The Coming of Cyber: I, the Black Householder, Have Become the Queen of the Abyss

Why are there so many books about female channels that are devoted to male channels?

Woohoo. Following reading is really important for new books. If you read all the books, it will lead to poor data 😭. Then the editor will ask for it to be completed. This book has a very grand world view. I really want to continue writing 😭 Wow. 😭

I think the world is rebelling against religion, so there should be a red ghost

Is it a transformation essay? Is the protagonist male or female?

After reading thirty or forty chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. The author has some ideas and put some thought into the world view, but his writing skills are weak. This is a headache The specific details are that the characters talk too much nonsense, which directly affects the continuity of the plot. This is a fatal weakness in male videos. You can't give the reader a sense of involvement when two hundred words of dialogue suddenly pop up during a life-or-death situation for the protagonist. It made me feel like I was reading a text version of a stage play script, and there was no sense of immersion at all. And the plot is deliberately shaped and the plot changes are blunt. I don't want to go into details, but you will understand it after reading it. The author still needs to practice the basic skills of writing. Weak writing skills are really fatal.

Chapter 44: You obviously have a household registration all the time, how can you be considered a black household? So when did you become a black household? ()

The author has definitely controlled the comment. I will check later to see if the comment has been deleted.

Call me Xiaoxin

The writing and plot rhythm are good, but the problem is that it is too slow to get to the topic, and the first few chapters are not handled very well, which makes this book not as popular as it should be. Come on, author, it will get better.

So when did you become the Queen of the Abyss 🙂

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The writing style is so great! Every sentence is like a carefully crafted work of art, which makes people feel like spring breeze when reading it. Your articles are not only logically clear, but also emotionally sincere, which can always touch people's hearts. It's so awesome!

I haven't seen such a good-looking masterpiece in a long time. It perfectly blends game invasion and cyberpunk, but the protagonist looks like a slut.

Now it's okay, although some of the designs are not particularly perfect, but that's not what I care about. I don't know why this article gives me an annoying taste, but I don't particularly like the writing style. It's a bit like the writing style of the Genius Club. Although that book is quite popular, I don't like it very much, that's all. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens, right?

Please update more. There are too few authors.

Please update more, I feel like a lot of people are reading books

I have read Chapter 67. The known world view is quite interesting. Maybe the author wants to squeeze out toothpaste and slowly reveal the settings as the plot develops. There is no explanation of the system and background settings. Generally speaking, whether it is an anime or a novel, there will be passerby NPCs or protagonists who will make changes to the system settings. To give a brief explanation, the location where the plot unfolds is also described to give people a general idea. However, the author did not arrange a narrator role. Sometimes when the plot came to reveal the setting, the setting was not revealed. This led to the development of the plot that often made people confused. In the absence of a basic explanation of the setting, it is often difficult to see whether the author has laid any foreshadowings, and the plot connection seems very stiff. Why the plot develops like this, and why the protagonist does what he does, often does not form a complete logical chain. The overall reading feels like a forced plot, and the more you read, the more awkward it becomes. In general, the setting is quite interesting, but the writing is a big problem. I wish the author's writing will get better and better.

Why aren't there more tomatoes?