I’m in Douluo Dalu, Where Did My System Go?

I think the protagonist is too frustrated. Why does he listen to everything his mother says and doesn't have any opinions of his own? Especially when he is forced to join the Spirit Hall after absorbing a 100,000-year-old soul bone. I think he can join, but he cannot be added.

My initial idea for this book was to write it from a dual perspective, with the protagonist and Bibi Dong as the main perspective. After all, Goldfinger is now on Bibi Dong's side. If you feel it is not appropriate, then you will reduce Bibi Dong's scenes in the future. Also, I plan to change my training methods. It cannot be the same as upgrading monsters, but just upgrading the level. I plan to write down techniques to improve the quality of soul power. My initial idea is to improve the soul power from gaseous state to liquid state, then solid state, etc. Thinking of three to five forms is enough. What do you think about the idea of ​​needing genius earth treasures to assist you in your cultivation? After a while, alien races will appear, and the dropped cores can be absorbed to improve cultivation or spiritual power. There is also the world of Chaos Beads. When I see Bibi Dong again, there will probably be spiritual stones or the like inside. Forget about the magic weapon, it's still too early. I might write it in the finale. There are also soul beasts that have mutated, or are atavistic. Many ancient and alien species appeared. If you have any good ideas, please mention them. If it is convenient, please help me to comment, Crab.

I still like Bibi Dong, will the author seriously consider writing about her?

Flanders means that the protagonist should help Ma Hongjun use martial arts to suppress the evil fire every once in a while. The name of the teacher is also for the convenience of coming back. It's just that the protagonist thought wrongly and thought he wanted to destroy her innocence, so he refused directly. Well, even if you don't think wrongly, the protagonist will not help. Secondly, as I wrote before, don't treat Flanders as a good thing. Flanders is not a good guy either. Explain again, if you have different opinions, you can discuss it. The original work is very clear. In the past ten or twenty years, 62 students have been recruited. And according to their recruitment standards, the minimum age is 12 years old and level 25 or above. The graduation standard is to reach level 40 or above before the age of 20. In other words, there are at least 8 years of training time. Normally, the third soul ring can increase about 2~3 levels. 40-25-2=13. Level 13 in 8 years, Level 1 and a half in one year. Who among those who can get into school cannot meet this standard? Tang San reached level 20 at the age of 8 when his innate soul power was full. The first soul ring increased by three levels, that is, it increased by seven levels in two years, and about three levels in one year. Then when he joined Shrek Academy, he was still a few months old and was 12 years old. Then I broke through to level 30 in the Star Dou Forest. The second soul ring should have increased by about 2 levels. From a little over 8 years old to 12 years old, it is almost more than three years. Promoted to level 8 in three years. There are more than two levels a year. It seems that Dai Mubai was born with level 7 soul power. He was already at level 37 when he was 15 or 16 years old. According to this algorithm, if you are born with level 7, you can practice quickly in the early stage, and you can increase your level by about 3 levels in a year. Seven years old, level 10, level 12 after absorbing the soul ring. One year is calculated based on levels 3 to 4. When I was 9-10 years old, at level 20, I absorbed the soul ring. Level 22. The remaining time is calculated as 2.5 Years per year. About three years later, at level 30, absorb another thousand-year soul ring and gain 2 more levels. Level 32. Dai Mubai was about twelve or thirteen years old at this time. Then practice for three years. It increases by about 2 levels a year. So when Tang San met Dai Mubai, Dai Mubai was fifteen or sixteen years old. Level 37. Is there anything wrong with this formula? And the original work also makes it very clear. There were 62 students enrolled, but only 14 graduated. Those who have not graduated either have not reached this level, or they are dead. And Flanders's educational purpose is that those who dare not cause trouble are mediocre. Then the problem arises. People from big families would not come here normally. So the people who come here are basically civilians. Common people provoke nobles, in this world where the aristocracy is very obvious. You should all know the fate of these civilians. If you don't say they will die, that's pretty much it. In addition, as mentioned in the original work, there are still some who died by hunting soul beasts. Then don't think about it, otherwise they didn't go with the students at all and let the newly level 30 soul masters hunt by themselves. Otherwise, you will die without saving anything. Except for these two situations, I really can't understand why the thousand-year soul beast killed people in the hands of a few soul saints. Combined with the second part, a level 98 leader can be killed. I have completely seen that the purpose of Shrek Academy is not to treat ordinary people as human beings. Nobles basically never die, and it has nothing to do with ordinary people whether they live or die. Looking at Flanders bragging in a high-sounding way, he also said that it was for the purpose of educating students. But in fact, what he did can only be described in a few words, and it is too numerous to describe. They also boasted that there was a young elder in Wuhun Hall who was trained by them. Well, who is this elder? Anyway, based on the original work, I only see that Flanders is a pyramid scheme leader. As for why it harms geniuses, I don't know, and I can't figure out why the author set up such a thing? It is said that his talent was not appreciated, but what he did was completely unconscionable. Someone also sent me a private message, saying that Zhao Wuji was hunted down by Wuhun Palace because he slaughtered a whole family. Readers, think about it, what kind of place is Shrek? Are Flanders and the others any good people? Everyone says Canghui Academy is bad, but what has Canghui Academy done? Ma Hongjun teased other female classmates. Others just wanted an explanation, but Dai Mubai and the others would beat them up. The teacher from Canghui College came over, and he just wanted to find an explanation from the other teacher. Then he was beaten again by Zhao Wuji. Shrek Academy's educational philosophy and their conduct in life. I only saw that they were purely training evil soul masters. Any teacher with a normal outlook on life would not be able to do such a thing, right? So based on the above introduction of the original work. Even if Flender wants the protagonist to sleep with Ma Hongjun, it is not something difficult to understand, right? Based on what Flanders has done for so many years, it is not impossible to do it even if he is directly force-fed drugs. Of course this is just my personal opinion. If anyone thinks Flanders is a good person, please feel free to discuss it.

The basic characters are based on the original characters, there will be deviations, but not much, if you feel it is wrong. Go and take a look at the original work for yourself. Bibi Dong would drink up the remaining tea for Yu Xiaogang. This is the original text. Bibi Dong was originally licking Yu Xiaogang. The protagonist didn't know who his mother was. Otherwise, Bibi Dong would have been brainwashed and Yu Xiaogang would have been killed. All this is based on the protagonist not knowing his identity. Slowly, Bibi Dong was brought back to normal by the protagonist. If you think there is a problem with the character's logic, then talk to the original author! The logic of Bibi Dong falling in love with Yu Xiaogang is equivalent to Xiao Xuner falling in love with Jia Liebi!

I didn't win the resurrection match, so I plan to reopen the book. However, I'd like to ask in advance if I want to continue writing this book. If it's not necessary, I will just stop it.