Something’s a Little Off About Me

When you update once, minor flaws are magnified, and the immaturity of your writing is criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot's progress is given more attention. When you update three times, small praises begin to emerge, and the number of unread readers starts to decrease.

I don't know why the author likes traditional martial arts. At best, it's good for fitness; its practical combat effectiveness is quite poor. Of course, it's fine against an average person, but that's fine for general fitness too! But it's no match for boxing, Sanda, or other combat sports.

One unit of physique equals ten kilograms of strength—that's a really weird concept.

The premise is fundamentally flawed; does a little bit of physical strength equal 10 pounds of strength? I have no desire to continue watching, and the plot is incredibly clichéd.

There are always some people who cling to the idea of ​​"relying on the ancients," as if the ancients, especially martial arts champions, were almost otherworldly. For example, with traditional martial arts, many people say that many people died in competitions in the past. Does killing people make someone powerful? Even random punches can kill people! If traditional martial arts were really that powerful, why don't the military just learn them directly?

This is the first time I've seen such a low level of superhuman ability in a novel, yet with such a significant impact in the real world. Even after more than a dozen worlds, the protagonist is still someone who can be killed with a single shot, and his strongest burst of power is only 1-2 tons. The result is that their influence in the real world is terrifying.

Uh, I get bored when I see "I am the only one who believes in the law," and only those online novels with low readership are popular.

What's wrong? Is that all? If you don't write more, I'm going to go write some myself.

Add some women, I'm not talking about harems or romance, that's fine without them. But is your book all about men? Not a single woman is in it.

Upon seeing someone with three times the physique of a normal person but only weighing 270 pounds (note: pound) in explosive power, I decisively abandoned the idea; I had no interest in writing anything after that.