From a Country Doctor to a God of All Kinds of Magic

Overall, it's not bad. It's obvious that the mortal stream is one of the few clear streams in the new book. The food rating is at least steamed bun + side dish level. If the author can keep writing with this quality, it shouldn't be a problem to join a high-quality channel in the future. The setting of the protagonist as an old man is quite interesting, the plot is quite compact, and I like the fact that the number of words is not high. At present, it seems that the protagonist also has a semi-innovative skill promotion system, which is also quite interesting. I quite like the writing style. When I read it, I felt quite immersed in the whole story, and I got to the latest chapter all the way. Okay, now I want to talk about the shortcomings. Occasionally there are typos and omissions, which do not affect reading, but I, an old person like me who loves to pick out small details, always want to say a few words. Updates are too slow. Currently, only two chapters are updated a day, which is not enough for me to read. The golden finger of the protagonist is considered a weak one. Except when it appears at critical moments, it usually has no sense of presence. I personally feel that the protagonist should use the golden finger more. Of course, many people may not like to watch that kind of thing. This will vary from person to person. Finally, I would like to say that my comments only represent my personal opinions. You can just take a look at them for reference. Whether the taste of the book is to your liking or not, you have to go in and read a dozen or twenty chapters by yourself.

He's just a coward, practicing martial arts and being an immortal. He learns to be a lowly person day by day. Those who can't do it can be ignored. But he can step on the protagonist twice if he encounters any cat or dog and the protagonist will act as if nothing happened. Even if he is surrounded by people, he will kill the stupid second generation. It's amazing that none of the people being surrounded will move. When a gangster comes to bully him, he will look honest and easy to bully. What else is there to do? Wouldn't it be better to just go back to the mountains and wait for death?

After reading the comment section, I asked a man in his forties with no money to find his wife. If it doesn't work, he would lie or rape her. I hope I won't meet someone who stains my eyes like this.

Traveling through the past 40 years, ordinary people can endure not having concubines and having children for forty years, which is awesome.

The protagonist is 81 years old, not a eunuch, and has no descendants for so many years?

Since the author writes about an 80-year-old man as the protagonist, if you write the protagonist as an old man, your attitude towards the protagonist will not be like treating an old man. In ancient times, an 80-year-old man was an elder. How can you, a righteous person, doubt the elders every day?

It was so laborious to open the third cave, and I even used the Immortal as a token. I don't know how many resources and effort it took to fully open the subsequent caves.

Suppressing the protagonist is too harsh, and a proficient player will still have a bottleneck. Second, just to reach the 7th level of martial arts, you need three elixirs that are only available in the world of immortality. What should an old man in his 80s do with an age limit of only 102?

The subject matter is good, but the author is not capable. An official discovered that two thieves were stealing from the government. Instead of shouting to catch the thieves, they were chased by the two thieves. Speaking of shouting, I remembered that the protagonist's village was going to be massacred earlier. He wanted to make some noise to wake up the villagers, so he chose to throw an earthen jar. The villagers were all impressed and really woke up The protagonist beat the evil cultivator to death and found that the evil method was hidden in the righteous sect. In order to kill people and silence them, the protagonist chose to fake the scene in order to avoid disaster. As a result, the monk arrived and asked the protagonist to check whether the evil cultivator was dead. The booklet fell out. It happened that the two pages where the method was recorded were not destroyed by lightning. Yes, an evil cultivator was hiding on the top of the mountain where lightning often struck Caught the reader and fed him poison. How should I say? It can still be read without these poisonous spots. It is a bit of writing quality, but it must be fed💩. This is unsolvable.

After looking at the catalog system, all kinds of monsters and monsters appeared. Nothing happened in the previous forty years. But as soon as the system came out, all kinds of monsters and monsters appeared. Is this the kind of thing that doesn't even allow for development? ,

Is this a coward cultivating immortality? If you are cowardly to this extent, you can be considered the king of cowards.

Ridiculous! As soon as I practice martial arts, all kinds of things happen! You have lived a smooth life in the past 40 years! Is the system exerting force behind it?

I just want to know that when Goldfinger comes, shit happens one after another. How did the protagonist survive the previous 80 years?

As soon as this book is finished, it will be settled, oh! The protagonist won the MVP! The protagonist, the old man, is working hard to improve his cultivation every day. He is either living a humble life and growing up, or working hard to upgrade and slap the villain in the face. He works hard to survive, and his 80-year-old bones are almost dry and smoking in order to build the foundation. But what about the author? I either sleep or eat every day. I just sit in front of the computer and type words easily. If I want to eat something good, I can order a meal together and it doesn't cost much. Wow, you can win! The author just lies down and wins!

Wow, who allowed this old man to cultivate to immortality? Do you have a qualification certificate for cultivating immortals? You can cultivate immortality 🤫 (pointing)

Why are there so many five-guarantee households cultivating immortals recently? I didn't have a wife before time travel, and I still don't have a wife after time travel. Isn't this time travel in vain?

In ancient writing, there are many flaws in logic. But if you want to advance the plot, you have to meet an unlearned rich second generation or immortal X generation who is 30% contempt and 70% disdain. The experience package of being the protagonist plus a treasure box, after the 100th chapter, the protagonist will meet nine out of ten rich children or sect disciples. They are not good people, and they must be dandy and domineering, and they look down on the protagonist and want to provoke the protagonist. The 82-year-old protagonist has no wisdom in life as an old man. He is just a squatting yin of ancient mortals. If there is a chance, he will kill everyone he sees. It can be seen that the author may simply hate the rich. . .

In fact, I was quite confused when I read the comment section before. This book is about fantasy and not history. Why do people always use real-life situations to compare the situations in the book? 🤔 I have read fantasy, and the protagonist has become an immortal. There are always people under my comments saying that I have never seen the world like the author, and it is impossible to be like this in reality. I was also convinced. I was quietly reading a book and was scolded for no apparent reason. It's uncomfortable 😭, I suggest the author to limit the comments of fans in the comment area.

Chapter 1: I just can't stand it anymore, even if I get a supernatural cure I am 80 years old and have lung disease. What if it is lung cancer? If the lung cancer is punctured with a needle, won't it spread? It will be out of hand... Even if it is pneumonia, if punctured with a needle, won't it also infect more areas? ? ? ?

Hedong in thirty years, Hexi in thirty years. Now is the time when Shuangwen is in power again

The protagonist has only advanced two levels to the third level and needs three kinds of elixirs to upgrade. It is still martial arts. He is crazy about the protagonist. The author has written two books and has not made any progress. It is better to stop writing as soon as possible and find a factory to make screws.

You're such a eunuch, you're so mean, you're such a eunuch, you have to say important things three times, and you have ruined all my reservations.

Just a coward, the more I look at it, the more disgusting it becomes.

When will the author resume updating? Especially looking forward to this novel.