Red Mansion: I Have Just Been Sealed as a Wolf, and Now I Am Wearing a Yellow Robe.

After reading Chapter 100, the protagonist is a military commander after all. He doesn't have a few confidants, no servants, and no bodyguards. He has to charge into battle by himself, how about playing?

This author also accepted 😅 that he made a mistake, I mentioned it, and he replied to me, but when I clicked on the reply, I found that the comment had been deleted! I don't think I said anything too extreme, right?

When the protagonist married Lin Daiyu, had she already been granted the title of Earl or Marquis? If that is the case, then Lin Daiyu is not qualified, that is, Lin Daiyu is high-ranking. After all, Lin Ruhai's father is no longer a noble family and has entered a wealthy family (that is, a poor family). Otherwise, after the death of the second-generation Rongguo Gong Jia Daishan, he could secretly confer the erring Jia She into a first-class general (the qualified heir is to be demoted to a marquis), and his second son From a fifth-rank official, and Lin Ruhai's father is his legitimate son, if he has a title and is the winner of the imperial examination, he will be from the fifth-rank real power or the fifth-rank real power official position, instead of the Lantai Temple doctor and Xunyan Censor are both seventh-rank officials, Fei Que Xunyan Censor is probably the second-generation Rongguo Gong Jia Daishan; if Lin Daiyu's reputation is not damaged, she will be seventh-rank official Pin may be the wife of the legitimate son of a sixth-grade official; not to mention the death of their parents and the leakage of the sieve. The Jia family and Jia Baoyu who live in the same house are no longer worthy of marrying even the legitimate son of a seventh-grade official. Therefore, if the author did not change Lin Daiyu's entry into the Jia family and Jia Baoyu's coquettish operation, not only Lin Daiyu but also the reputation of the Jia family girl would be ruined and she would not be able to marry. She is a perfect wife; and even if the protagonist is granted the title of Baron, Lin Ruhai still needs to be alive, and the emperor sees that he has served as a salt patrol censor since the time of the Supreme Emperor.

Progress is too slow. The protagonist also has no personal soldiers or soldiers that he can control. He just circled around the court, not like a time traveler at all. The time traveler hopes to be released outside, and the protagonist will fight against the capital. Still struggling to get promoted?

In the Ming Dynasty, there was no such position as Xiaoqi in the capital camp. Xiaoqi was the lowest-level officer in the Jinyi Guard and the local guard station. He had no rank and was in charge of ten people. If you follow the path of Dai Quan, don't worry about whether he is sincere or not. A Xiaoqi with ten people is not worthy of being forced to talk to you about this matter. . . . . The seventh rank of the Beijing camp is the General Manager, who is in charge of one hundred people below, three captains below, and Qian Boss, who is responsible for the garrison at the top. The rank of the guerrilla generals in the Beijing Camp is a casual title. They are generally used by the nobles for gold plating and do not participate in actual command. The camp officers above have actual duties. In today's terms, it is the difference between rank and position. The high-grade camp officers have no real power, and the low-grade camp officers are in charge of the troops, but they are supervised by the eunuchs who have no rank.

The author is a woman and there are many women readers.

The character of Wang Xifeng is a bit disgusting, and the vicious side of the original work highlights the feeling.

The plot is really well written, and the rhythm of meritorious service and promotion is also well grasped. The protagonist's enemies are not stupid or retarded. What particularly impressed me is that the protagonist is not afraid of fame and is not bound by filial piety, which is rare in Red Mansions novels. Of course, it would be more three-dimensional and realistic if a little additional explanation of the female characters is given. After all, it would be disrespectful to the ancestors, and it would be more or less uncomfortable for the other springs to be caught in the middle. Bringing Baoyu to the south is an interesting idea, but it lacks the scene where Baoyu brings trouble to Jia Mu's partial slap in the face. There are other exciting things to make up for it, but readers of Red Mansions may not buy it. This is something the author has to consider.

Why insist on letting Yuanchun be granted the title🙂🙂🙂 No, the dancing faces in the back are quite annoying, and they are just making wedding dresses for others.

I really vomited, spending money to make myself suffer. A once-and-twice female character strips naked in front of the protagonist, but the protagonist refuses indifferently. If you really were a saint, stop writing these things and write more about tactics and other things! I have to write about women and pretend to be a wolf with a big tail

The plot aspect is pretty good. The iron-bloodedness during military training and battle also fits the protagonist's portrayal, and Sister Lin's smart but jealous little temperament is also well described. It's a good Red Mansion novel, I still recommend it, you can read it

The Red Mansion part is well written. I hope our children will have more love in the future. . . Sister Lin returned the gift to the male protagonist, and many books accepted it carelessly.

I am just a part-time writer. I write fanfics because I like Red Mansion. I know that I will not achieve results, and I will not take your jobs. There is no need to come here to post bad reviews, set the pace, and send my replies to other Red Mansion book review sections... Readers have their own judgments, if they don't like it Those who are happy will naturally write it off... Let me just sigh again. With the economic downturn, it is difficult to write a book. Longkong asked historical authors to join a group and follow each other to read and subscribe for the first time. I don't have time and don't like to play this kind of routine. I just want to write my own book in peace, so please let me go.

When I first met you in the introduction, you suggested that you delete the part about Xue Baochai. Both those who like her and those who don't like her don't want to leave her out. If you just write it down and don't accept it, won't you dissuade most people?

No, have you written an introduction to the outline?

This novel is indeed very well written, especially the part about the court struggle, and I have read six or seven Red Mansions fan fiction, and most of them do not handle the emotional aspects well. Yingying Yanyan is good, but there is no need to catch them all. The heroine of Dream of Red Mansions is Daiyu, and she pays more attention to Daiyu, and does not make the hairpin and Dai into one. This idea is really good (｀Δ´)! I hope the author can write more, and at least have a base of 1 million words 😁😁😁

Is it the prefect of Jinling in Jiayu Village (the fifth rank or the fourth rank with real power?) Or Yu Yin of Rongguo Mansion, who uses the seal of the first-rank general of Jia She, the head of Rongguo Mansion. Why is the protagonist so afraid when he hears that the county magistrate smashed Jia She and Jia Zheng?

1: There is something wrong with the title of the book. I just crossed it out after seeing it several times. 😅. 2: You are too careless with this introduction. You just made an outline. This way you frame yourself and eliminate many readers. Although the Xue Baochai you describe as the author is the same as in the original work (Xue Baochai is actually a modern rational little fairy who knows how to use her own advantages and clearly knows her own needs, but her actions make people feel uncomfortable in the world of Red Mansion, but she is a living person in the real world), the description of Daiyu is also correct, and the 40 chapters of Lao Cao's emotional sprouting are also 1 When he was 1 years old, his father died and returned to Yangzhou and entered the Rongguo Mansion without anyone to rely on, and then he began to shift from family affection to ignorant feelings. The author's writing is very consistent with the original work. In fact, in reality, we are ignorant and understand the little thoughts of the opposite sex at about the age of 11-13. I want to ask about the dialogue between Daiyu and Baoyu in Chapter 103. I feel that I don't quite understand it. How can it be shown that they are in love and dislike each other? Sincerely asking

I've caught up to the latest, and overall it's fine. When watching The Red Mansion, I mainly watch garden dramas (to be good, you must write more garden dramas). I hope to work harder with the next book and spread more dog food. If you don't like Jin Chai, try not to interact too much with the protagonist. Otherwise, I always feel like giving away my daughter! (But I don't feel bad giving it to anyone from Daiyu Party!!

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Is the first wife Lin Daiyu? Will he take Baochai, Baoqin, Miaoyu and others as concubines?

You can still read the front part, but it's better not to read the back part. It will make you feel uncomfortable if you spend money on it.

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