The Story of Minglan: Striving in the Guangling Marquis's Estate

This is a genius who revised the history of fictional historical house fighting dramas. It is well written, but you need to get through the first 40 or 50 chapters. It is a super slow-burn type.

I hope the author won't create any original heroine, I just like Hua Lan

Damn, I don't even know what I'm writing. The background description is too long. The protagonist hasn't even appeared yet

TV drama screenwriters don't dare to write like you, so they have to complain about it. What is the core of your book? It's a pity to throw away tasteless food! Anyway, after reading about ten chapters, I didn't see any trace of the protagonist, so I'll explain everything I want to say. If you want to write so many other people's stories, you have to explore it from the protagonist's line!

I've read half of it, and I'm not happy about it. The author used Zhifu's skin to write a semi-fictional historical novel. After reading half of the book, it's neither a farming novel nor a hegemony novel, nor a house-fighting novel. Furthermore, it is said to be a fanfic and it rarely writes about the heroine Minglan. You wrote this novel based on Zhifu, the heroine, but you put very little ink on the heroine, so the results are so poor. In fact, the author's writing style is very good, but the starting point and focus of the whole book are completely deviated. I hope the author will make a good outline for the next book, because after reading half of the book, the main line of the story is too vague, and the male protagonist's sense of existence is too low. It is all about the cultivation of the family's children, and the male and female characters. The problem with the marriage planning of a girl and a girl is that the focus is off. You have to feel immersed in the novel when reading it. You have a huge number of supporting characters and a huge amount of plot allocation. On the contrary, the male protagonist has very little sense of participation. This will make the readers less and less able to stand it. Forget it, I have talked too much. The author should just laugh it off!

If it were to be republished, I personally think it would be better not to create an original heroine. The main character should lie down and let the officials rest assured. In fact, it is just right to marry Hua Lan, and it is just right for the daughter of the fifth-grade general judge to be neither high nor low.

The pacing and framework arrangement are all confusing. The protagonist doesn't have much role in the first dozens of chapters, and there aren't many highlight moments after his appearance. It is obvious that Han Wuniang is arranged to be the heroine of the novel, a character who has never appeared in the TV series... It's a pity that the writing is not bad.

I always feel that the plot of this book limits the author's performance.

How many female protagonists are there now? This book is suitable for a single heroine, which is more serious, while multiple heroines are more worldly. Is there a suitable template? I recommend Chen Duling from Yun Zhiyu, and give a girl with a similar net worth as the Bai family, a wealthy daughter who can complement the male protagonist. Or the eldest princess spending her golden years, the collision of rights is more likely to cause sparks. The characters of Zhang Ruonan and Wen Yifan are okay, but it is easy for the male protagonist, who is very utilitarian, to get into a pretentious and slap-in-the-face plot. The character of the good girl in the short drama can burn the world with the male protagonist, but it requires the male protagonist to have a certain degree of love brain.

The protagonist has finally developed in the direction of being the nanny of the Sheng family.