Douluo: Chamber of Secrets, the Pope Only Wants to Take Shortcuts

I heard it's Liu Xuande, even if it's lumpy💩 I still want to taste it salty

The subject matter of this book is good, but the writing ruins it. What should be written should not be written There is a lot of nonsense that should not be written. When entering the plot, it was briefly mentioned without even a single dialogue. Then leave it alone and write a bunch of useless nonsense. The author is too novice, why not go find AI to polish it for you.

If you write a pornographic book, I will give you a little report

🙂 I haven't watched it yet, but how can I smash it to death? Just go through the soul directly, there are no plug-ins

The sentences are not fluent and the content is incoherent. The plot should be the main one and the color should be the supplement. But you have reversed it. Moreover, you want to write some colors but can't. It's quite boring for the readers.

Chapter 11, how should I put it? The cart was dragging half a car and it was racing wildly. The content was unbearable and the speed of the car was not good enough.

Your little royal essay is really good, it's so cool every day

First of all, I would like to introduce to you that this book is an interesting work with positive energy, correct views and interesting ideas. Hello? This author? Did your polygraph go off? Ahem... Anyway, it is mainly from the perspective of the protagonist Qian Xunji, a gentleman, and the main theme is a fun torture of anus, three, and Tang syndrome brothers! Of course, there will be some interesting interactions with the heroines during the process~ Please all the good brothers and sisters passing by, please bookmark this book and read it. Thank you for your love! That's the same sentence, all you good brothers and sisters just need to do is collect it and read it, the rest of the authors will really, really do it...

Well... First of all, it is a very heavy topic. The author tried to test the water today, but because the author's publishing time was not very good, it took more than 40,000 words to test the water. Because the platform stipulates that it cannot be put on the shelves during the water test period, so although it is reasonable to say that it can be put on the shelves if it contains 50,000 words, the author can only wait until more than 70,000 or 80,000 words will be put on the shelves after the water test is completed next week. Although the author of tens of thousands of words of paid chapters is missing, it is a bit of a loss, but after all, readers and friends have read tens of thousands of words for free. In order to make a living as an author, he has to rely on the love of readers and friends. In fact, if readers and friends are happy, the author can at least have something to eat... Okay, next, I will ask the author who cannot make a living to perform a change of face for you~ Now that all the good brothers and sisters are happy, can you save it and cast a monthly recommendation vote or something like that? The author really, really, really wants to advance to the next round... It's a ball... It's a ball...