Duel King of Hogwarts

I don't know what others think, but the moment I have the blood of the Siren, I feel that the nature of the book has changed, at least now. I thought you would write differently, but it turned out to be an old-fashioned system flow, and a pure child was turned into a selfish adult by you.

The writing is very good, but in the case of transfiguration, if you turn a stone into a lion, where does the soul come from? Does the lion have the memory of growing up? If so, can it be transformed into a political person?

Alas, the bloodline of the siren seems difficult here, and the character change is a bit speechless. Wasn't it written well before chapter 40? You might as well write it as sensing the siren and then directly turning to tears, which is more reliable than your whole job. It's okay to just come up with a cheat when you're already at Chapter 39. God made the little angel protagonist in the early stage turn into a dark character in Chapter 40. In an instant, the conspiracy theory and the system's standard suspicious character character were transformed into a protagonist. I even wonder if someone else started writing chapter 40.

Didn't watch it, but if the first year sortie yelled at Quirinaxillo, Tom Marvolo Riddle, Duel. Then it will be a sure kill.

It's too fragmented. It's too fragmented.

So the souls that came with the system were betrayed by the elves given by the system.

After reading several chapters, do you assume that you can read at the age of 6? Still going to the bookstore to indulge in reading? Comics?

I have never written fan fiction or system literature, and the pace is a bit fast. But from the data point of view, the system has increased since then, but the previous data was very bad. I have basically listened to the feedback from readers, and I have indeed patched the parts that can be modified. I may still have not grasped the rhythm well, and the changes have not been written well. I am very sorry for this. It seems that I am not suitable for writing fan fiction. I will return to my comfort zone in the future. You may have noticed that this is an attempt to change my vest. Since this road does not work, I will withdraw. If I have time in the future, I may slowly finish the story at some time. That's about it. I don't have any bad habits or eunuch habits. I will slowly finish the book in the future, but I don't know when. Finally, I wish everyone a good mood. Just reading a book is just killing time. Why should you take it too seriously?

The change in personality is too strong. Why not use the system to sort out the memories of the previous life so that the protagonist can view the memories of the previous life from a third-party perspective. Just like the Muto game in Yu-Gi-Oh!, He will not change his personality because of the memories of the previous life. At most, it can be said that he has grown. Only in this way can there be growth and a story line. As for the Siren bloodline, you are already in the Yu-Gi-Oh system. It is not a big problem to seal it. In this way, you can also let the protagonist unseal it as he grows up and gradually changes his personality in the story. Wouldn't this make the story more complete and rich? I hope you will consider my suggestion.

When I was in junior high school, I wanted to write about Hogwarts, and I read it more than ten times. So I wrote down all the subjects according to scientific understanding, and brought all the magic into science or a certain function in the computer, and everything would make sense. Charms is like programming, Transfiguration is like PS, Potions is chemistry, Defense Against the Dark Arts is how to build a firewall, and alchemy is machinery