
Infinite Horror: Breeding the Indian Team at the Start
无限恐怖:开局养殖印洲队
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- Infinite Flow
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Using a large amount of reward points to cultivate three human beings is a terrible step. Any enhancement from the Lord God requires a gene lock. Instead of using resources to unlock the second-level gene lock, he creates human beings. No fan has ever done this kind of unnatural operation.
The author is truly amazingly wise
When I saw that after the first dungeon ended, the protagonist exchanged b+6500 for a bunch of real-world knowledge (in order to strengthen the creation of people), the reason was that the quality of the newcomers in the Indian team was low and they wanted to make people as the main force, I couldn't help but admire the author's amazing wisdom. I couldn't stand it, I really couldn't stand it. The protagonist starts with 2b + 14000. If a normal person thinks, he should strengthen the wheelchair first, and then go back to the previous horror movie to gain points. If the quality of newcomers is low, then control the number of people in the team who have unlocked the gene lock. After a few horror movie protagonists take off, change invitation bracelets to invite powerful plot characters to the reincarnation team. Of course this is just the wisdom of ordinary people. Alas, if the protagonist invites powerful plot characters after taking off, how can it be compared to the protagonist spending half of the rewards at the beginning to create rich knowledge for the people? Not comparable, not comparable at all. In order to prevent some gangsters from saying that the main god might be like the Zhongzhou team, they would send a newcomer with a genetic lock similar to Zhao Yingkong to the Indian team, and then forcefully start a team battle. So if the Lord God sends such a super newcomer, will the quality of the Indian team's newcomers be high or low? With such high-quality newcomers, why should the protagonist use creation as the main force? Both ends are blocked.
Skipping the exchange idea directly is a huge failure.
I know the author has already thought about what kind of wheelchair to exchange for, but! I went through the thinking process in a few strokes, inexplicably consuming half of the branch reward points, creating three people in one breath, and poisoning a large number of readers in one breath. Obviously there is a better way to handle this. The protagonist starts with a character who seems to be a little clever. Although he has huge flaws and is full of loopholes, he is good at thinking and analyzing. Returning to the main god space to strengthen the exchange is a very important and exciting point, which can be said to be more important than the plot world, and the protagonist's thinking process can further emphasize the protagonist's personality that he is a little clever and can think and analyze. What is your tendency to strengthen, and what bloodline system do you like? What about the comparative analysis of the advantages and disadvantages of the extraordinary system and the technological system? Why do you want to create three people? What are the benefits? Because your teammates are extremely unreliable and your mental strength seems to be incompatible, are you forced to stand on your own as a team? How to test and analyze the main god's mechanism and exploit loopholes? How to use the mechanism of human creation to quickly improve the strength of human creation? What is the comparison in strength between senior people and newcomers? This is a complete logical chain of character behavior, and you actually skipped it? ! Not only did you skip the most important plot, you also skipped the fun part, and readers will complain about you. This is the time to reflect the excellence of the protagonist through comparison and comparison. Since you met other people during the exchange, why not describe them? If others are surprised and confused and ask questions to the protagonist, or ask the boss to guide him, or feel jealous and hateful, wouldn't it be natural to get slapped in the face later? Come on if you feel better. There is still a chance to make changes before returning to the story world to gain points. Returning to gain points and then strengthening the exchange is another routine. It completely widens the gap with other teammates and becomes alienated. It would even be more reasonable for you to arrange for the creation to appear at this time. But you are just lazy, and you deserve to be criticized.
Author, your arrangement of three creation settings will drive away many readers. The first is that reward points are spent in the early stage, the second is that the qualifications for creating humans are limited and it is difficult to enter the fourth level, and the third is that the prospect of creating humans is only in your imagination. Although it is a book written by you, you can set the intensity of training to create humans in the later stage, but why does the protagonist think so? Isn't this the deus ex machina I'm thinking about?
It's simply unbearable to watch. If you don't strengthen yourself, just create three women. Instead, you can put your emotions into it and try your best to strengthen and create people. With so many points to strengthen yourself, you don't know how strong you are. Spending ten or twenty thousand points on two B-levels is as strong as Zheng Zha who just passed the Resident Evil. He can play with all kinds of tricks and work hard to create miracles.
I also don't like creating people, so I won't look for any excuses and just say that it's not xp for me to be more straightforward about creating people. The characters were originally forcibly added, but they were created according to the author's own private design. The subsequent creation of characters will definitely occupy a lot of the plot. I can't live up to the xp and will not continue reading. Personal suggestion: When writing a story about a main character, don't use your own name. If you have no popularity, no impression, no background, no human rights, it's better to use a popular lover from movies and animations to attract a wave of fans.
If the protagonist plays the game of creating three people on the Zhongzhou team, I will definitely criticize the author, but if he plays on another team, there is basically no big problem. After all, the Zhongzhou team is famous for its high potential, high unlocking, high difficulty, and low rewards. It is basically impossible to play the three-man game and can only be killed as a pig. But it is different in other teams. In the Indian team, one level 2 and one level 1 can play the routine. Other Yubi teams can have three gene locks. Thank God.
Why is this kind of secondary design that overestimates the potential of human creation? Ordinary human creation can unlock the gene lock by injecting some iron blood serum. Then why does the main god have to recruit people everywhere? He can just use human creation. What potential does a human creation with only 500 reward points have? It should be relatively difficult to create a human being to use external force to open the lock.
Why go back? If you don't look at this and blame your breeding, what's the benefit of returning to Central Continent? Breeding is no longer possible
Author, you must carry out breeding to the end! Don't be affected by the comment section. I have read novels for so many years, but there is no book that can still become popular after being modified according to readers' comments. Most of them have been sent. If you want to hook readers, the most important thing is the sense of anticipation. What I'm looking forward to now is breeding, exchanging to become stronger without losing combat power, interacting with the Central Continent team, and defeating Fu Zheng and Fu Chu. Of course, don't restrain yourself when you get to Central Continent. After all, the main god space relies on strength, don't be too used to Zheng Zha and the others Although some people have commented not to go to the Central Continent team, but that is just the survivor bias, and it will take a lot of people to change it. After all, the introduction says about changing teams, so it must be for this reason. If it really stops, the sense of anticipation will be gone, and there will definitely be more scolding. In short, no matter how much you write, you won't be able to satisfy everyone, so just keep writing according to the original settings.
No matter how much you defend or boast, your results will have the final say. You said you "take the initiative" to give up perfect attendance. When the time comes, the first order will not be more than 100, don't say you "take the initiative" to give up the first order result. I have to add your book to my collection to see how your grades are.
After reading it, I am really speechless. Open a harem? Every character who can really write a book has reasonable emotions and sorrows, and the minor characters also have their highlight moments. 3 Women were created. This teammate.
The atmosphere of the main god space is a life and death struggle under the coexistence of opportunities and crises, and the rhythm is one climax followed by the next. The settings of the three human beings here are incomprehensible and incomprehensible, and the Chinese English that you think is humorous destroys the serious atmosphere structure. I think you should pay attention to writing the sense of crisis between life and death, and don't add any unnecessary unnecessary extravagance.
The book only has 90,000 words. I suggest you just tear it down and rewrite it. It's too toxic to create people.
The author must stick to his heart This year I have read eleven new Yuanzu fanfics one after another. Do you know what scares you most about these novels? It's not that I was scolded, but that no one in the book club spoke at all. In other words, everyone just took one look and left without bothering to comment or read. Works that look like an assembly line will never be remembered. It is always a good thing to have a high degree of discussion. Come on, Tietie!
After the wait and see, I really can't write anymore. In my opinion, creating a harem with three people is no different than cutting off one's penis.
Will he transfer back to the Zhongzhou team later? Is it necessary? Just show them your strength and let them go to form a good relationship, right?
When did the protagonist start destroying the Central Continent team?
Both Zheng Zha and Fu Zha hate the breeders extremely. If the protagonist wants to join the Zhongzhou Team, he can only kill all the Zhongzhou Team in a team battle and then find a way to join the team in the second encounter.
I don't know what it means. Why go to the Zhongzhou team. If you are exposed at all, the gorilla may get angry and punch you to death. If you join the breeding team, don't expect to go to the Zhongzhou team. And is there any need to go?
Don't understand and can't accept it
I still can't understand that the rewards are distributed to the created people. It's not that they can't be cultivated, but that you have to match them. There's not enough money. In the early stage, you only have about d of internal energy that you can practice for a few days? Plus Deadpool's D, don't say they didn't spend money on them, didn't the secrets come from money?
The author didn't write anything interesting.
To be honest, I was quite happy when I read the first dungeon. I thought I had found a book of grain and grass, but at the end of the dungeon, the rhythm was completely messed up. I spent a lot of words on introducing the redeemable items and the three creations. I only brushed it off when I returned to earn points, and there was no fun point at all. In particular, there is no description of the protagonist's strengthening and training process and the power obtained through training. Only before entering the blade at the end did he mention what he practiced in one sentence. This cannot be brushed off. You have to express the power of cultivation. This is one of the most important and exciting points. There are also enhanced bloodlines. You only listed the enhanced attributes and then disappeared. You have to describe the power it strengthens, its intensity, its expression method, speed, power, special abilities, and intuitively show it to him in the form of coercion, momentum, external expression, and destructive power, and show it to the readers. This kind of leaping, step-by-step description of improvement is also one of the very important and exciting points of Infinite Flow. Then use these enhancements to increase points and expand the cool points in the form of combat performance, which can push the plot to a small peak. As a result, you should go over it in detail in one stroke, but you can describe it in one stroke. It's a pity that it's a good beginning.
It seems that the plot is completely broken and the author is not even capable of finishing it. It's all over
Wheelchair
Can anyone explain to me what wheelchair means? I can't understand this picture
I feel that the character of the Indian team is not written like Ah San. The Chinese people should be most familiar with Japan, followed by the United States. Indians really don't understand their brains.
All three creations are good. The investment is small and the future is promising. A technology, an ancient martial arts, and a blood clan. The version answer is yes.
Why don't you stop writing? Keep writing. I still want to have fun.
The breeder model is actually pretty good.
The original Zhang Jie's Zhongzhou team started out as a kind of breeding in disguise. The double-A telekinesis power enhancement can actually match the score bonus of Alien Biochemical when teammates pull points. The difficulty is reduced and at the same time, in order to take care of the new master god, the monster's points will be increased. The original breeding team even has two rebirth ankhs, which shows that this mode is quite good in terms of scoring points.
Author, you are planning to open a copy of Fengyun on the post forum, so why not write about some of the powerful figures in Fengyun's world view?
1. The strong ones in this chapter: Nuwa: the master of Bailu (Snow Drinking Sword) and Heihan (peerless sword). The three stars transformed by Yuan Qi are Guan Yu, the martial sage of the Three Kingdoms (creating the light-speed swordsmanship of Alluring Love), and Fengyun II of the Ming Dynasty. Man Amaterasu: The main god of Japan, holding the immortal sword, slashing out the Japanese archipelago with one knife Ji Xuanyuan: It was only mentioned briefly in the storm, but in other works with the same world view, it is mentioned that the emperors of the previous dynasties were his reincarnations 2. The strong men who existed in the Ming Dynasty in the Fengyun World (some are incomplete and need to be completed) 1. Alaya Shishen: The final holy place for warriors in the Fengyun World is the Lord of the Alaya Shishin Temple in India. Only warriors who are powerful to a certain extent can have the opportunity to be invited (no one in the Fengyun era has this qualification, but the first emperor of Japan Jinmu King entered hundreds of years ago). Entering the Alaya Shishin Temple will gain eternal life. The temple is full of immortal warriors (fighting every day) , each one is far stronger than a bastard immortal like Yu Xu Fu), these warriors fight each other, and the strong leave the weak to ashes 2. There is a different god in the cave: the force is extremely high, similar to the djinn and the monkey's paw, As long as it can be found, it will fulfill the finder's wish (including destroying the world and becoming immortal), but those who make the wish will regret it in the end, he is a deceitful guy 🤭 3. The European Rhine Protoss: The tribesman on the cross evolves the closer they get to death. They master the power of Shinto. After dying, 99% of the evolved protoss can kill Satan in one move.
After seeing the beginning of The Terminator, I would like to make a suggestion The author can write more specific and detailed key plots (such as key battles or character interactions), such as the intimidation and inducement of the two Asans as dogs. The description of the battle is not so detailed at present. You can learn from other novels or other hehe In this way, the whole novel will have more ups and downs and avoid becoming an expository account. Of course, it is also very good so far. I just suggest that the author should follow his own wishes.
I recommend the books "Infinite Horror: The Infinite Road of Mortals" and "Infinite Arcade Paradise", which are very good-looking. Although the book has just been published, the content is innovative and creates a new wheelchair enhancement. You can collect it first and then harvest it when it is full.