Academician Reborn in 1997: Decisive Battle at the Peak of Science and Technology

First of all, the writing is average, and the content is not very gripping. In my opinion, this kind of novel is about the protagonist slowly growing bigger and stronger, leading the team to surpass the United Kingdom and catching up with the United States, and finally leading all mankind/the country towards the future and the next node of human civilization. The growth stage is the high school novice village → the original accumulation of undergraduates → the vigorous development of graduate students → graduating from student status and reaching the top → standing at the top and leading mankind to the next stage. I don't know what you are thinking, but now I have seen Chapter 13, the early days of the high school novice village. Let's take a look at what I've seen so far: 1. Time confusion There is no clear division between time points. In many cases, the time divisions are just a few simple words embedded in natural paragraphs. It's very easy to have a situation where I think I'm looking at event A, but you're already writing about event B. Moreover, there are too many situations where the time and place do not match, or the location is blurred, or the time span is abnormal, resulting in the inability to have a clear understanding of what the characters are doing now and how the time is arranged. 2. Main plot arrangement For the protagonist, the three most important things in the high school novice village are: one is to ensure grades, the second is financial freedom, and the third is how to get out of the novice village. First of all, make sure that in terms of performance, the protagonist was a great scientist before his rebirth and did not change his body. That means there is no problem with the protagonist's learning ability and IQ. The content of high school is very simple for the protagonist's level. Even if you forget to pick it up, it's very simple. Let's talk about the setting. Secondly, there are many ways to achieve financial freedom. There are many ways, such as copywriting to earn royalties, part-time tutoring, buying and selling to earn information, my rich second-generation girlfriend/gay friend, etc., As long as the setting is reasonable; finally, how to get out of the Novice Village, there are three ways to go to college in this era: college entrance examination, competition, and going abroad. Then you need to know which method it is, and which part will focus most of the protagonist's energy or your writing. For now, I think you are going to compete. Let's start with the first one: you took the test the next day after you were born again, and you did very poorly because you forgot the high school content. This is fine and normal, but something went wrong with your plot here. First, you were criticized by teachers and parents for not doing well in the exam, and then you were laughed at by some classmates. Then you wrote the protagonist and started working hard, but in the end, it was gone and the protagonist went to compete. So what's the point of setting up this plot of being scolded for not doing well in the exam? Are you specifically angry with his dad and want his dad to die early? You were laughed at just because you were laughed at before? It's just baffling. The so-called gun in the last chapter will definitely be fired later. Since you wrote it and got slapped in the face, you have to put it back, or don't write it. You can completely arrange this part so that the time after rebirth is the first year of high school, and there is still a week to go until the final. I made a plan on how to study all the content of the first year of high school in one week and maintain my grades, and then intersperse some daily life in the middle. I will talk about the protagonist's class life and study content, shape the character of the protagonist, talk about the people around the protagonist, their relationship with the protagonist, and then create a traditional Chinese-style father image. I will finish the chapter and take the exam. The protagonist already knew that his father was sick, so his sister, who worked in the hospital during the holidays, set up a trap and took his father for a check-up. Later, he found out that it was a very unique type of lung cancer, which is rare in the world. He also learned through the doctor that Miss Ke had channels, so you found Miss Ke, you can negotiate the terms later, whether it is sending your dad abroad or going to a certain hospital, your family will borrow money from relatives to raise money for medical treatment, and in order to pay off debts, you can repair machine tools or earn manuscript fees. You can also set up some opportunities, and in the end you will be done without having to worry about money. The holiday is over and this big story has been brought to a close. The main plot has been changed into a branch plot, which means that this incident does not need to be overly worried. It is over without any regrets and the next stage is about the protagonist competing in the competition. Because the competition schedule according to my memory is from the second year to the third year of high school, so the second year of high school can be a combination of daily study and money making. I have done well in the preliminaries, and it is not a big problem to enter the provincial team. In the middle, I add some content about true fatherhood, kindness and filial piety, and I am ready to leave the novice village. I went to school for training during the break of my second year of high school. I started the provincial competition after my second year of high school. I went to the provincial team for a few days to train after class. At the end of October, I went to the national competition to win the gold medal and enter the Qingbei novice village completely. The first big chapter was concluded. The second point has been interspersed with the above. Let me just tell you what is wrong with what you wrote: The first is the part about repairing machine tools. Earlier you said that the state-owned enterprises were not very profitable and could not give much, and later you said that a manager tore up a check to give money. It is obvious that you are wrong. The money from state-owned enterprises is not that easy to give and not that easy to get. This is the style of small bosses in private enterprises. Furthermore, you wrote earlier that when you met the professor, you heard the BP machine beeping and ran to find your father. Later, when the factory boss gave you money, you became coy and inconsistent. There is also a setting point in this area. There is a BP machine in the front. Why did the protagonist buy another one in the back? Whose bp machine was it? You didn't write it clearly either. Second, I guessed based on the catalog that you posted nature in order to prove the scientific research value of the protagonist and meet the conditions for sending your father to the United States for medical treatment. The default here is the main journal. Although Nature is a weekly, it does not mean that Nature can review the manuscript so quickly. Will it really be in time when you receive the approval or minor revision of the paper? San Ye said it in the first chapter, so I won't say much here. Anyway, the preliminaries were not a problem at all when I played in CNBO. However, since I understand the level of competition in Inner Mongolia, I can apply for the process. I really don't know that the provincial competition will attract the attention of professors in cutting-edge fields. Here is a detailed description of the tests I took: the preliminary round, where candidates were screened within the school; the preliminaries, where candidates were screened by the city; the provincial competition, where people were screened by the province; I was not qualified for the national competition and did not make the provincial team. 3. Character Creation I don't see it. You even stated the characters with great care. I just remember that the protagonist used to be a nb. A few professors missed their names and did not detail who was doing what. The lives of these professors in cutting-edge fields are very casual. They don't know what they are doing. They come and go when called upon. Are they really professors? That's all, come on

Whether it is to publish a paper to participate in a competition, or to develop a technology startup, there are dozens of chapters, and there is no focus.

Just say it directly, Dad, I failed this exam because I was worried about your health and had no time to study. If you don't check your body, I will still worry about you and you still can't calm down while studying. You'd better go and check your body. In this case, I can't believe that my father didn't check his body.

Are you a eunuch?😰