Making It in 1983
闯荡1983
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 538k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban Life
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
194Chapters
2.5kRecommendations
2.1kFans
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The author intended to portray Qin Da as a simpleton with an inherent fatherly authority, but instead depicted him as an incompetent, angry, domineering, and unreasonable middle-aged man. With a father like that, Qin Da's character could never succeed, because his father would only be a hindrance.
The author says that those who are ruthless are sentenced, but why don't you say that those who are ruthless are successful? Which of those bosses didn't earn their first pot of gold with blood? First they were ruthless, then they laundered it—wasn't that common back then? "Boss" is now a derogatory term, meaning someone who can be bullied.
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Hopefully this book can be continued.
Reading a dozen or so chapters is overwhelming; it's only suitable for readers in Northeast China. If it were intended for all readers, it would need to be written in a style that everyone can understand, with a lot of local dialects, slang, colloquialisms, jargon, and authentic interactions reflecting regional customs and traditions. There are many parts that are hard to understand or comprehend.
The writing style is a bit too distinctly Northeastern, which might polarize reader opinions. Some will find it interesting, while others will lose interest after a couple of chapters. Personally, I think online novels should cater to a wider audience while incorporating local characteristics, but these should be highlights, not tools to purify the readership.
Keep it up! Your writing is much more down-to-earth now, stop cutting it out so often! Also, your small-scale, minor skirmishes can add more fluff, but once the whole team gets going, the situation becomes much more complex compared to before!
All the monthly tickets I earned have been used here. Hang in there, this book!
Even older generations of Northeasterners didn't speak so garrulously; they couldn't speak without swearing.
That's awesome! I just want to see you write all these intricate details. I'll give you all my monthly votes and subscribe to all your books.
I wanted to watch "Northeast Past," but you went straight to "Mountain Chasing" instead. If I wanted to watch "Mountain Chasing," I wouldn't watch those other shows.