Douluo Peerless: Immortal Dragon Clan

Sewing the lower parts of these two is the Mo Yan in the book, right?😥

What he wrote was nondescript. He wrote it from the same perspective as the NPC, and I, the author, just brought it for my own enjoyment.

Sissy, seems to be a bit suspected of homosexuality

It's written like an NPC, and the author feels like he's just having fun... Emmmm

Anyone who writes about Douluo fandom is basically crazy. Because from the beginning, I was scolding Tang San and scolding Tang San every day. In the end, in the final comparison, the protagonist was not as good as Tang San. These are just awesome people, can I read the books they wrote?

Author, I think you are the one who is a little bit witty. What does it mean to be killed and the protagonist who does not even give any revenge is so easy to talk to? You just say that the family is strong, but you have no reputation for strength, and you don't fight back when you are killed? In the eyes of others, it means that you are cowardly, and you still have to fight back when appropriate. Otherwise, you always say that this family is very strong, but if the genius is killed and does not fight back, it always feels like it is in vain, so I think it is a bit intellectual.

You can feel that I am writing seriously, not like those routine and water-word essays that are just a running account. But the writing is really not good, and the writing style and expression are poor. I hope I can improve slowly. And try not to write about female characters. It's really okay at the beginning, but it becomes greasy when you write about female characters.

Take my advice and stop writing. It's poisoning me to death. Start pretending at the beginning. How can you pretend so well? Are you born with it, or do you learn it?

Go read the World Modulation book. The gap is huge, both in terms of plot and writing.

The Legend of Ochi has been fixed, right?🙂

The comment section is much better than the book🤣

I've read a hundred chapters. Don't you get tired of writing about Shrek, which keeps making jokes and making trouble?

Man-machine? 🤔

Who is the heroine? Single heroine?

The ending is a bit sloppy, but I personally think it's quite nice 🤓

Lazy or not, arrogant or arrogant Title Douluo can be promoted at will. I can't get up even if I fight to the death

11 Monthly passes are given to you

Let me make a summary Just look at 20 pictures, and you will find that this is the most severe feeling of fragmentation in Douluo novels The protagonist's consciousness of the martial spirit has emerged in Chapter 20, but he still does not know the main functions, or the basic functions are not fully introduced - for example, Dou Er's novels first obtain the ice blast soul bone from the auction house, and then have the actual combat scene of ice blast. This novel has the actual combat scene first, and then starts Traceable explanation - and it is not a one-time explanation, but has this tendency many times Also, it is obviously behind the scenes, but the background fabricated by the author wants to give a sense of weakness, not only the weakness of the body, but also the gentleness of the character - let's put it this way, there are many instances of persuasion and self-assertion, and direct evaluation of the protagonist's recklessness - this is the fault of the author (it is obviously domineering at the beginning, and the introduction is also the same, and the result is such a character)

The plot rhythm is extremely fragmented and confusing

Not bad, it sounds pretty good to me 😏