Samsara Paradise: Is There Something Wrong with You Hunter?

The setting of the book is very good. But the writing made me feel a little confused. Maybe it's because the author's writing style is not very good, it's a bit unsound. The reason why Samsara Paradise is so popular is that it is logically logical, refreshing, and the action scenes are well written. But this fanfic written by the author is not very good. The first-order extraordinary elements should not be so strong. Space, time, and immortality are all out. What to write next? I don't know if the author didn't have a good outline or if he was thinking about it while writing.

It's well written. It's relatively rare for the protagonist to have this kind of personality in paradise fanfics. It's still a new book, and I will keep up with it 😍

The beginning is quite interesting. Has the author thought about the level of the protagonist? Now the fanfic has been stabbed in the back by mosquitoes, and the upper limit of combat power has been locked. Unless Su Xiao is killed, the elements and abyss breakthrough objects of the third era have been taken over by Brother Xiao.

Don't add a heroine, thank you. Obviously what I wrote before is okay, but adding an inexplicable heroine is really poisonous. Moreover, Paradise is a place where the strong are always strong, and the heroine can only hold her back. Since you have written about Paradise, you must be clear that most people are not looking to fall in love with the heroine. Several fanfics were written in the early stage, and the result was that the heroine died immediately after being forced to commit suicide.

This book is probably finished. To be precise, it has already started. My personal writing problems, coupled with the initial idea was too big and false, and there was no detailed outline to limit my thinking, which led to this special situation now. I'm probably just going to look like a perfect attendee, and I'll study the new book later. Please don't waste your money. I hope we can learn from the next book together.

What are your thoughts on the character Qiangwei? I'd like to hear your opinions. Based on your opinions, I will make certain adjustments to the subsequent plot. At present, I have briefly written the outline of two paths (but it is only limited to two worlds. Which ones do you want to enter later?) So I think of you to vote here so that I can make a decision.

Maybe it's because I was a little surprised by my previous description. What I said was to save him, not to involve the heroine, but simply to repay the favor of saving his life. I swear, I will never write about the heroine. If it is because of the heroine, you can rest assured and read on. It's nothing. However, the relationship between the two should be regarded as friends after that. Please read my outline to see if they will enter the same world in the future. At the moment, it is quite uncertain.

It's true that I was a bit dissuaded by Qiangwei, but judging from what I said in the comment section, I might give it another try.

Go low, awesome. Before it was put on the shelves, it was also the first time I saw it. If you want to read it, please read the first three chapters. The writing itself is good, but why in the second world, the character of the protagonist has changed and he is forced to be sane. The plot is, well, how should I put it? Why!

Are you planning to form a duo? If so, it's rare. Like the ruthless brother, they are both hunters. It's just that the heroine needs to be strengthened, otherwise she won't be able to follow.

Ah, no, Qiangwei is really dead and faked. 😐 I finally found a book that looked like a reincarnation paradise with a heroine, but it still didn't work?

Can the punctuation marks be changed? ""! It is always written as ""

The three major elements of fan fiction are: firstly, mastering the power system of the world experienced; secondly, the underlying logic; secondly, constantly embracing all rivers, removing the waste, preserving the old, reforming the past, and improving one's own energy level; thirdly, stepping on the male protagonist instead of cooperating and being a dog. If you can't do these three things, just wait to be criticized. 😏😏

However, if you see any words that are wrong, you can ask readers to correct them directly. If you leave comments, I may not see them. Thank you! ❤️

I will look at today's data on Tuesday and make recommendations on Friday, so I hope everyone can click to the end to read it, even if it skips chapters. Every time someone contributes to follow up, the hope of being recommended will be greater. If this book can be recommended. You can also live longer.

Collect various skills and equipment~~, all kinds will work. Everyone's whims and ideas are welcome. Equipment format: Origin: Quality: Category: Durability: Equipment requirements: Equipment effect: Rating: (Note: The color equipment score is to.) Introduction: Price: Skill format: Origin: Quality: Category: Learning requirements: Effect: Rating: Introduction: Price: Currently, the third world is Kabaneri, but you can write whatever you want to see. If there is a more suitable one, I will change it.

I probably won't be able to update it at 6 o'clock today. Even if it is updated, it will only be one or two chapters. But I should be able to finish it tonight. It's so uncomfortable. I'm stuck.

Is it my imagination? The title of the book has been changed?