Hogwarts: Is Your Wand a Golden Spatula?

Let's complain about the plot about Newt's family. The protagonist of the supermodel plot did not participate in the school. It was quite deducted.

Harry Potter is obviously a children's book, but what you wrote is a bit too realistic, and it still feels like a dark novel.

The progress is a bit slow, chapter 27, I haven't entered the academy yet, I just started at chapter 24, wait until I go to school to slow down. The first beginning is a bit too slow. I wrote fifty or sixty chapters in the first grade and there is nothing to say, but I have written so many before I go to school.

You have a problem with time at this time. If you time traveled to a baby in 1980, please write it down. If not, it would be impossible to be in the same class as Harry. Harry Potter entered school on July 31, 1980, on September 1, 1991.

The opening chapter is boring and contrary to the original work. The protagonist is just a coward who is just pretending to do everything but dare not take action. The original business plot is dry, boring and smelly.

After reading Chapter 11, I feel that OOC is too exaggerated. Newt is basically a sand sculpture with a name. Imagine that a famous zoology expert needs a quasi-little wizard who is new to magic to risk being attacked by magical animals to help him solve a problem that he cannot solve? It is already foreseeable how the protagonist will be treated after going to school. It is estimated that accompanying the trio of saviors is a must. Maybe Dumbledore will get rid of him and challenge Lao Fu alone. I sincerely suggest that the author change it to Newt's small test for the protagonist. It is in line with the original character's personality and the logic of ordinary people, and does not hinder the protagonist's ability to write. In fact, the character of the protagonist's father is disgusting enough. I just wanted to stick to it. Maybe the author is good at writing, but it is obviously wrong.

Quite appropriate. However, for the protagonist, as long as he saves money to acquire supermodel skills or obtain magical equipment, it is not that his thoughts follow reality, but that the world succumbs to his own thoughts.

Can I have another golden pot pot? 😁

The plot of Newt needs to be overhauled or 90% deleted, but it can still be considered

Were the more than seventy chapters written by AI? The writing style is completely different, there are much less emotional descriptions The whole thing suddenly becomes report-style descriptions

You talk too much nonsense. Chapter 25 does not get to the point. Do you know how many people will leave if you do this? I skipped and watched without the confidence to continue watching.

The Newt part was so outrageous…

It's good-looking and interesting, but the plot design is a little childish.

It's a new book by a newbie, so please be lenient, the author is already making corrections.

You can skip all the pictures before 25, there is nothing

Are there any novels of the same type as Yunding or Golden Shovel? Please recommend.