Become a Visionary in the Marvel Universe

1. The writing is ordinary and doesn't feel poisonous 2. The plot is too rushed and tasteless 3. Attention should be paid to character creation. The author had better think clearly about the positioning of the protagonist, especially if he is called Adam and is the audience. Mystery fans who watch this movie will compare it to Adam the Squid It seems that the author may write as follows A way to describe more spiders The changes in Xia then affect other people. The protagonist is behind the scenes, arranging the stories of each hero and digesting the potion. In the end, when Thanos snaps his fingers, he may ask some characters whether they are satisfied with the script or the like, or to say a classic saying, this is a necessary sacrifice One is naturally common, but the writing style in this aspect is very important. The key point is whether the character of "Adam" can be kept down. For example, the plot of suddenly appearing in front of Norman Osborn, I actually feel that it is not smooth enough. Simply put, there is too little in the beginning. If Norman's anger and his feelings towards himself are described first, The helplessness and fear of physical illness, the hallucination of lying in bed and dying in pain, and having to leave Harry alone to face the results of the Osborne Group, etc. Then Adam suddenly appeared in front of him and said, "Are you satisfied with this result?" Norman felt angry and asked who he was. Where did it come from, I suddenly remembered that this person has always been there. When someone comes in to report, when he loses his temper, when he wails in fear, then it turns into fear of the unknown Later, when Norman asks about the purpose, don't directly say that you want to treat him and let him become a child. For his subordinates, but to give a chance. To put it simply, Adam must be strong enough and don't even let Norman know that the ring has healing power. I think it should be told to Norman that it is just a try, and then disappear and leave. At this time, Norman suddenly found that the potted plants were in full bloom and there was a book on the table. A story called Norman Osborne, or a magical item-type communication method. In that story, if Norman wants to rewrite the script, how to contact him? At this time, it is best to use occult methods, such as messengers, to create a sufficiently mysterious atmosphere. Personally, I think it is more interesting to write this way. I still read it. The author himself Don't be in a hurry with either of the above, the content of the characters is very important, but the author feels that you are just pushing the plot in a hurry and not bringing the characters to life. I suggest you read "The Spiritual Guide of American Comics", which I think is the most vivid among all the heroes in American comics.

666 Is so powerful, the writer wrote it so well

Everything I write is very comfortable and really good.

Come on, old man😁😁😁

The writing is really good, keep up the good work

Why did I cut it off suddenly? The writing is really good. It feels like a pity. I hope the author can work hard and I also wish the author a big hit with his next book.

The updates are too fast, just one chapter per ten days. It makes me better at raising fish.

It's so strong. Come on, author.