Red Mansion: My Disciple Lin Daiyu Has the Qualities of an Empress.

You are cultivating immortals, and the techniques for cultivating immortals are in the Taoist scriptures, and you are still looking for them everywhere. It is inexplicably strange that you have not read any of the various Taoist classics such as Longhu Mountain, Maoshan, and the Bagua Zhouyi. What kind of immortal are you looking for? Martial arts, even the simplest swordsmanship, bow, fists and kicks are not understood, and he does not even have the method of protecting the Tao, so he is blind.

I have no interest in Jia Mu, can you accept Grandma Liu?

I have read more than thirty chapters, and overall the writing is pretty good, except that every time the protagonist goes to a place, people in that place will look down on the protagonist, and then the protagonist shows off his skills to make them convinced and awed. So repeated, if you keep writing like this, it will be hard to get tired

The writing is good, and the writing style at the beginning is also good. However, after arriving in Jinling, these gangsters and entertainers all seemed to have lost their minds collectively. When they had a fight with bandits who were suspected of colluding with the government, they all knew they would leave immediately to hide from the limelight. When they arrived in Jinling, Ling had a conflict with a big family with an official background and refused to leave. He wanted to celebrate the New Year in Jinling City. If he didn't leave, he would go to the streets to perform. When the performers encountered others who came to find trouble, he refused to leave. Wouldn't these people be worse off than dead if they didn't celebrate the New Year in Jinling City? I know that the author wants the story to continue in Jinling, but wouldn't it be better to let the protagonist stay in Jinling and let these buskers leave? After all, the protagonist didn't show up after arriving in Jinling, so why did he have to trick everyone into staying?

I was deceived by the title of the book. It is said that the novel has three golden chapters. I have read twenty chapters. The protagonist has been narcissistic and pretending to be cool, but he has never entered the theme of Dream of Red Mansions. I really don't have the patience to read on. Can anyone tell me when the protagonist will meet the characters in Dream of Red Mansions and when he will meet Lin Daiyu?

I haven't been able to get into the main plot for a long time, and I've been hanging around outside. I don't know if I want to drag down the chapter's word count, or I just don't dare to get into the main plot.

Fighting in the last few chapters has been too boring. It's not as carefree as the previous wanderings or cultivating immortals in the mountains. I hope to lead the war quickly, it is best to take a foreshadowing and go to Yangzhou to post Xiao Daiyu. According to this writing, Daiyu's brother and Jia Min hope they can survive. Daiyu is so miserable that she is either crying or crying.

It's like the leading role was given to Lin Daiyu. Maybe it's because the protagonist is invincible alone, so the focus of the narrative shifts, and then there's an inexplicable sense of female porn 🤔

I guess I'm going to be a eunuch, can't I write about The Red Mansion properly? No need to dig holes and add settings. It's not so smooth now. When I wrote Water Margin, I thought I was going to switch to the regular Zhutianliu. The result gave me a mosaic, and I started to move towards science fiction. We must know that technology and idealism are naturally contradictory. Technology pays attention to smooth logic and perfect integration. It's enough to achieve a good level of cultivation. Now let's see how the author brings the mosaic world into a circle.

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After reading more than eighty chapters, the person with the title of the book didn't come out yet, so I was shaken. . . . The first part is okay, but the second part keeps following this routine and I can't stand it anymore.

He asked the real immortal why he ignored the suffering of the common people. After seeing what happened, he became an "immortal" and answered this question perfectly, ignoring the suffering of the common people. It's really both upright and upright, making people laugh.

When writing novels, the protagonist should not have a popular name like Lu Peng. What is Peng, Wei, Lei? No desire to open it at all

Can I not write mixed martial arts? It looks awkward. How to deal with the timeline 😥

It's understandable that he didn't practice martial arts in the capital at first, but later he traveled alone in search of immortals. How dangerous was it to go out alone in ancient times? And you don't exercise to improve your martial arts. What do you think? It doesn't matter how much basic self-protection ability you have, right? Even if you practice running? (If you encounter three or five people in the Jie Dao on the road, you can either knock them over or run away. Otherwise, do you still expect the other party to rob them without killing them?) It's not that they won't be used later in the Xunxian Visiting Dao, it just feels so ambitious. There will be a beast master in the future. You really think of yourself as a master. You have no sense of crisis and have practiced elegant skills. But you don't want to grovel and serve the nobles. What's the use of these skills? It's not that you can't practice, but you must at least have the ability to protect yourself or the situation is basically safe before practicing. If you're not capable, then don't meddle. Then he left and left all the beasts behind. He was speechless. Even if you don't have modern knowledge and don't engage in industrialization, it's not difficult to build an intelligence network with a radius of more than ten miles using birds with the magical skill of beast control, right? At least you can run away in advance when you encounter danger.

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Empress: Good, good, good, inherit Zhenguan from the top, and Kaiyuan from the bottom.

Why isn't it updated? There's no holidays, either.

Legend, epic, myth, the beginning 🙂

More updates!

Now I start to kneel down and lick Mingjiao! I've always looked down on these scum.

The name is Red Mansion. In fact, I have been away from the main line and dare not join in. It is better to call it Zhutian and start cultivating immortality from Red Mansion.

Please do your best. If you don't update much, how can you attract other people to watch it? 😅