Man Covers the Sky, Abstraction Becomes Emperor

This routine is the most disgusting! The Emperor still needs those three melons and two dates in the plot? ! It just seems stupid!

It's almost like the protagonist had a problem with the fourth life. There was a problem with the brain. The abstract ideas in his head caused the Tao Fruit of the first three lives to appear in a systematic way. Then the protagonist killed the Tao and finally solved it?

Zhetian writes the system running part. It doesn't look cool, and the smell is not strong enough to cover the sky. It seems that a large number of eunuchs escaped from cultivation. The overall feeling is unremarkable, and I don't know whether the eunuchs practiced the female-less style or the harem promoted the female style. As a result, readers have no desire to read, and readers wait and watch or run away.

The protagonist is not written as abstract, but as if he has a low IQ. The author's writing is not realistic at all. It's really not good to write about eunuchs at this level. 🙂 If you don't know how to write ruthlessly, you can refer to the descriptions of arrogant people in the Dreaming of the Gods book. This is the best way to write. If you are awesome, you will make people kneel down and be like dogs. The main theme is arrogance. The author also describes the protagonist and women. It can be seen that you have never been with girls at all. The protagonist has no personality charm at all. Even an honest person cannot get into this kind of protagonist. I suggest you, don't treat the protagonist and the female character equally, write it from a superior and active perspective, for example, kneel down and be a bitch to me.

If you are at this level, I suggest you stop writing novels and study how other people write novels. They are written like a running account. The plot is driven by soliloquies. There is no protagonist in the main line and you are like a headless fly. Your writing style is also bad. You should study how others write novels. It is not enough to write a running account when your head is hot.

Cut it! What a waste of time

There was no explanation of the time at the beginning, and the subsequent transformations were not regressed without cultivation. It was so confusing that I couldn't figure out the ideas and couldn't understand it. You have cultivated to the level of the Great Emperor and you still go to eat the Emperor's soldiers. How did you master it? ? ?

It's just insulting my IQ and fucking my brain.

Covering the sky and fighting the earth, if you abstract it completely, people will not click on it when they see it. After looking at dozens of pictures, I feel that it is just like the eunuch training style. The content is also very bland, there is no climax or interesting point, and the protagonist's ability, charm and behavior are all ordinary. This style should be used to write mortal works. This style is too inconsistent in "Zhetian". It is more suitable for you to write a mortal's immortality biography fanfic. Moreover, this level in several lives is too high. It is better to write that the protagonist starts practicing at the same age as the original protagonist, so that at least the protagonist will not appear too high. The level of eunuch training is definitely unqualified, and it is difficult to achieve results. Moreover, your title is abstract, but the content is not abstract at all, which is suspected of being a headline. Come on, author, I hope you can achieve some results🤭

The original work lives another life, and the cultivation level increases again. The protagonist lives another life and starts from zero so that he can follow Ye Fan. It is better not to write the first three chapters.

It's extremely poisonous. He went to Yaochi to kill the female Holy Spirit for no reason. He's really sick. That stone was left behind by Wu Shi's experiment on resurrecting his mother. It's not bad. He ran over there and killed her. It makes me sick to death.

Fans of Zhetian all have the same routine now, and there are too many similar plots, such as using Ye Fan's elixir at the beginning, the opportunity to follow up with Ye Fan, or a similar big boss rebuild. But I am thinking about the Nirvana of Hongchenxian in the previous lives. Ye Fan and the ruthless emperor have strengthened their combat power, and there is no rebuild. This rebuild routine is written like this in several books.

Rubbish, the Fourth Emperor is like this

Zhe Tian fan has written badly, so the harem is still a bit popular, and other routines have been exhausted, and I have no desire to read it. You say this book is abstract, but I really don't think so. You can learn from the book Chat Group: People in Douluo, Harm to All Heavens. The author has a good attitude and deserves praise

My brain is gone. Poison

Brother, if something is wrong, you must say it. Don't leave quietly. If you don't want to change it, I will correct it 😭😭😭

Other authors started with three golden chapters, but yours started with three golden chapters, and you just pulled a big one.

Not even qualified to be an electronic mustard

The title of this book is a bit poisonous. After reading the comments from friends, I have no motivation to read it. There are too many re-repair routines written by Zhetian fans.

It's okay. I've seen too many shows that show off and slap people in the face. You can also watch this one.

There is only one special physique in a great world. In Ye Fan's era, only Zixia is an innate Tao fetus. It has never been set that there are two same innate Tao fetuses in Ye Fan's era. Also, your subject matter is similar to that of other fans.

The protagonist can suffer Tao injuries (or follow the immortal path of mortals). And there can be reincarnation. At worst, the ruthless person will be born directly. (For example, when fighting a crippled immortal or something strange, the protagonist and the ruthless man die together with the opponent) The protagonist barely survives the next life (but it is basically equivalent to a state of confusion)