Douluo Peerless: Immortal Dragon Clan

What he wrote was nondescript. He wrote it from the same perspective as the NPC, and I, the author, just brought it for my own enjoyment.

Sissy, seems to be a bit suspected of homosexuality

It's written like an NPC, and the author feels like he's just having fun... Emmmm

Anyone who writes about Douluo fandom is basically crazy. Because from the beginning, I was scolding Tang San and scolding Tang San every day. In the end, in the final comparison, the protagonist was not as good as Tang San. These are just awesome people, can I read the books they wrote?

Author, I think you are the one who is a little bit witty. What does it mean to be killed and the protagonist who does not even give any revenge is so easy to talk to? You just say that the family is strong, but you have no reputation for strength, and you don't fight back when you are killed? In the eyes of others, it means that you are cowardly, and you still have to fight back when appropriate. Otherwise, you always say that this family is very strong, but if the genius is killed and does not fight back, it always feels like it is in vain, so I think it is a bit intellectual.

You can feel that I am writing seriously, not like those routine and water-word essays that are just a running account. But the writing is really not good, and the writing style and expression are poor. I hope I can improve slowly. And try not to write about female characters. It's really okay at the beginning, but it becomes greasy when you write about female characters.

Take my advice and stop writing. It's poisoning me to death. Start pretending at the beginning. How can you pretend so well? Are you born with it, or do you learn it?

Go read the World Modulation book. The gap is huge, both in terms of plot and writing.

The comment section is much better than the book🤣

Sewing the lower parts of these two is the Mo Yan in the book, right?😥