Peninsula: Rising to the Top with Bigbang

Brother, focus on the main plot. You are writing about the male protagonist being an idol. First, write down what he should do as an idol. What good songs has the male protagonist written? What famous scenes are there in variety shows, singing stages, and offline signings to attract passers-by to become fans? What kind of interactions do you have with fans to consolidate your fans? Brother, please focus on describing these first!                                                                                                                                                                                                           It is recommended that apart from the mandatory five male protagonists, other people can appear less in the early stage. The male protagonist should still focus on his career in the early stage. And I think the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is a bit abrupt and lacks the plot to foreshadow their previous confession experiences. I hope that the emotional line of the male and female protagonists can be supplemented by recalling the narrative in the later stage. Finally, come on brother, I hope the plot will get better and better! Come on💪

Pei Pei

I came here from Tieba and I saw you said it was Kim Taeyeon who was the single female lead. At first I thought they were meeting at the top of the second generation group, but they ended up getting together before they even debuted 😅. After watching your extra, I can only say that you really treated me like a pig. Then I saw that if you want to write about your career, to be honest, if you want to write about your career, you shouldn't write about Bigbang. Their practical reasons are too complicated and it's easy to harmonize, not as good as solo or actor. Your own review also said that you are not allowed to write more about them, so why do you insist on writing about your career? In addition, your extra story has been together for 24 years, and it's not about love or career. Aren't you embarrassed?

I feel like there's something wrong with the rhythm. To be honest, there are quite a few updates every day, but why do I feel like it's not on point? I sincerely suggest that you, the author, write your book not to have too much of a fan mentality, but also that you should write more about what you should have written after your debut, such as songs, stages, variety shows, etc., And write about the fans' reactions when you first debuted. There are so many articles about the entertainment industry. If you look around, you can find many exciting things about career progress. You also said that you wanted to write about the group that reached the top, and you wanted to write about the protagonist becoming top one, so why did you write so many trivial things? It's not that you can't write. You can write whatever you want, but I hope you can distinguish clearly what is important and what is not. For example, what you are writing about now is Li Cailin. Who is this? Isn't your protagonist being targeted by the TV station? Isn't the purpose of going to the company to solve the problem? I can imagine that there will definitely be a plot for her later on, but these are just by the wayside. The most important thing to write about now is the things that should be targeted. Also, if you write about your career and you are being targeted, how can you be targeted if you don't write about it? Just say that the protagonist is a foreigner, appeared on many programs and became popular. After that, the protagonist is picking his feet at home and calling to ask how his father is sick. You are not writing about how sick his father is and that he is dying and needs money for the protagonist. There is no need to write these plots if you put some pressure on the corner and have a minor illness. Even if you want to write about your family, you can also write that your career will be successful in the future and you will take him for a physical check-up or let them go to play or something. After that, you still have to write two sentences about Kim Taeyeon. She has not debuted yet, what can be written? The relationship was confirmed before it was released, and they are both underage and can't write much. It's better to write something else than writing about her being jealous. And you said before that they would break up. It's not easy to write about it when she debuts. On stage and variety shows, you can write about idols secretly falling in love and being sweet with friends. Isn't jealousy also casual? I still have a lot to say but I haven't sorted out what to say yet. The most important thing is, isn't your book a career article? Someone said before that your emotional line is written as a licking dog, and I think that's true. Write it carefully later, I don't want to talk about it anymore.

Is there Kim Tae Hee and Son Ye Jin?

Don't have a single heroine. It's all written in Korean. It doesn't look good if you have a single heroine.

I feel like I've written too many emotional lines. Mainly because I'm not sleeping and I'm dragging my feet. I'm watching Korean entertainment, either bulldozing or career lines. You're not very good at that...

Let's take an objective look. If there really is an idol calling his girlfriend in the middle of the debut stage, fans will know that they will collapse.

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Signed up, babies! ! ! !