Midnight Countdown

The first chapter seems very confusing. There are too many characters appearing at once, and it is not clear who the protagonist is, making it impossible for readers to focus on it. Entering into a profound plot at the beginning instead of describing clearly what happened from the shallower to the deeper. You may have a good story, but the camera angle keeps shaking at the beginning, which makes people very uncomfortable. Unless you are a very famous author and readers will be more patient because of your fame, you should give more thought to the readers.

The writing is quite good, and it seems to be a text that can withstand careful reading. You may have to be mentally prepared for whether the book will be well received or not. After all, mainstream readers like to read works that are effortless, make them feel at ease, and feel refreshing. If you plan to write an article out of personal pursuit, you can continue to describe some conflicts and conflicts in human nature and beliefs, and have some ideas. If you hope to have a better commercial effect, you can consider using more space to write the story. After all, Internet readers generally have no humanistic pursuits.

Let's talk about the advantages first. So far, the most outstanding part of this book should be the storyline and the sparks generated when the characters' beliefs collide. The most typical one is definitely Zheng Han's death. As for the shortcomings, the author said it himself in chapter 65. The perspective switching in the early stage is a bit fast. When the readers are not fully familiar with the main line of the story, it will cause dyslexia and even feel that they are scribbling in 🦐jb. Although from the back, it is all serving the main line, but the reader does not know the main line from the front. I don't know which external website the author is from. Otherwise, the results of this book should be better. As of now (Chapter 65), this is it. We will wait and see in the future. In summary, the writing is very good. It suffers from the shortcomings of the writing techniques of the first few pictures. If the main line of the story is stabilized, the later stages should be very exciting.

It's three forty in the morning. I saw less than half of it. It's so good. Let me stop and praise it for now and then continue watching.

The book is a good book, but I gave it up because I was tired from reading it. Come on, author. . .

Why hasn't it been updated yet? The donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

The writing is pretty good, why are my grades so bad? Come on

What? If you don't let me guess who you are, why are you doing an external station? You want to give it back but won't let it go?

The Abandoned Prison has a nomenclature-of-the-night flavor at the beginning. The more I watch it, the more I like it. I can only say that the writing is pretty good so far, so give me a monthly vote to support it.

Not bad, but the description of the relationship between the male protagonist and the two worlds is a bit too much. It feels like I see the male protagonist every two days and "looks familiar, I don't want to think about it anymore" and "let go of useless speculation for now"