Something's Wrong with Me

I read a few copies, and the first two were okay, and there was nothing wrong with them. Novice, growth copy, it doesn't matter if you don't spend a lot of pen and ink. I read a few more copies and found that the problem was still the same. I could skip it to the end if I skipped it, just like a running account. The dungeon mechanism, background, and story line are not very systematic. It is not satisfying to watch it at once, but it will be unsatisfactory to watch it after a few hours.

I feel like there are some problems with your settings and writing methods. First, I am the only one who can do it. This doesn't make sense. The protagonist alone has extraordinary abilities, but no one else does. What's the point? See how the protagonist bullies ordinary people like he bullies babies? It is better to add a background of spiritual energy recovery or a secret extraordinary background, so that the real-life plot will be interesting. If it is more exciting, the protagonist can hide his strength or make rapid progress in the adventure world. If that doesn't work, you can delete the real-life plot and directly let the protagonist travel between different adventure worlds, and then you can only To keep the memory, you have to go through every world, so that it is not easy to lose the combat power Secondly, seeing the first official world, there are also some problems with the choice of three resurrections and once a year. At the beginning of your novel, the protagonists died consecutively. I thought you were going for a fast-paced dungeon, but in the end you were directly "reincarnated" here? Since resurrection is not used to choose different enhancements to solve problems, what is the significance of your number of resurrections? Third, is the initial world useful? The protagonist has not received any strengthening, and there is no change in terms of strength or mood. The content before your first official world can even be expressed in one chapter. Moreover, the pace of the initial world is so fast, and you die several times in the beginning. Then your first official world is slow-paced? What kind of literacy do you want? Are both acceptable? Have you ever thought about giving up on reading and writing if you can't accept them all? Fourth, the enhancement options you gave seemed to give choices, but the results were all single choices. Isn't this a bit unclear? Regarding the protagonist's baby start, you also mentioned that the protagonist's survival probability is only 2%. Isn't this a single choice? Also, your enhancements are random, which is a drawback. Could it be that if the protagonist doesn't find an adopter randomly at this time, he will die directly? So the 2% probability of being resurrected three times is nothing? Maybe you didn't think so much when you wrote it, but isn't this too deliberate? Fifth, I saw some people saying that they committed the crime of literary youth after the testimonials were put on the shelves. To be honest, the literary youth is not a problem. After all, some people like to watch this, and it can also play a role in screening literacy. But why did you commit the crime after it was put on the shelves? Didn't you offend both the literate and the uneducated?

Personally, I think it was after reality came into contact with the official, and the description of reality began to be written down. I no longer had the immersive feeling of the plot before, and I could only find immersion in the new dungeon. Later, I could return to any level after clearing the level, and the dungeon also began to become formulaic...

Read it, found it boring, didn't like it.

Except for the numerical settings of this book, which are a bit too realistic but not correct. Although it was patched later when it was put on the shelves, most readers before it was put on the shelves stopped reading it after seeing this problem. The writing is actually good. If the previous numerical settings can be changed, it should be more popular.

There are several worlds that are quite interesting to write about, but it feels like reality has collapsed.

With support

1. The writing was average at the beginning, and some settings were not very good and I was discouraged (some patches were made later), but after reading it, you can feel that the author is making progress, and the author is quite willing to listen to advice. 2. The author's portrayal of the protagonist's growth is pretty good. It can be seen that there is some mental growth after each copy, unlike some novels where the protagonist has no progress at all. 3. This book feels very bland after reading it, but I still like this kind of bland growth novel 4. It may be because there is not too much description of the copy, and each copy seems to be very short. You can try to arrange more dungeon tasks to make the protagonist less idle.

When you update the essence, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

I don't know why the author likes traditional martial arts. The most it can do is to strengthen the body. Actual combat is really average. Of course, it is no problem to beat ordinary people, but if you exercise, you can also beat ordinary people! But if you want to compare with those who box, fight, or fight, it won't work. If you want to refute me, then walking two steps on the stage is better than anything else. What kind of killing skills are all nonsense. Which of the ones I mentioned cannot be a killing skill? In the final analysis, it is just to hit the vulnerable parts of people's bodies. Don't say that I look down on traditional martial arts. A civilization with a long history is useless in today's arena. Others laugh at the showmanship. In the past, I naively thought that traditional martial arts was very powerful. I thought that the arena has various rules that are not suitable for traditional martial arts. Then because of self-cultivation and various reasons

1 Physique is equal to ten kilograms of strength. This setting is too weird.

The setting is very problematic. One point of physical fitness equals 10 pounds of strength? I have no desire to continue watching, and the routine is very cliche.

There are always some people who hold the theory of ancient people, as if the ancients, especially the martial arts champions, are about to ascend to heaven and earth. For example, when it comes to martial arts, many people say that many people were killed in competitions before, so beating someone to death is enough? Random punches can kill people! If Chuan Wu is so powerful, why don't the troops just learn Chuan Wu?

This is the first time in a novel that I can see such a low level of transcendence, and the influence in the real world can be so great. In more than a dozen worlds, the protagonist has been able to kill with one shot, and the strongest explosive power is 1~2 tons The result is that the influence in the real world is simply terrifying. What kind of pioneer of civilization, the incarnation of God, with such little combat power is still foreshadowing the plot of a saint. It is so funny to watch. And the pressure on the protagonist is really heavy. It has a million words, and the plot is at least halfway advanced, but it seems that it does not have the combat power of the immortal system and the Qi training realm. It is too ridiculous to slow down and become like this. . .

Well, it's not interesting to see the only way to do it, and only those who read a small amount of online articles will like to read it.

What's wrong, that's all? If you don't write anymore, I'll run and write.

Let's add some women. We won't talk about the harem love line. This can be omitted. But is your book a man's world? . Not a woman was seen.

When I saw that my physique was three times that of a normal person but only weighed 270 pounds, I gave it up decisively when I noticed that it was the explosive power of a pound. I no longer had any interest in writing anything else.

Halfway through, I can feel that the protagonist is very tired. The author is the landlord, and the protagonist is the cow and horse. He is constantly looking for things for the protagonist to do.

After reading more than thirty chapters, I started to get tired of it. I kept writing small copies of the main character to practice martial arts. What is the purpose of practicing martial arts?

The author is a bit of a literary person, but I don't think being a literary person is a problem, as long as you don't forget to promote the plot. But unfortunately, the author likes to occupy most of the space with his own life insights as he goes to the end. What is even more regrettable is that the real-world plot written by the author is one of the best, and I mean the best in the world.

I see many brothers saying that Chuanwu is useless. I think from several aspects, first of all, the loss of Chinese Chuanwu is very serious, especially the killing moves, internal training methods, etc., And these things cannot be practiced by giving a secret book. Many of the core of Chinese Chuanwu inheritance are passed down by word of mouth... The Chinese Chuanwu internally practices Qigong breathing methods, and the external training of killer moves requires a lot of time and money. (Nutrition, medication, finding someone to practice combat and feeding the moves). Under this premise, many modern people can neither meet the above conditions nor spend the time and energy to patiently practice Chinese martial arts. Secondly, why do modern people think fighting is stronger? Modern fighting is all practical moves, which are easy to get started and form a certain combat effectiveness. There are not as many cumbersome things as Chinese martial arts. Finally, if you guys think that the Chinese Chuanwu is useless, then I would like to say that the powerful generals in ancient dynasties and the figures with legendary combat experience all practiced Chinese Chuanwu. To give a more recent example, during the Republic of China, the army hired Chuanwu masters to create simple and easy-to-learn murderous martial arts to teach the army, so don't think that the Chinese Chuanwu is useless.

Why would the author think that readers would like to watch you crazy about superimposing new worlds? You are totally wrong. After experiencing the intrigues and killings in a world, what you should do is arrange for the protagonist to experience money, power, and beauty in the real world, and have a great time. Otherwise, new worlds will be superimposed crazily, mission after mission, and what's the point of the protagonist's life? He'll just commit suicide.

It's not cool enough. Every time I get to the cool spot, I just mention it 🥵. And the villains are all little gangsters and thieves. It's automatically refreshed.

I have tried this book several times, but every time I fell in the first chapter. 1 Point of constitution and 10 pounds of strength, I just couldn't bear it. This time I was too bored and I read this book. After reading three chapters, I still couldn't bear it. As expected, this book has no chance for me 🙂

Advantages: The rhythm is okay, the description of the scenes and characters is simple and effective, the plot is satisfactory but not dull Disadvantages: There are specific values, but the values ​​are sparse, and the complaints of many book friends have not changed. I personally think it greatly affects the perception. Written in the book: The protagonist is already a little superman and a master of Chinese martial arts, but he can only hit 700 pounds with one punch at a speed of 5 meters. Note, it's 'jin'.

If you are given a golden finger and have restrictions, then it is garbage. . .

When I read this novel, I felt tired, very tired and heartbroken. It can be said that it was not exciting at all. The protagonist is just a machine. We watched the machine run and felt tired.

To sum up the whole book in a few words, it's a copy every 7 days. Keep brushing and then feedback to the real world. Achieve a strong body, a martial arts master, and be invincible in the world. Then what? First of all, the description of the real world is too short, almost half a chapter is over. The full text is in the copy below. Too fragmented. Secondly, the whole text uses "Martial Arts" as the main line to connect all copies, which is too simplistic. For example, we have lived through ancient times for decades. Can you practice awesome calligraphy? Learn to play piano, chess, calligraphy and painting. Then go back to the real world and pretend to be big? In fact, this kind of infinite time-travel flow. There are many ways to do it, and it doesn't necessarily have to be this monotonous upgrade routine. Can you bring some emotion? Can't we do something commercially popular? Or is it not okay to travel to the future and make technology popular? Too many. Finally, I am worried about a problem. Every seven days, the protagonist lives in a copy of his soul for decades. It is estimated that within a few years, after hundreds of reincarnations, the protagonist will become a madman. Hahaha.

In fact, I have always been curious about why unlimited streaming has not become popular? Yes, compared to other genres, Infinite Streaming is inherently weaker in film and television adaptation. But these are things that only top authors will consider, and the main force for the prosperity of a genre should rely on countless ordinary authors. Now I understand, the answer is actually very simple. The audiences for many themes are not mutually exclusive. Take this book for example. I like killing and killing in the apocalypse, but the more I read this awkward ancient martial arts, the more I feel tired. What's even worse is that infinite streaming lacks many things compared to single genre. For example, although I don't really like the ancient martial arts genre, the best in this genre can keep me entertained. For example, there is an author who organically combines ancient martial arts with love, and while the article is humorous, he creates many characters that impress me deeply. The motivation for me to continue reading that novel is not the worldview of ancient martial arts, but the vivid people who interpret their splendor in their world. For example, one author combined Jianghu and cyberspace. In this novel, the so-called Jianghu is just the black gloves of global companies, but this novel really writes the flavor of Jianghu. It's just that the foundation of this coveted world is the gangster's routine. The strong contrast makes me feel complicated. Look, subjectively I don't like the genre of Gu Wu, but in fact, whether I am willing to pay for a novel actually has nothing to do with the genre. But due to the limitations of unlimited flow, these schools (such as ancient martial arts) can only be shaped into stereotypes. #### 1. The original sin of Infinite Stream: the paradox of structure and humanization ##### 1. **The cognitive cost of fragmentation of time and space** The essence of Infinite Stream is a "worldview FMCG", and readers need to rebuild their cognitive framework every 30 chapters: - "Infinite Horror" Resident Evil Copy: Readers need to understand the T-Virus/Umbrella Company - The next copy cuts to "Harry Potter": the magic system needs to be loaded again - It is similar to forcing the audience to watch different dramas every episode, and the emotional accumulation is constantly cleared ##### 2. **The sense of fragmentation in character growth** - Traditional coming-of-age novel: the character's experiences are superimposed like tree rings (the alien fire collection in "Break the Sphere" is a concrete growth) - Infinite Flow Dilemma: The protagonist has an epiphany in the Immortal Cultivation dungeon, turns around and turns back to a tech novice in the Sci-Fi dungeon, forming a "Cognitive Rubber Man" ##### 3. **Exhilarating Inflation** - Obtained the Laser Sword in the 1st dungeon: Amazing - Obtained the Star Destroyer: Numbness in the 5th dungeon - Destroyed the universe in the 10th dungeon: Void - Data support: The average number of orders for unlimited streaming works on a certain site decreases exponentially with the number of copies ---