Fox Spirit Matchmaker: Grinding My Way to Becoming an Immortal Dao Lord

When will the court begin?😄

You want peace between shemales, but you still want to eat demons? There is no concept of monsters in Fox Demon Matchmaker. As long as a demon is born with spiritual intelligence, it is almost the same as a human being. Some people say that Fox Demon Matchmaker's combat power system is rubbish. Think about it. The human race can reach the demon race's thousands of years of combat power in just a few decades. Without any settings, is it necessary for the demon race to exist?

Good-looking, dual cultivation of life and life, much better than the mentally retarded system of the fox demon

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

No, buddy, if you write so well, why would you give me a eunuch? Grass! ! ! !

A group of poisonous people, harem writers want to imitate others🎣readers. The heroine didn't even dare to take the initiative, so what excuse could she give. If you have this kind of writing skills🎣reader

As long as there are too many emotional lines and emotional scenes, it will instantly become alienating. One is that the fox demon itself prefers pure love, maybe? But the most important thing is that the writing can easily be very pretentious, or intellectual. A common problem with harem novels is that they give people the feeling that love is cheap. Fox Monster does not seem casual because most of them have independent stories. It is difficult for me to comment on this book. It is tasteless and should be discarded. . . It doesn't seem to be a pity, and for a fan, the progress of the main plot is very slow, quite slow. After reading dozens of chapters, when I look back, I feel like I haven't read anything at all. They are basically describing communication with people. The plot feels that there is not much progress at all, and the training and combat power are also relatively ambiguous. I have read it several times and I am not sure what the protagonist's level is. At least give me a comparison? In the middle, I went to work and opened a shop and so on, and got involved in some random things. The fox demon story is already long, and I don't know how long it will take to write it like this. I guess it's because there are too many female protagonists, and I don't want to write too much. Or maybe this is the focus of this book, so the focus is on describing the communication between characters. In the fox demon fanfic, it's okay to write about a single girl, but most of them will marginalize the emotional line when writing about multiple girls. , Mainly promote the main line, because to be honest, you have already opened a harem, and you still want to focus on the emotional line. As long as you can't do it like one person and one chapter, but multiple lines, no matter how you write it, there will be a feeling that the relationship is very cheap, you know, and then you push the main line on this basis, and it also gives people a feeling that the main line is also very marginalized. It is difficult to comment. I can only say that maybe some people like this better?

Damn it, the first time I watched a fox demon fanfic was the heroine 😰

The peace between shemales lies in the author being a eunuch