Douluo: Elbowed Ditian at the Beginning

Instead of giving away a daughter, you specifically sent Na'er to the Tang Wulin family for adoption? Funny, this was written specifically to offend people. If you don't join in the plot directly, you won't be so poisonous.

It seems that the Dragon God's stats are not high. Didn't the Dragon God easily kill the prince and the Nine Dragon Kings after they went crazy, and then destroyed them themselves? How come this Dragon God doesn't seem to have Dou Si's world-shattering wisdom?

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Damn it, the snowy field makes me so sleepy. What a conflicting plot😇😇😇

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Author, I feel that the plot of this snowy field is very average and makes people uninteresting. Moreover, the plot here takes up more than 60 chapters, which makes people feel a bit watery.

There are a lot of typos, and they won't be corrected. There are so many poisonous points.

Author: How many thousand words did this book contain? Is it more than 1.5 Million words?

Pretty good, just a little missing

Don't the heroines include Yuan En and Ye Xinglan?

There have been fewer and fewer updates recently, and the writing is also not satisfactory. Let's finish this quickly and start a new picture.

Fuck, um, send out the manuscript, next one

Hehe, I'm back. Although the author definitely doesn't remember me, I'm still looking forward to the author's next book. Come on, author 😆

{"NickName":"It's not the toothfish that eats fish","UserId":393524448} A very good Legend of the Dragon King fanfic. It has been completed. It is worth reading. It is of great reference value for writing about the three fighting fanfics, especially the plots of Shrek and Tangmen, the later development of power and the fight against the Great God Circle (Don't read this book, don't read it, don't read it, just read the chapter "Statement 2". See the way to read the sequel, the chapter "Statement 2" is available, just read the sequel)

After watching it, the emotional scenes between Xiao Yan and Gu Yue are of high quality, and they did not adopt the harem without thinking. Especially Gu Yue did not split into Na'er. The praise started, and it started to be watered down in the later period Personal evaluation: 4.5 Points for the first half and 2.5 Points for the second half.

The writing is obviously very good, but not as many people read it as the other doujins. The quality is very high among Dousan doujins. There are very few female protagonists in the harem who make me feel very comfortable with their relationship There is no unilateral accommodation of the female protagonist

Isn't this book just about done? It's time to think about the plot and make it more enjoyable for the next book. You still have to make money to write a book. People have read The Mouse Eunuch Next Door five or six times and it has been successful. The author should work harder and don't stick to this book.