Magical Girl: I'll Help Myself Improve My Record

Well. It feels like today's so-called magical girls are all covered in the skin of "hero" literature. It's just a different role from the bad hero literature.

Although the author's writing feels soaring and the story is a bit unclear, the story is still in the early stages. I hope the author can make further progress (of course, his writing level is much higher than mine). Problems such as sometimes a character or concept pops up out of nowhere without any relevant introduction; the story is too closely related, giving people the feeling of forcibly advancing the plot or lacking a sense of story. Some side plots that are not closely related to the main plot can be appropriately inserted into the main plot, or you can defeat monsters on a daily basis or run through the map or advance the background story. Another point is not to write too many names. Most readers will not remember so many names, especially in fast-paced articles.

The writing is too disjointed. I write whatever comes to my mind. It's very tiring to read. There is no connection between events.

Write slower, write better, and write more carefully. It will look like a magical girl shouting about friendship and bonding and then waving a colorful magic wand to give readers a stick.

It was written a bit too fast, and the thinking of the characters in it is a bit unconventional. For example, some characters may think that the protagonist is the magical girl. Secondly, there are also some problems with the way the characters speak. But in terms of genre, it is the more interesting one. Come on.

There are a lot of self-made words, and even when I read them continuously, there were still a lot of inexplicable things. I had seen it in books that kept throwing out settings at the beginning, but there were so many words that I couldn't explain clearly, and it was rare that people were even more confused. Either replace it with conventional words, or completely rewrite it to include all the required settings. The biggest problem is that the personalities of these magical girls are quite strange. Currently, there is not even a character template that can fit into each of them.

The visual sense is created very well. It seems to be very interesting in a book about magical girls with dual identities. Cheers, author (Can I get more updates if I vote for recommendation?)

Author, your rhythm is not very good. There are many things that are not introduced in advance. The writing is a bit messy.

The layout of the writing can be said to be quite poor among the books I have read. This is the first time I have seen such a book. The key is that you have to put your mind aside and read it.

Does the seventh seat in the introduction become 1% fragments in the text? .

Okay, it is indeed a light novel, but my expectations were too high, and the improvement in strength was not clear, and it focused on describing the relationship between men and women.

Hope to get your opinions, thank you all

I just saw it. Come on, the author, support me. Good guy, you are also a witch who is lazy every day and finally runs away, right? ^0^

It's so confusing in the middle, and it feels like the AI ​​is rushing to work and didn't have time to see it.

As the title shows, when I started the project, I was completely out of a rush and had relatively little exposure to domestic light novels, which led to conflicts in the characters and settings. Now I am reading novels of the same type, and my exp is rising every day! Next, I will revise the previous chapters, which can be regarded as debugging. If there are any bugs, please give me feedback downstairs. Thank you all. I will also think carefully about the next one. Even though I am working hard, at least I will last until I finish the book, and I will also gain experience! (Actually, I got confused myself. Looking back now, I think I went too fast to advance the plot... (ﾉ´д｀))

Writer Assistant will only be counted if you type it yourself, not Ai (AI writing should be much better than mine orz)

Although it is a taboo in writing to throw out a lot of settings at the beginning of the novel, don't write nothing at all... I read a few chapters, and a bunch of proper nouns came to me. I had to figure out what they meant, and it was very difficult to read.

The front part is okay, but it's just a mess of words about the male protagonist.