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The plot is too fragmented, the dialogue is too awkward, too bland, there are too many things outside the camera, and it is incoherent. After reading ten chapters, there is no climax. The protagonist is like an autistic child. The fishing plot is boring. To put it simply, I can't write a complete story. There is no feedback on the plot of the complete story. It seems that the entire text has no emotional drive. It is better to consider changing it.