Zongwu: I, Yang Guo, Am Actually the Grandson of the Jin Kingdom

Another book about mixed martial arts to challenge oneself. Writing about mixed martial arts leads to a dead end.

After Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu met each other, he didn't want to leave unless there were special circumstances. He would stay with Xiao Longnu in the ancient tomb for the rest of his life. In this way, the plot will be difficult to follow. In the original drama, most of the plot was introduced by Yang Guo in order to find the little dragon girl who left. Some authors asked Yang Guo if he wanted to be emperor. My opinion is no. After Yang Guo became emperor, how could he continue to write about Yang Guo leading the Kingdom of Jin to unify the countries?

The best mixed martial arts book I've read is Master of Fragrance. This book is pretty good so far. In fact, it would be better to write about mixed martial arts content, but the writing style is very particular. The force value should not be broken, and the main and sub-lines of the story should be clear.

The writing is really good, I read it in one sitting, but some words made me feel uncomfortable. To be honest, readers who like to watch mixed martial arts, in addition to watching various Guan Gong battles with Qin Qiong, also like to watch various female heroes competing for beauty and beauty. Writing about the pair of Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu naturally takes away half of the fun. Let's just look at this pair of pure love. This old couple is still playing pure love now. Even holding hands is considered out of bounds. There is also a dragon knight who pops out all day long to attack people. Apart from the dragon knight, no one can touch the little dragon girl, right? 🤭 In addition, Yang Guo wrote that it is difficult to fight Xuanming and Ming. His kung fu is not as good as that of Xiao Longnu, and he has no strength at all. He often abandons his martial arts, commits suicide and wipes his neck. If he practices Shenzhen Jing, others can be brought back to life. Xiao Longnu can't even suppress the cold poison, let alone cure it. I still hope that the author will think carefully about it. If you write Yang Guo, especially starting from the age after the Condor Heroes, at least make the person more chic and handsome, right? Not to mention being on par with Chu Liuxiang, Lu Xiaofeng must have it, right? As a result, I still wrote the same thing as the little Yakuza from Jiaxing all day long, which was a bit unjustifiable.

The writing is still good, it would be better if it wasn't mixed martial arts, ugh

It's a pity. If it weren't for Zongwu, more people would watch it. Next time, I'll stick with the single version of Shendiao. Most authors of Zongwu really can't grasp it.

When will you rewrite this book?

It's quite boring. My father is the crown prince of a country and my son is a wanderer.

Well written. However, the author of Zongwu often cannot grasp it in the later stage. I hope the author will polish it well and write it into a masterpiece.

His mother neither wants the protagonist to go to his father, Yang Kang, nor does she want the protagonist to be involved with the Guo family. In fact, it is easy to understand. As a mother, she does not want her children to be involved in political whirlpools, nor does she want to be a hero for the country and the people. She just wants her children to live a safe life without disaster, to be an ordinary person, marry and have children.

When was it signed? Was it stolen by the editor?

I think it is well written and very warm, between brother and sister, and between Yang Long and this life. The last life was mainly too tragic. The two went through too many hardships of life, separation and death, and were always under threat of life.

Author, just write a pure love story specifically. It's best to write about Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu, but you don't necessarily have to write about him. I feel that fighting mixed martial arts will only lead you to the eunuch journey, which is really not the case.

It's been several days, what's going on?

It looks really cool 😥

The writing is still good, with a lot of changes that are difficult to reconcile, and it is quite refreshing. However, the setting of rebirth is a bit incompetent, and it is not as good as the young Yang Guo gaining future memories or the reader traveling through time. It is true that judging from his interactions with Guo Xiang, even middle-aged Yang Guo is not less arrogant, but at this period Yang Guo is already very good in both Qi-nurturing skills and human sophistication. This can be seen from the plot of the ghost in a cave in Xishan and the respect for him by both good and evil masters in the world. Apart from Xiao Longnu, there was basically nothing that could make him happy or sad. If Yang Guo was really reborn, he might be disgusted with Guo Fu and the people of the Quanzhen Sect, but he would definitely not be so violent. After all, he had a deep enough understanding of them in his previous life. He would just shout and kill if there was no reason to mediate (except for Zhao Zhijing and Zhen Zhibing). His various psychological activities would not be so childish, and he would not have a heroic demeanor at all. Middle-aged Yang Guo is a wild and uninhibited Condor Hero, not a wanton self-proclaimed hero. When I saw the words "Don't take me seriously as the Condor Hero", I felt out of touch, and felt a little disfavored by Yang Guo. (Jin Yong likes Qiao Feng and Yang Guo the most, Guo Jing is too upright), and it goes without saying that Yang Guo valued Xiao Longnu at the end of his life. There is also "at the foot of Zhongnan Mountain, the tomb of the living dead, the Condor Heroes and the couple, extinct", even if he wants to change something in his life again. If he doesn't want to choose to live in seclusion, he will definitely prioritize Ouyang Feng and Xiao Longnu (Little Dragon Girl was very afraid of going down the mountain in the early days), and even Guo Jing may not care. After all, he has not set foot in Xiangyang City in sixteen years. Although he still respects Guo Jing, he still has a grudge. In short, if there is no rebirth setting, it would be fun to watch (I was forced to watch it as the young Yang Guo), and there are many things I want to complain about. This is the best Yang Guo fanfic I have ever seen. First of all, the author's writing is very good, not at the level of a noob; secondly, the character's personality is close to the original work; and finally, it is a rebirth novel, which is neither time travel nor system. No matter how the soul travels or the system is written, it will be interesting. Some suggestions for the author, 1. Yang Guo does not need to die of old age and be reborn. This is too eye-opening. You can consider rebirth after breaking off his arm. 2. Expand the content of the original work. Fans who choose to read Jin Yong's novels will not be afraid of you as long as your writing is exciting. Write more side plots. I gave up the book in the later period. It's not that your writing is not good, but that after leaving the original work, I have better choices. 3. The Divine Eagle is the most difficult to understand in Jin Yong's works. Various tragic characters, whether it is Guo Fu or the Cheng Lu sisters, can have emotional scenes with Yang Guo. Although Yang Guo only loves Xiao Longnu, it does not affect other people's love for Yang Guo. You can design more plots between Yang Guo and them to get acquainted. , Mutual acquaintance, and the process of unrequited love, because Xiao Longnu is destined, so as long as they are together, there will be no emotional drama in this book. In fact, everyone yearns for and awes Yang Long's pure love, but more readers are greedy and selfish, so even though it is a single female protagonist, you can be ambiguous and touch the readers' heartstrings. And you can develop and test the end of the story, which not only maintains the single female protagonist, but also gives readers room for imagination. After all, Yang Guo is not the only one who has trouble with the Condor Heroes. Five stars are given and I wish the author good results.

I'm very happy to find your book. I've read many fanfics, and yours is the one whose characters are the closest to the original. It means you have really seen it. The other books are basically covered with layers of cover, and their character is not as good as Zhen Zhibing. They are all teddy-like things.