Reincarnation Paradise: What's Wrong with You, Hunter?

The beginning is quite interesting. Has the author decided what level the protagonist will reach? Now, fanfiction is being attacked by mosquitoes, and the upper limit of combat power is locked. Unless Su Xiao is killed, Xiao-ge has already taken over the elements and abyss breakthrough items of the Third Era.

Please don't add a female lead, thank you. The story was actually quite good before, but adding a random female lead is really bad. Besides, Paradise is a place where the strong always get stronger; a female lead will only hold you back. If you're writing a Paradise story, you should understand that most people aren't looking for a romance with the female lead. Several fanfics were initially quite good, but adding a female lead completely ruined them.

This book is probably a mess. To be precise, it's already started. My writing style is flawed, and the initial ideas were too grandiose and unrealistic. The lack of a detailed outline limited my thinking, leading to this current predicament. I'll probably just get by with a perfect attendance record. I'll focus on my new book afterward, so please don't waste your money. I hope we can appreciate the next book together.

What are your thoughts on the character of Rose? I'd like to hear your opinions. Based on your feedback, I will make some adjustments to the subsequent plot. Currently, I have briefly written outlines for two paths (but only within two worlds; I'm still considering which others to include later). So I remembered you all are here to cast your votes so I can make a decision.

Perhaps my previous description was a bit surprising. I was just talking about saving him, without any female lead involved. It was purely about repaying a life-saving debt. I swear, I will absolutely not write about a female lead. If it's about the female lead, you can rest assured and continue reading. There's nothing to it. However, their relationship afterward should be considered as friends.

The book's premise is good. However, the writing felt a bit disorganized to me. Perhaps the author's writing style isn't great; it's somewhat disjointed. The reason why *The Cycle of Reincarnation* is so popular is undoubtedly because of its logical coherence, plenty of exciting moments, and well-written action scenes. But this fanfiction by the author isn't so good.

Slow start, impressive. This is the first time I've ever seen something like this before it was even released. If you want to read it, please read the first three chapters after it's released. The writing itself was good, but why did the protagonist's character change in the second world, becoming forced into a rational state? As for the plot, well, how should I put it... Sigh!

I was a bit put off by the rose theme, but judging from the comments, maybe I can give it another shot.

Well written! It's quite rare to see a protagonist with this kind of personality in Paradise fanfiction. And it's a new book, so I'll definitely be following it! 😍

Ah, no, is Rose really dead or just pretending to be dead? 😐 I finally found a reincarnation paradise that seemed to have a female lead, but it still doesn't?