Beifu Jiangshan

I decided to book Lao Yu's book without reading it. After finishing the book, Beifu Jiangshan disappointed me.

It's so unbelievable that a figure in history is called Liu Daogui, also known as Daoze. A bunch of people in the book reviews are crazy about saying that the name and words are wrong, and they are crazy about showing off their second-hand knowledge. You changed someone else's real name in history, how shameless are you?

Brothers eventually become brothers and this is the tradition of our Emperor Song Dynasty

After watching (my father Liu Jinu), I almost got angry. I hope my brother Liu Jinu can shine. Excellent books about Liu Yu are too scarce.

There is a problem with this book. Since it is not time travel, it is just a dream about modern times. Apart from the change in language, a few new words came out, and there is no change in technology. Farming and fighting are still the original conditions. . So the question is, what is the significance of this book?

This book is more sincere about Liu Yu. After all, Liu Yu's Northern Expedition was able to unify China, and he was the founding emperor of a Han orthodox country. The northern regimes in the Sui and Tang Dynasties may not be pure enough.

Otherwise, just write about Liu Yu, or write about Liu Yu's son. There's no point in writing about his younger brother.

Isn't the protagonist also a time traveler? The writing is very strange, while talking about a dream that hints at being a semi-aboriginal person, the writing is like a pure aboriginal feeling, and sometimes I suddenly feel inexplicable emotions. .

The territory is so big, why hasn't a government been established yet? Why don't the princes of the world regard it as the protagonist? It also does not write about civil affairs, economics, bureaucracy, taxation and diplomacy. Although it is under the Jin Dynasty, it is actually divided into one party. It can be said that it is a princes and warlords, but they do not have an independent team. It is very dangerous. No wonder no literati have defected to it, but the barbarians have the help of nobles. Because the protagonist has not publicized his political goals to the outside world, nor does he write about politics. It just feels unreliable and out of place.

The author's book has such poor results, except for the biggest poisonous point in the beginning of the historical area where the protagonist is semi-aboriginal. The bigger reason is that the literary youth is suffering from a disease, and he has been stubborn not to change the opening setting, which can be changed with just a few words, and even continues to confront the readers, deliberately further weakening the protagonist's highlight scenes and sense of existence. As a result, readers lose any sense of immersion and expectation after reading this book. It's like reading a history textbook that is emotionless and refreshing. I yawned after reading a few chapters. I've seen it recommended several times, and the writing is there, but I couldn't get enough of it after trying it several times. The protagonist doesn't look like a protagonist, but more like a supporting character.

The protagonist in the late Eastern Jin Dynasty is undoubtedly Liu Yu. The whole drama is focused on Liu Yu. It is difficult for you to write a good protagonist. Either follow Liu Xiu's script and let Liu Yu retire at a certain time; or follow Sima Zhao's script and let Liu Yu not have a son, but that's not good either; at worst, the iron-blooded Song Dynasty is orthodox in the Southern Dynasties, which would be too ugly.

To be honest, in this era, it is unrealistic to expect that the Han will completely destroy the Hu. We have to use the Hu to control the Hu. We will train some of the Hu people who are not very strong in combat effectiveness. We will also train some of the elite Han troops. The Hu troops will march and the Han troops will harvest.

You can learn from the long sword of the late Jin Dynasty. I don't like to see you investigating and solving crimes here.

There is a question, is the protagonist Liu Yu or Liu Daogui? This protagonist has no sense of existence at all. He is not good at reading, has no martial arts, and has an outstanding personality. His personality is even less outstanding. The natives who devour the time-travelers have no memory of future generations.

The pig-footed, flying, and dog-eating pigs described by the author are not much different from those second-generation people. They just have more historical knowledge, but the things they do are no different from those second-generation people.

The portrayal of the protagonist is not very good. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I couldn't figure out who the protagonist was without paying attention.

After watching it for a long time, I didn't realize that the protagonist was Liu Daogui. There were too few scenes, and he was like a salted fish.

In the author's setting, what is the extent of Pig's Foot's time-travel memory? Huang Liang's life is as complete as a dream? Familiar with history? Horse racing? If it is just a short dream, how much impact can it have on Pigfoot's personality, abilities, and cognition? How much impact does it have on history? Looking at the previous chapters, it seems that the time-travel experience does not exist at all, which is very confusing.

It's inexplicable to write about a heavenly master and a moral woman.

If Liu Yu is really written off to death, it would be difficult for the protagonist to unify him alone. The Northern Wei Dynasty was on the rise, and there were wise kings. Liu Yu's descendants are too abstract. If the protagonist does not take over, the Liu Song Dynasty will be unstable. Choosing Liu Yu's younger brother as the protagonist to start is very contradictory, and it is a bit self-inflicted.

If the protagonist becomes emperor, what should the title of the country be? The Song is because Pengcheng was the territory of the Song State in the Spring and Autumn Period. The Han term is not suitable. Firstly, because he is not a descendant of Liu Bang, and secondly, Liu Yuan has already done it once. In the Chu term, Huanxuan was first, and the other Huaisi princes in the Spring and Autumn Period were all small states. If the surname Liu comes from the origin, it is either Xia or Zhou. Fortunately, Helian Bobo has not yet founded the country, so Xia can still be used. If he occupies the Central Plains, he can also be called Zhou. Are there any other principles?

Don't be discouraged if your grades are not good. It's great to fight for Wei and Gou to prosper in Tang Dynasty.

Start a new book soon. The protagonist will be Li Dingguo, who fought against the Qing Dynasty and destroyed the Ming Dynasty.

Open new books soon, I'll order them all.

If Laoyu doesn't write a book, I won't even be able to use my initial coins.

This author has written about Struggle for Wei, Heng Dao Sixteen Kingdoms, Record of Madmen in the Late Tang Dynasty, and the current one. He is a bit unwilling to listen to advice. Many readers have given good suggestions.

Start a new book soon. If you don't write a book, I won't even bother to post the starting point.

It's been two months, and I'm starting a new book! ! !

Why haven't you opened a new book yet, old fish?

Disgusting readers, they deserve to die and be eliminated by the times.