Zhetian: I Have a Supreme Bone

Nowadays, many people who watch Zhetian Doujin have a strange symptom; when they say they want to take xx things, change xx things, etc., They will jump out and say: "Then the future Araye Chu will beat you to death directly." Or "Did they allow you to take it?" Anyway, they are the ones who are above the sacrificial path, restrain themselves, will they allow their past to be changed? If you retort that the protagonist will also be a priest in the future, wouldn't it be enough? At this time, they will ask why the protagonist is offering sacrifices? I don't understand. If you already think this way, why do you want to read this? Isn't it best to hold the original and chew on it? I really don't understand this mentality of wanting to watch fan fiction but not being able to see the original plot being changed.

The first chapter is so redundant. A group of viewers are watching the protagonist choose a cheat to travel through the sky? So awesome, what are the four people above the altar doing? Randomly change history/interfere with their growth process, I don't understand why

Have you ever grown a supreme bone? Some things are scribbled and taken for granted.

Nangong's line is quite interesting, but the setting of the Dimension Theater is too clownish.

Have you thought about what weapon to train? The more you dig out the Supreme Bone, the stronger it will be. You can train all the old bones that will be transformed into the weapon in the future. This way, you don't have to find training materials and can grow with the protagonist's strength.

It's okay, but it's a pity that Ye Fan is not accepted

To be honest, there is no need to repeatedly mention the Supreme Bone. The Supreme Bone did not appear in the era after the Emperor of Desolate Heaven. It was an era of physical constitutions. I thought it was some special divine body. The Supreme Bone is mentioned in every chapter. Living with the Supreme Bone is like a thief. If you are really afraid of the Devouring Heaven lineage, don't hide. The first part of cultivation is to find a small sect to join... The title of the book can be changed to "Become a Heavenly Emperor with a Supreme Bone". To be honest, the Tuntian lineage captured Ye Fan because he was a lone wolf. Do you think there was a special effort to capture the core divine body of the Holy Land Imperial Clan?

Both respecting the original work and not respecting the original work are really fighting each other. The original text clearly states that there is only one instrument for the birth of a saint, Wu Shi, Chaos Body Ye Xian, and the two sons of the Immortal Emperor are not said to be saints. There is also the Wu Shi inheritance, which is even more nonsense. Did Ye Yishui find it? Why don't you talk about the original work? There will be darkness and turmoil in the year 200. Wu Shi still has the essence and blood to possess and fight for him. How can it be possible to collect Qi Emperor Jade?

I feel that the setting is too ridiculous. There are more than 200 supreme techniques. In fact, no matter how strong or weak it is and who uses it, there are only a dozen of them.

Later people... Skip the first chapter. I clicked on this book countless times... Only yesterday I got through the first chapter and read the whole thing. The dissuasive effect of the first chapter is extremely strong... So strong that I can't even bear to say it's a disgusting thing for fear that everyone will miss this pretty good fanfic. Although there are a lot of little poisons in the whole text, the whole story is really good (except for the first chapter!!!), So I skip the first chapter~it won't affect the reading~trust me!

The main character's weapon is very flashy, and it doesn't make any difference what the Zhetianli weapon does in the later stages. Why would you create such a strange thing? It personally affects my perception.

I seem to have seen a similar eunuch who had Supreme bones all over his body.

How free does the empress have to be to see how many times you have used this routine? Isn't it disgusting?

Too much emphasis on ruthlessness makes it boring to watch.

It's too bland. Since I took the script of "Zhetian", I want to feel happy. I see that the only climax now is Zishan's transformation into the holy body.

Let me first see how you can compile 206 different kinds of Supreme Treasure Techniques. They have names, effects, and cannot be repeated.

The fusion of the innate holy body and the Taoist fetus should be considered a small climax, but the writing is too bland.

Still in Dao Palace, do you think what you wrote is original? It's too slow.

It's well written, but it's too overwhelming.

What kind of skills should the descendants of that Yan so-and-so Demon Emperor practice? They chose tonic methods when they couldn't figure out the protagonist. Because the six senses are blocked and the protagonist does not get any benefits from cultivation, it does not count as a double cultivation for both parties. Now that this is done, author, please tell me that the protagonist you set is a character with mutual interests. When you invest in Ye Tiandi, you also want to make friends with the invincible emperor, and the ordinary emperor is on the roadside. This is your original text. The protagonist in your novel does not want any benefits after being recruited, but instead recognizes the other person as one of his on the spot as if he has done something wrong? Tell me why? Why not make a consensual deal with benefits? On the other hand, the one who got the benefit, Yan Shi, had a bitter look on his face because he had suffered a loss. The protagonist collapsed on the spot and promised to call him if something happened in the future. Oh my god? Brother, author, are you normal? Are they taking the path of cultivation? According to the world view of cultivating immortals, I am very curious about where the first blood is at its disadvantage, which is comparable to or surpasses the Holy Body? Could it be that Yan is the Cauldron Holy Body, so the protagonist gets a big advantage? Maybe it's a turtle, I can't understand it.

It's not a bit satisfying to see it on the shelves. Also, it's better to write less fanfics to improve the plot and logic settings of the original work. If it's really a drama, just use your strengths and avoid weaknesses.

In the first chapter, the protagonist chooses to start. The protagonist can analyze the risks and give up on the first eight options. Why does the ninth option not consider the risks and gamble that he can survive and achieve nirvana? Even equivalent to creating an enemy at the beginning, there are still 206 enemies of the Supreme Bone Origin. The ninth option, what if you pass through and are at the time when you have just taken your origin? What if that person wants to completely kill the dying protagonist? Not considering it is just betting, so why not bet on the first few options? For example, bet that the elixir will be safe when it takes form, bet that a saint can become the emperor, bet that you can seize the opportunity by taking the emperor's weapons, bet that the supreme being can live out the third life, bet that the Tao fetus can be saved by Wu Shi Houshou and Zhong Bao? Also, you haven't written down what time period it was in the past? This is also a very important piece of information. What if it was millions of years before the plot started? Or even several lifetimes of Ye Fan? These will affect the decision. For example, if you choose a Taoist child, what if you are born before the Emperor of the West and are not saved? What should I do if I choose Supreme, but I end up being millions of years away from the plot and I can't survive? I suggest you revise the first chapter. It is best to explain the time it will take for each option to be reached. At the same time, you should narrow down your intention to let the protagonist choose the ninth option. It would be better for the protagonist to compare carefully or find that there are risks before betting.

The basic length of the fic is 500-800 chapters. There are very few fics with more than 1,000 chapters. Chapter 130 is still in the Dao Palace. I am also drunk. A saint-to become an emperor requires at least 200 chapters.

Single heroine? Or do you engage in ambiguity but refuse to accept it?

After meeting Yan Ruyu, the level of writing and plot suddenly dropped. Originally, the protagonist was the one scheming behind the scenes, with no worries and single-minded pursuit of truth. However, it turned out that he had just started to take a turn for the better, and immediately started to take care of his family, and then helped Yan Ruyu get revenge, which inexplicably increased the burden and risk.

I recommend a million-word niche book "I Can Go to the Past and the Future". The first chapter is voiced by a female loli author. It is a male-channeled light novel. It is a passionate adventure interspersed with daily love affairs. The floating city in the interstellar era is the world view, and the magic potion sublimation + sequence is the core of the timeline setting text. The plot is interlocking with wits + decisive killing. There are many foreshadowings such as grass snakes and gray lines. There are no bloody routines and brainless plots. It is relaxed, interesting and semi-invincible. Brothers and sisters who are interested can come and take a look, maybe you will like it.

Who is the heroine and who is currently having an affair?

I've read 50 chapters, and the overall writing is really good. Come on, author, I couldn't stand a lot of fans after reading about 30 chapters. Before, Qin Xian was just fine.

I hope the Earth chapter is written with more passion, the original work is a bit bland

Can there be more emotional scenes between Yan Ruyu and Yan Ruyu?