Begin Immortality with Liver Proficiency

I stopped reading after reading 20 chapters. Those comments are all gay. If you are a woman, you will be killed. The author also wrote with a few readers. I read the novel for the fun. If it is not a free chapter that explains logic to you, it will become a big reader. A group of elementary school students.

The writing is so seasoned, so I'm not a newcomer.

Not like a newcomer, like the reincarnation of an old eunuch

As soon as I arrived in the world of cultivating immortals, I found a couple cultivating with two women 🙂🙂🙂

I saw that Holy Girl Li, who was beaten to death without much strength when she was alive. After she died, she still had an obsession to guide her to kill the protagonist. It was disgusting. A big lump.

At this level, it feels like some old man's trumpet 😰

How do you write it? It's written according to the Newborn Demon Sect.

This realm is so chaotic that it is sometimes low and sometimes high. Is a late-stage Great True Lord afraid of an early-stage one? Did the author write one thing and forget another? 😰😰

I saw that the protagonist's weapon, a hammer head as big as a washbasin and a hammer handle more than two meters long, weighed just over 200 kilograms and was already unbearable. Did the author have any misunderstanding about the weight of iron?

I feel that all the subsequent foundation building is copied from the First Saint Sect.

The currency system is not designed well. The five-day meal allowance in a small county is 1,000 taels, which is just the meat of exotic animals, with a double increase. And this is your first shot. What do you think is illogical?

It's a great read, the writing is very good, never sloppy, the narrative is compact, almost no poisonous points, and the logic is self-consistent. Now I just regret reading it too early. After reading it, I fell into a painful pursuit of updates. The author quickly mutated it and learned how to code words in a shadow clone! ! ! I have some thoughts after reading this book. As an old bookworm, I have read countless books and have become immune to many poisonous points. I have seen many books, and the book reviews say that I am an expert in a certain industry and make mistakes. This is actually very funny, because as an online writer, if it can be accurate in the professional field, it will be a magic book, so the requirements do not need to be strict. There are also many books. The whole book is full of fateful epics and a sense of prophecy. The protagonist is like a puppet on strings, insisting on conforming to a certain prophecy. The protagonist of such a book does not even have himself, and is too far behind the strong. There are also some books where, while suppressing the protagonist's combat power level, he also insists on the protagonist relying on his status as an ant to participate in far-reaching events. He is constantly being coerced and involuntarily made, and while he gets home feeling angry, he still hangs up and uses various adventures and coincidences to allow the protagonist to play a decisive role. The whole book is full of a strange sense of paradox. I can accept some coincidences, but it is difficult to accept that the protagonist plays a decisive role in the key events of the life and death of the world population. This means that without the protagonist, the world will be destroyed and the population will become extinct. This results in the supporting characters often acting like fools. This novel satisfies my needs. The last one I enjoyed reading was Aunt Shen's early novel. Come on. It can be seen that the author is not a newcomer. As long as he does not fall into the cliché, he will definitely become popular. Come on!

I felt good when I wrote it before, but it got worse and worse later on, and I was even more incomprehensible in the new world.

Oh my god, it's just over 400 chapters to build the foundation. Do you need to write thousands of chapters to finish it?

I've seen a lot of this recently. The process of adding points to the system is written like the Sims. It can't all be AI.

In the AI ​​text, especially in the section about the machine city, all the mechanical transmissions are wrong. All the cushioning and airbags are out there, but there is no logical connection at all. The author is also very flattering.

The strength of the foundation-building practitioners is as dazzling as that of true immortals, but their lifespan is only a few hundred years. It seems really inconsistent.

I just started watching it. There won't be any poisonous plot to whitewash the empress in the end.

I have read so many bad novels, and this is the first time I have read one that starts from the beginning, and is full of poison from the 70th to 80th chapter.

Chapter 522. The protagonist is currently in the middle stage of foundation building. When will the golden elixir and Yuanying be obtained? Will he invade the wizarding world, the world of gods and ghosts, and the wild world?

When the man surnamed Jiang started to grab the pancakes, I thought the protagonist planned to sneak attack because he was afraid that he would not be able to defeat him. However, he ran to the man surnamed Jiang to ask for pancakes. I wanted to know why he wanted to give the pancakes to him in the first place.

Why did your book get cold so quickly? I haven't watched it for almost 2 months. When I came back, it was almost too cold.

The main foot slides and kneels all the way, kowtows all the way, and then fights with the trapezius muscles. It feels like the front and back are not written by the same person. The personality is very divided and it is uncomfortable to watch.

Martial arts has become a cultivator, why do you think martial arts is weak😥

There is no readability. There is very little storyline. 70% Of it is spent practicing silently. There is no climax and it is dry and dry.

Isn't this enough to add more updates?

Your writing style, the order of sentences is out of order, and you like to make up words yourself, but the words you make up don't convey the meaning. I'm really speechless and tired of reading. If you don't have the ability, don't make up your own words. After you finish writing it, read it and see if it goes well.

Can I retrieve sperm?

I just learned about martial arts, but when I got to the world of immortality, I turned into a beast and a demon 😓

I can't stand it anymore. I didn't get close to women before I left the world of gods and martial arts. After I left, I started to learn the tricks of the First Saint, including CB. Isn't it too dazzling and depressing?