named Wandering Toad. He has an account on Zhihu. There are many pitfalls that novice authors should avoid. I think it is very helpful. Writing does not have much actual requirements on the writing style, but more on the story: whether it is sophisticated or not, or whether it is funny, whether it has depth, or whether it has a strong sense of substitution. For example, although the statement of three golden chapters is wrong, it is true that everyone has no more than three chapters to give a book. The first chapter should catch people's attention, and then give people a reason to collect it in three chapters. It can set up suspense, describe a complete plot in three chapters and sublimate it, or it can be fast-paced and make people read three or five chapters without realizing it. . . . It is necessary to have side descriptions of scenes, but all of them exist for the advancement of the plot. It cannot be said that a little plot is inserted in the middle of a long description of the psychological environment Internet writing is relatively unique. The three elements of the novel, the plot, are more important than the characters and the environment (relatively speaking, these two are also very important) There are also plots where the silly ❌ blocks the road and pretends to be slapped in the face. It is best to change the skin, and put it naked to appear more intelligent. . . It would be better to write more about human nature and the helplessness in life, when you have to bow your head and then do something you know you can't do. . . . That much to say first, come on, author! !

But the money hasn't arrived yet. I don't know if I have to wait for the contract to be signed. Anyway, I still support the author

I feel that the subject matter of the new book is not very good. Just solving the case is okay, but adding the elements of gods and gods feels weird.