
Thank You for the Invitation. I Just Joined the Chat Group After Traveling Under One Person.
谢邀,穿越一人之下,刚进聊天群
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 710k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 12mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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After seeing a few pictures, I can only say that the character design of the pig's feet is too dissuasive! If you only rely on a system that refreshes the cheats once a day and you don't know the strength of the cheats, why can't you learn some exercises or something when you get a powerful cheat? Ruined? Without the system, pig's feet have no ability to protect themselves.
After reading the introduction, Grandpa Rick's anime is okay, but other fan fictions are not consistent with reality at all. After all, his mental state is too disturbed.
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The protagonist does nothing in the main world of Under One Person and travels all the time in another world. So why is it written that the protagonist is Under One Person? Isn't it okay to write something original and then mark it as a one-man plot? Originally, he wanted to go to Luotian Dajiao but ended up traveling to Conan, and the protagonist made it clear that he would not interfere with Zhang Chulan's affairs. So what was the protagonist's reason for going to Luotian Dajiao? Tongtianlu or King Huohuo? The long Holy Grail War has resulted in a rapid expansion of combat power. One person cannot tolerate the protagonist who uses Samadhi True Fire as a basic attack. If this is the case, why did the protagonist of Luotian Dajiao "lose" to Zhang Chulan? What is the purpose? Also, it is too obvious that the system suppresses the battle. It is full of negative entries and none of them are useful. So far, there are only two useful ones, one is Eternal and the other is used to learn Kong Ming's skills. The others are better than nothing or simply slow down. Is it true that the next time entries such as vegetative state are randomly appeared, where the body is fine but the spirit is wrong? And the protagonist does not have a main plot line. It is mainly triggered by a random event. He does not interfere with one person, so he goes on a trip with friends and triggers a task? (What is the difference between this and decades ago when a woman died in martial arts novels to advance the plot?)
This book is so strange. I didn't think others were so disgusted with the protagonist's character, it was just "bad". It even felt okay. It felt like he was driving the chat group and the story as a whole. Then there are a lot of stories about the three models of the moon, which can be read at the beginning. Then, I started skipping chapters, and then it was about chapter 50. The protagonist, who is a fun-loving person, has lost his charm for some reason... And there is a feeling of procrastination in writing.
I threw in two coins specifically to complain. How can the protagonist be a fun-loving person? He is a joy himself, and his arrogance as a time traveler almost overflows. Based on his performance in the first few chapters, it would not be inappropriate to put him in some dark novels as a passerby who delivers treasures and loses his life. Don't talk about the eternal person, the author himself wrote about it, the eternal ordinary person (laughing) Even if it is the most conservative way, through insinuations, an ordinary person is trained into an absolutely obedient dog. I won't mention the other big guys in the world, but the grandpa who appeared at the beginning, as long as he wants to, even if this is not his area of expertise, he can definitely do it. Of course in this book, the protagonist will never fall over. But my mind tells me that this is a young child who is carrying a great treasure. At a gathering of a group of peerless fierce gods, his face is full of arrogance, pretending to be profound and giving guidance. Then those peerless ferocious gods seemed to have had their brain stems emptied out, and they followed with stupid expressions on their faces, allowing the young child to dangling in front of them without any defense.
Little Poison Bar
I don't understand why you want to mess it up in the early stage when you don't have strong self-protection ability. You are completely betting on the probability of shipment of this random idiom.
It seems uninspiring to make a bad flow. If you mess around in life, forget it. I'm reading a novel, but don't you give me something interesting to read.
Speechless
This author, you are a scoundrel and you do not deal with the comments that say you are a bookworm. I say that you lack description of the scene. Each scene seems like only a few people are having a conversation, and the surroundings are so foggy that it is difficult to imagine. Why don't you just delete the post instead of correcting it (◇)? If the problem cannot be solved, then solve the person who raised the problem? 😅
The first part was okay, but when I saw Fate, it was all a second design (or the author didn't understand the original design), and I couldn't stand it.
It's a boring novel. Even though I just started taking Yangjian and Fang Yuan, I'm still looking forward to it.
After reading Chapter 5, the character of pig's feet was not to my liking, so I left.
I ordered 6 pictures and they were so watery that I couldn't stand them anymore. When will it be time for the cross-border ancestors to fight their descendants in Longhu Mountain? Call me back. It's understandable that it's bad, but you can't be so bland. You're so bland that I don't even see the slightest bit of excitement. (Maybe it's because I've been watching Warhammer recently, and it feels a little better.)
I don't have any bad feelings about it, and I thought it was okay from the beginning. I don't know what the author was thinking about the Holy Grail War. It only lasted 40 chapters and was dragged on in the same world for so long. Then the roles of other characters in the chat group were compressed to the point where they were gone. What kind of chat group was it written about? This is all written as time travel
The protagonist's character and the first script directly discouraged a group of people. Is this selecting a niche audience?
The character design is poorly staged, which is fine, but what the author wrote is very toxic.
Why are you still a ghost? I really have no interest in this world, and when I saw the name, I had no interest in ordering it. The heroic spirits and fierce ghosts are boundless. This is the first time that someone who is familiar with wen has written about this.
Resurrected, resurrected, the author quickly jumps into the world of cultivation chat groups and writes something joyful and funny to draw readers back.
Is there something wrong with the rhythm?
We were talking in the chat group when suddenly a long explanation came, which lasted for more than a chapter. When the group members replied, they all forgot what the previous sentence was.
Has another chapter been released?
I have no idea what to expect from this book? I really don't know.
I can't understand the drawings you're writing now. You can either cut them out, or you can just go to the Xiuzhen chat group and find some fun to pull them back.
What's going on? Several books have been updated in the past few days 😰
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