Konoha: My Ninjutsu Can Be Upgraded

Chakra is not an internal force. Even if you keep refining it, it won't increase much. You only need to increase your body and soul to become stronger.

The author must have a math problem. Killing an enemy ninja will increase your fighting ability by one ten thousandth. Killing 10,000 people will increase your effect by twice as much. It's simply a stretch.

My own cheats are the Liver Hack and the Sacrifice Hack. Are you going to be an ANBU? Don't you waste your time with crazy liver skills?

The protagonist subjectively chooses not to save Uchiha in order to stack up passively. I don't know if it will change in the future, but I can only say that the protagonist is becoming more and more like a native, and his outlook is no longer suitable for normal people. Again, what do you think of life? Isn't it a traditional virtue to save your compatriots in dire straits? Later, I really participated in the massacre of Uchiha. I can only say that the book is well-written and has incorrect views. No matter how good the author of the book is, he will be scolded.

For the powerful fireball technique, option 1 can store 99 pieces and release them during battle. Option 2 can influence other people's minds. The chosen one is not suitable for you. You can choose two to watch.

It's a bit disgusting. The protagonist always feels that he can control everything, but most of his plans fail and nothing changes. The increase in combat power is also inexplicable. He keeps getting stronger but can't be beaten by anyone. I give up.

When writing anime, I'm most afraid of writing about revolution. Trouble, how do you do it in Superworld? Kill all the ninjas?

The author doesn't know what the arrangement is, but just makes the protagonist keep leaning on Cthulhu. If he really follows Cthulhu's world view, even though the protagonist is very happy now, he will go crazy sooner or later.

Did you use Al? The rhythm was good at the beginning, but suddenly there was a lot of nonsense, or was it just a low word count?

ID is full of flags at a glance

No? You finally killed Danzo, and you went out of your way to leave him a single seedling, and you kept teaching him to help him. What were you trying to do?

You can still watch the front part, but the back part is really watery, and there are a lot of completely meaningless plots.

After reading Chapter 160, I became more and more confused. I always write about irrelevant things. Since the beginning of the Nine-Tails Rebellion, it has been a period of peace, so the plot advances very slowly. I don't know how to push it, and what kind of revolution should be made to make everyone become ninjas. Such boring things. Can ninjas oppress ordinary people, and can't chunin oppress genin? Improve your strength, be stronger than anything else, and get rid of those useless things

It's getting more and more confusing, and I even force the plot back to its original track without knowing how to write it. He wanted to commit suicide and wanted Uchiha to rebel against the village, but ended up killing Kushina, yet Silk-Smooth didn't think it was his problem. To be honest, if I hadn't just ordered them all and read them later, I would have really wanted to throw this bunch of rubbish books into the trash.

Wow, it's a bit boring. When I saw the chapters where I joined the ANBU to help the Daimyo find a lover, I really faded away.

Water when you should have water. Don't use water when you don't need water. Some chapters are flooded with water.

I've read Chapter 15 so far, and I feel like I'm just the protagonist of the plot, and I don't want to change anything at all.

After reading more than 160 chapters, I wonder if the existence of Orochimaru is too disgusting. The portrayal is quite failed. To be honest, I didn't see it. I can only see that the protagonist is a bit incompetent.

The previous chapter was so good. A fireball burned the three innocent women who were raped into charcoal.

The emotions and logic of the characters are inconsistent. If you want to be revolutionary, then don't describe the protagonist in an inconsistent way. Turned too crooked

. . . Thinking comes out as it comes out, short-sighted. After saving the Uchiha clan, he immediately wanted to abandon them. You might as well not save me. The vision is also poor.

The writing in the front is pretty good, but I don't know what I'm writing in the back. I've read more than 230 chapters. Anyway, I don't know what I want to do. It's become very boring to read. It's very different from what I wrote at the beginning. I don't want to waste my money on reading it.

When Kakashi entered ANBU, Hidan was only 4-5 years old. Even the 8-year-olds in Naruto who can fight are very powerful. Is it normal for Hidan to have such a scene at this time? Can anyone tell me what a 4-5 year old child in the ninja world can do? 😒😒🥵

I have been writing tongue twisters since then. The results are not good yet. Take a good look at what others have written.

You can't control the protagonist with a high IQ. Every time the protagonist makes a decision, it doesn't feel like he has a high IQ, but more like the whole world is cooperating with the protagonist.

Fire escape can hit people, it's a miracle

I'm speechless. It's okay to just write about the protagonist massacring civilians in the previous chapter. The author has incorrect views.

Fortunately, I read the post before chasing and avoided the lightning. I still can't accept the too-jun type of protagonist.