The Cannon Fodder Abandoned Daughter's Road to Immortality and Immortality

This copywriting shows that the heroine is different from other women. It highlights the differences of the heroine by belittling other women. This method is really low-level. You can write about strong women if you want, but don't use this method.

"Who said that women need to take advantage of the opportunity to cultivate immortality?" 🤔 Why is it that in the world of immortality, it is set as strong men and weak women? By default, the strong ones are all male cultivators. Are the talents and qualifications of female cultivators not as good as those of male cultivators?

I won't use my sword against you. I have to come in and take a look.

The heroine is a modern soul. I think the heroine has always had a feeling of being superior and compared with other female nuns of the same race.

After reading the first ten chapters, I feel that the author is repeatedly struggling between wanting to love his daughter and subconsciously being a bit misogynistic. The article has merit, but some of the plots are a bit poorly connected. The elder in the Gongfa Department thinks that the protagonist will become a great person in the future because of the protagonist's desire to learn alchemy, so he wants to invest early. At that time, the elder said that the Chen family had no future because the heroine rejected him. These two points felt a bit contradictory. The third uncle, the grassroots steward of the Chen family, punished evil and promoted good. The cohesion at the bottom of the Chen family should be very good, and good money should drive out bad money. In fact, there are some strange parts of the plot, but I can still convince myself by trying to find reasons. These two points are too prominent and cannot be ignored. The parts that are better written include the protagonist's golden finger and the details of training.

He is not very capable and his temper is not small. When you are incompetent, can you be a little softer and tactful? It's like being brainless. If the protagonist didn't know how to die, it would also affect his family. I feel like the heroine's tone should not be so harsh at the beginning. The patriarch requested it at the request of her second uncle, and she just doesn't want the marriage. Aren't there many other people who are willing? If she has a nicer attitude, it's easy to say, and the patriarch will definitely not be angry. Seeing how tense it is later, I'm really speechless. Collapse

I have read a lot of male and female fantasy videos, and this one is pretty good. The author will continue to write well. I feel like it will be very popular in the future. Come on!

The author has started updating again, come on.