Coiling Dragon, Rotating Magnetic Field

Judging from the mysteries that have appeared in Panlong, the types of mysteries are actually quite clear Basically consistent with the six categories of elements, speed, defense, attack, space, and characteristics Dzogchen has no shortcomings, at least there must be corresponding mystical types to have an amplifying effect

This is very confusing. If I have been cultivating in Panlong for endless years and become the most powerful person and find out that I am just the split soul of a little Karami, I will definitely mix it up when designing cheats for the main wedding, trying to channelize my will or overwrite my memory. It is obvious that I am the main wedding. Jpg

The routine is too repetitive, that is, the main god does not show his strength and pretends to be in a low rank, and then "leaks money" to a beautiful partner or rare thing, attracting others to steal the money, and then kills it directly, and it is written in a repetitive cycle. When I was watching Panlong, I saw that the main god was sitting in a teleportation formation for some reason. Just because he was seen by the garrison troops or the main god was in a bad mood, he would instantly kill thousands of people nearby with just a thought. At that time, I still thought about how low-level this kind of god was. After all, he was a person who relied on the godhead of an external possessor to gain power. The protagonist of this book is written in a very original way, and you can see that he has a little family spirit. He is a majestic god, and it is his pleasure to pretend to be an ordinary person and travel around the world every day. If someone really offends him, he will die. For example, the grandson of the Qinglong Lord God, who made rude remarks and then took action, really deserves to die. But sometimes the protagonist pretends to be small and attracts people, and others are fine and have to be killed even if they investigate their origins. The routines are repeated all the time, and the character design of the protagonist is also very poor. I can't see the charm of the strong. Bullying the weak is a bad game.

I originally thought the protagonist had the ability to use magnetic fields, but later I found out it was a regular ability, which was boring.

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you watch the third watch, the slightest praise begins to sound, and the number of dead harvests begins to decrease. When you watch the fifth update, readers' support spontaneously forms, and the voices of praise become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updating may not solve all difficulties, but more than 90% of the problems come from insufficient updates.

The wife has been forgotten in the corner

It's over, setting up component souls is better than following the old routine, splitting out the component souls, and then the thoughts become stronger. You have more than 400,000 words to form a soul. From the reader's perspective, the protagonist has changed. Difficult to stretch

It's rare to see such a good article written by a Panlong fan. I hope you can keep it up. I'll give it a reward. Cheers, author.

It's too watery. It's too watery to become the Lord God Queen.

Finally, I just want to say one thing, the eunuch has lost his character, you might as well just end it.

There is no motivation to subscribe after updating every day 😴

Wouldn't they still want to train Linley? Linley didn't actually come into Hongmeng's sight before his soul mutated, right?

In other words, the protagonist can use a magnetic field to simulate a radio telescope and observe the cosmic microwave background radiation. In this way, he can read the rules directly, and then he can achieve perfection easily just like the eight holy emperors of the main universe.

These recent pictures are too watery, especially the depiction of that woman

I think Panlong fanfic is considered a good one. The plot setting and logic are good. I like that the author doesn't care about the original plot and doesn't act as a nanny. This is a good thing. Many Panlong fans knelt down and licked Lin Lei to correct the laws of time and space, but the ending of the original novel, Hongmeng, clearly stated that the attached universe was unstable and did not allow those who understood the laws of time and space to exist, which felt particularly awkward after reading it. I hope the author can write different routes of detachment and look forward to your ideas.

In fact, we are tired of seeing the model of refining the main godhead. Can't we find another way to become the main god independently? Before Panlong, they were all independently promoted to the main god, and there were many.

The author should pay attention to his position later on. Lin Lei has a particularly strong sense of belonging to the Four Divine Beasts family. If the protagonist has nothing to do with the Four Divine Beasts family, he can make friends with him. After all, being friends with Lin Lei is really interesting. But the protagonist of this book has a grudge against the four mythical beasts, so I must lick lei. Anyway, although Lin Lei had an empty destiny, he was actually not noticed by Hongmeng before his soul mutated. Before his soul mutated, his achievements were luck and hard work. After the mutation, he had various great opportunities arranged by Hongmeng and pure luck. I have read several novels before, in which the protagonist clearly has a great enmity with the four mythical beasts, but then he still goes to train Lin Lei. Linley has a particularly strong sense of belonging, honor and identity with the Baruch family. When he knows that Baruch is a branch of the Qinglong family, these emotions will be transferred to the Qinglong clan, and he and the protagonist will naturally become enemies.

The main reason why I say those things are useless is because the author wants to make more money. Who would read those things if you look at Panlong coming?

Every time I see the passage of time, I feel that the world of Panlong is really abnormal. It seems that immortality can be achieved in the holy realm. It is really immortal. I never seem to see old age and death in the original novel.

It feels a bit unfinished. Is there any content after Transcendence?

What's the current situation? I couldn't write anymore, so I just cut it?

No more updates? If there are no more updates, the book will be deleted.

I watched Coiling Dragon more than ten years ago. I remember that Lin Lei didn't have the talent for earth, fire, water and wind at the beginning, right? It seems that even if you don't have talent, it won't affect your practice of magic.

There is no content yet, so it has been updated.

It's like this. You have already written two books about the era when the world first opened. I will recommend an era for the next book. Let's see what you think about it. In fact, becoming a main god is not only an option in the early days of the world. You must know that a large number of main gods died when Lin Lei transcended in later generations. With Lin Lei's character, those main gods must have been released into the turbulence of space. After all, his relatives and friends have a broader future and will not stay in the affiliated universe. In other words, the protagonist of the next book can be born after Lin Lei transcended, and after Lin Lei left with all his relatives and friends. Because it is after Lin Lei transcended, there will also be some characters in Panlong's original work, and the author can set these at will. And it is actually very simple to become the main god in this era. After all, at least 20 main gods died at that time, so it is really reasonable to pick up the main godhead.

I think the progress so far is pretty good, but some people think it doesn't look good. The problem is that the protagonist has been upgraded to the God of Creation. How else can you write? As long as the newly opened map can be written well, what can't be read?