Peerless: Tang San, Huo Yuhao Is the Attacker This Time

According to the character of Dai Yuhao in the original work, as long as he was not soul-pierced by the time traveler, Dai Yuhao would happily be Tang San's dog again.

Please, please stop cutting it. With your rigor and attention to settings, you shouldn't cut it. I think the copy of Huo Yuhao's Darkened Personality is okay. The relationship between the soul guide level and price is more reasonable. So why did you discontinue that copy? Forget it, let's forget everything in the past. I beg you to read a book called "The Ending of Flowers"😭

Ma Xiaotao, if you want to accept it, just rewrite it before the disgusting thing happens. Just rewrite it so that it doesn't happen. Why bother to wash it off if it happens? If you insist on accepting it, just accept it and treat it like a dog. There are already cheats. Try to design a plot and use the cheating finger to give controllable people. Just treat yourself like a dog. It's not much better than your forced treatment.

I want to tell Ma Xiaotao directly, but I spent a whole page on that debate. Are you smart, the author?

Taozi's explanation is superfluous, and there is no need to write a separate chapter to talk about it. The original Taozi attack almost killed Lao Huo. If he didn't show his value, he would be a waste of paper on the roadside. That is why Lao Huo carried it as the son of luck and showed his value and gained Taozi's favor and protection. Although it was of no great use, this sister became the spiritual sustenance of the original Huo except Dong in the early stage, and she was also willing to rescue the captured Taozi later. If there is a quota, the original Huo will definitely take it, so Tao Zi's black spot is there, the original Huo understands and has feelings. Taozi's behavior itself means that he likes it, and it's normal to dislike him. After all, it is conceivable that Taozi has probably attacked ordinary students before. In the final analysis, it comes down to perspective. If you want to harvest peaches, avoid this part, mention it less or make slight modifications, instead of listing the three sins and whitewashing them in the novel, which is superfluous. This is the shortcoming of a native Huo who knows energy.

Unlike Time Traveler, the writing of Su Hui is very vague. It feels like a native knows the plot.

Wrong! Children, run quickly, click on the author to see the results, it's a eunuch

Halfway through the movie, I felt like a hidden poison that was overpowering the combat was about to break out... With the two ultimate plug-ins, the ice entry and the spiritual entry, it stands to reason that one soul blast can knock down any soul master, and it would not be a problem to knock down Dai Huabin in three or two close combats. As a result, the chaos took a long time just to get in. Later came a super heaven-defying gauntlet with a movement speed of +30% (it can also evolve, which is comparable to the Xing Zi Jue, and the increase in soul guide thruster level eight to nine). As a result, the narration commented that with this skill and Ning Tian's assistance, leapfrog combat is as easy as eating and drinking water. The problem is that you have already eaten and drank water in the original entry. Coupled with this movement speed and extreme attribute suppression, you have to eat and drink water after two levels of combat. In addition, there is also a description of "Although he is a great soul master, because the Ice Jade Emperor Scorpion is strong, the total soul power is close to that of Wu Feng". I find it so strange. A hundred thousand year soul ring, a hundred thousand year soul bone, eating, drinking and sleeping are the best. The soul power reserve has been on par with Wu Feng for a long time. Isn't it a bit too much?

It's a headache to watch. It was originally just a hang-up, but now it's a hang-up, and Shrek is still there to fight. Now even if you go to the Noumenon Sect, or marry into any empire, it will be much more convenient than obtaining resources at this stage. Who should brush the entries or not? What? Are there no other plot characters in this world besides Shrek? Torture Three doesn't necessarily have to be played this way.

Advantages: The plug-in has some characteristics, and it is not too brainless. The characters are not deliberately smeared. In short, the writing is still a bit clever, unlike some Douluo fans who write it as if they are completely brainless Disadvantages: There are some problems with the character's stance, at least in my opinion. Chapters 23 and 24 are a bit reasonable for Ma Xiaotao's problem. , Other characters also have similar problems Note: The reason why I say this is because the author's representative point of view completely abandons his own sense of substitution. It is like the victim completely abandoning his position and taking the perpetrator's ideological direction. It feels like the protagonist has completely taken away the body, and the impact of abandoning the original owner is the same To put it simply, if you can't accept this, it is not recommended to read it.

Regarding Ma Xiaotao, there is too much explanation. In fact, there is no need to define good or bad, just develop the plot directly. Too much explanation will cause some readers to dislike it.

Is there a female protagonist? Can I have Xiao Xiao? I haven't seen anyone take Xiao Xiao yet.

No one read Xu Sanshi's book, so he changed it to Huo Yuhao again

There won't be Wang Dong as the heroine. Since she wants to rebel against the Tang Dynasty, she will do so to the end. After all, he is a half-finished product with a broken soul, and it is not worth pushing himself into a pit of fire.

It is very important to follow up on the new book issue. If you don't follow up on it, you won't be able to sign the contract, so readers please read until the end of the last chapter, don't keep reading, please beg org

To be honest, I don't dare to read the author's books. You can still read the previous one, but it's a mess 🙂

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Ma Xiaotao burns Yan Shaozhe? Writing about Shaozhe, it's almost enough to destroy relatives for justice.

This Huo is written like a time-traveling Huo (it seems that the author kicked the sentence "Awakening Su Hui" earlier) rather than the original Huo

Please read more, I feel like I will be exhausted if I try to save a monthly pass with your novel.

A very good novel. I hope the author can keep writing. It is much better than those novels.