People Are Being Devoured, Late Bloomers

At first, I thought that the protagonist was an ordinary realm lord, so he had not yet broken through immortality when the time limit was approaching. But you told me that you have such a luxurious configuration, the lord of the secret realm of the beginning of the virtual universe, ten times the genes, an ordinary and close to the top secret method perception, the apprentice of the universe overlord, and having two clones, and then you can't break through immortality, just because of the original core of your inner world that is 2 million kilometers in size? ? ? Nor did he write about doing anything outrageous or harmful, or that he insisted on clinging to the Realm Master's perception of space or time to a very deep level. It's like a rich second generation with a normal mind. His family gave him millions of entrepreneurial funds and asked him to go out and earn 100,000 yuan, but he didn't earn it until his death.

No? What is going on? I search the keywords "Swallow" or "Swallow the Starry Sky" almost every day to see if there are any new Devour fan seedlings, but even so, why did I still miss this book? It would be fine if the book had just been released a day or two ago, but this book has been released for so many days. Why did I just find it now? Was it because the system blocked me when I was looking for books? 😰😰

The writing is okay, but there are some mistakes in the setting. Has the author forgotten the original content after reading it for too long?

I didn't read it, but I read the introduction and entered the company and didn't break through the deadline. It's outrageous. You've already entered the company and your understanding is fine. But the deadline is approaching and you haven't broken through. I don't understand. You're a late bloomer. You can just start over again. It's a waste of good qualifications.

Genius Battle The genius who entered the secret realm of the beginning of the virtual universe has a special life clone, his own genetic level has also been improved, and he is worshiped by his master ancestor. You are a proper genius character, but you are almost old and dead and you can't break through immortality 😅

After seeing Chapter 24, he ran to Earth to bring Luo Feng to the universe and made him his disciple, Giant Poison. In the early stage, I set up the second branch of the lower law, the law of wood, and the power of annihilation. Although I don't like it, I reluctantly accept it. Then he created a garbage clone. Although the clone has the devouring feature, this clone is too garbage. Then there is the setting of the immortal combat power of the world lord, which is already deviated from the original work. I suspect that the author did not review it. If the original work party cannot accept it, it is estimated that the animation party can accept it.

Extremely poisonous, the Realm Master understands the way of life, and the immortal demon race on the opposite side can still see it? The author should at least read the original work before writing it.

The burning power increased a thousand times, can you forget this? You even exaggerate it by 100 times and write it by ten times. Who are you kidding?

I don't recommend watching the original work, believe me you will feel uncomfortable

I think it's a bit outrageous that people in the Taichu Secret Realm can't break through immortality.

He dares to write about a protagonist who understands the laws of life. Although I think it is sick, he is worried about it. Just write whatever you want! I endured it, but the immortal enemy of the demon clan saw it. It was really a big poisonous thing. I took that guy Ziyue out and asked him if he knew the law of life.

Wouldn't lifespan also increase if genes increase it? The number of genes has increased 100 times. Doesn't the life span also increase 100 times?

I don't understand why Devouring fans always like to lick Luo Feng. Although Luo Feng will be awesome in the future and will repay his kindness, you can't continue to lick him after you can't practice anymore. In urban novels, I don't see anyone licking Ma Yun or Ma Huateng as soon as they time travel. Don't they try to see if they can replace them first?

I don't recommend that golfers read it. The author of this book has never read the original work Swallowing the Stars. The setting is too different from the original work.

There are too many setting problems. I suggest you re-read the original work.

I suggest you read the original work again, thank you

I won't say too much about the issue of combat power setting, as many people have said it before. I spent a lot of time describing Luo Feng later, don't you think it's a bit of a root cause? Who is the protagonist...

Even though the protagonist's genes are 10 times greater, his lifespan is only that of an ordinary world lord. The setting of the original work has been changed.

What I originally thought was that the secret method of clones plus some opportunities would make the protagonist's shackles higher than ordinary ones to break through immortality, which means top secret skills are needed. Then the protagonist's understanding talent is not very good, only about ten thousand epochs at most, so he has never been able to break through. But seeing what everyone is saying, I also feel that I really haven't thought about this aspect well, but it has already been written and it's not easy to change it, so I decided to speed up the progress and try to be as close to the original plot as possible. This is my first time writing a book. It's really not perfect, I'm sorry. The update time is always in the afternoon or evening.

Does this feel like writing a fanfic after watching anime? It's so confusing

Wind, thunder and light all correspond to the law of time. What the hell is the God of Thunder practicing the way of thunder and sky? Could it be that Thor is a reincarnation-level genius like the original ancestor?

Huang Jian went back in time and space and found that the Mountain Rider was not right, because the original Chaos didn't find the Mountain Rider until he went to the Giant Axe. It should be the words of the strongest person that affect the time and space of the Lord of the Universe.

The original work clearly states that immortals cannot break through the 21st floor of Tongtian Bridge! The complete law of space cannot be compared with the three mysteries! There are also dozens of top-level treasure points! What the hell! Ordinary treasures range from 0.8 To 8 treasure points! Read more of the original work before writing a fanfic!

I just said that the author wrote a good story. The original version of Phantom King is on the 19th floor of the Tongtian Bridge. Because he is a master of soul illusion, he is equivalent to the peak of becoming a king. The author once again wrote the Phantom King as an invincible king!

This is a mistake that 60% of fans will make! That means the Lord of Virtual Gold is the disciple of Giant Axe! The Lord of Virtual Gold is just the leader of the Giant Ax Arena! Not a giant axe disciple!

Soul defense relies too much on fate, so if you have a soul treasure, it's better to match it. Wouldn't it be good to have one more guardian? Do you also need to practice the secret technique of soul defense? Otherwise the soul is your greatest weakness

Before it was put on the shelves, the author had read Devouring Starry Sky more than ten years ago, and many settings were wrong. Maybe he had read a few Devouring Stars fanfics in recent years. Many plot settings in this book are quite good, but the divine body is the volume, not the area. Also, the third layer of the secret pattern of the Arcana Armor is weakened to one ten thousandth, and the second layer is weakened to one thousandth. It's not the so-called 90% reduction.

In fact, considering the protagonist's worries, what if his character and fighting are no longer good after endless years? The talent and understanding are just gone. What Luo Feng brings can be said to be an investment, but it is really not that high, judging from the protagonist's worries. The fact that Luo Feng is a disciple again does not bring any highlights to the plot. It is more of a feeling of accepting for the sake of acceptance. If the author uses the apprenticeship to construct an interesting life story, or to cause events that are hugely different from the original work (such as Luo Feng's wide opening of the harem 😰) and other fun. All in all, this kind of plot that is closed for the sake of closing is not only unsatisfactory, but also falls into the public opinion of licking Luo Feng. This is the only failure in the plot in my opinion. The others are average to above average.

The difference between the masters of the universe at each level is not very big, but the difference between the strongest ones from level 6 to level 7 is a hundred times, and the level from level 7 to level 8 is also a hundred times. This is clearly stated in the original work. The gap between the masters of the universe is said to be ten times or a hundred times. Some say dozens of times.

The plot develops too slowly and it's not good to watch, but you're developing it too fast and it doesn't feel good to watch either.