People Are in Huayu, Dimensionality Reduction Strikes!

I have read more than 30 chapters, and the rest are pretty good, except that the author's descriptions are a bit redundant, especially the male protagonist's appearance, voice, actions, etc. The writing is very detailed, but it's a bit like embroidering lace again on a lace skirt. The plot progresses a bit slowly, the identity is pressed for too long, and the fun is about to expire. This is just for reference, I hope the author will get better and better.

The advantage is that it is very literary and artistic, so the interaction between the male and female protagonists is exciting. The disadvantage is that it is too literary and artistic, and all scenes have a literary and artistic atmosphere. If it is too much, it will look a bit artificial.

Personally, I think the author should lead readers to disenchant these stars. Many so-called celebrities cannot even be called actors. In the eyes of the general public, how can any serious family send their children to the entertainment industry? Most of the reason why art schools have overcrowded their art exams is because their cultural scores are so poor that there is nothing they can do about it. How many parents are willing to push their children into a pit of fire? Before liberation, most of the eight alleys in Beijing were occupied by opera troupes instead of theaters.

Damn, are you still recruiting women? I don't really want to see it! ! ! I haven't even cleaned up the mess, but I'm still messing around! ! !

After reading Chapter 195, the male protagonist simply doesn't regard the female protagonist as a human being. It's okay if there is no interest relationship. This kind of relationship that is completely between rivals is also played.

This book doesn't have many subscriptions, but the author's writing style is one that I like very much. So if I want the author to write less female protagonists in the next book, just write a few more popular florets seriously. There are too many books in this book, and it's a waste of time.

Seriously? Then it's best not to get back together. It's over now. I still respect her as a great heroine.

After reading more than 200 chapters, Reba and Jing Tian actually appeared, and they even started to eat them. I flipped through the table of contents at the back, and there was Reba. Just write 95 Flowers properly. I don't know why you added these. According to the time in your book, a female star who was 3 or 40 years old in the entertainment industry can still eat. You are really hungry. You were tired of watching Yang Mi and Reba, but here you are again. Forget it, I changed the book.

The author's writing about Zhou Ya is too awkward, and the writing is too clumsy. If he didn't reconcile with Zhou Ya, he should have cut it off long ago. If he still wants to reconcile, then writing this way will make many readers feel uncomfortable and abandon the book. Even I, who really like to read this kind of plot, want to abandon the book. The author should hurry up and finish this plot.

I like every heroine in the character card, but I really don't understand why I chose to start so late... In 2021, just seeing this timeline, many readers will simply ignore this book without even taking a look. The last time I posted a comment, the author told me that he would change some of the realistic settings of the heroine, but many readers didn't know... With your opening, many readers immediately judged you. After all, most entertainment writers at Qidian strive for truth and basically write close to reality. Many readers also default to this. Also, at the beginning of 2021, what should I write? This aspect is also a bit of a screening of readers. Many readers feel that there is nothing to write or read after just one glance. I really like the author's writing style. I feel that the timeline you chose to start is a thankless one. Of course, the author may have his own rhythm and ideas, and maybe he has found another way... I simply believe that it is not worthwhile for the author to write like this. The two aspects I mentioned will filter out too many readers for you. Even if the subsequent writing is good, the upper limit of the score will be severely limited.

I haven't read it for a few days, and I'm catching up on it today. It's a pity to see that the author's self-report of poor performance has been changed to a single chapter, so I just made up my feelings for everyone's enjoyment. As for Chinese entertainment literature, after reading so much, there are only two categories: one is career-oriented, with a director's perspective, an actor's perspective, a screenwriter's perspective, and even some more special ones, such as photography or special actors. Point, if you write it well, you will start to sew it while adding a certain amount of your own personal stuff, and learn from a few good settings of good works. This type of writing is still interesting, but it requires a certain threshold of professional knowledge or artistic reserves, but you are afraid that you will start to enjoy yourself if you write too much (such as The Birth of the Best Director, Famous Paintings Every Day). The other type is entertainment stories that are based on real-life celebrities and some emotional lines of characters. Of course, there are fairy heroines, 85-flower-based ones, and 95-flower-based ones. Speaking of which, this book is basically in the second category, focusing on the 95-flower love line. The books that focus on the emotional line can be divided into those that focus on the heart or the kidneys. Of course, there is no conflict. For example, books that are fatter mainly focus on the kidneys, but they are not free of heart. The topic comes back again. I can feel that the author of this book is trying to be careless, but the new female main lines that are constantly being developed in the later period have diluted this feeling. The lines of Yezi and the princess are OK. I can feel that the two emotions are progressive, but the other ones are not good. I can help a little if I meet. Ma has a crush on people such as Tian Jingzhang, or he has a clever setting to show off his crush on Chuan Dudu. The author has rationalized this with a background such as a technological genius and high appearance, but unfortunately, readers should think that most of them are real-life goblins, so it still feels awkward. It doesn't mean that there are only a few female protagonists, but there must be a main body to focus on the description. I always said that the Hippo male model almost vomited after watching the two scenes in Xinjiang, but you have to admit that with these two, only the ones who are in a group can evolve. In this book, Yezi or Dudu could hold this (main palace) position, but unfortunately, no such person was found in the later period. Other problems include too many side descriptions, which the author is also aware of, but this is not limited to modifications, such as big V speeches and fan circle speeches. Reading too much is really aesthetic fatigue. AI grabs a lot, and occasionally appears, XX comments on something, and watching too much affects the perception. As for the setting of acting as a genius in the technology industry, I feel it is a bit inconsistent but it is not unacceptable. However, the cancellation of the subscription shows that the public still cannot accept it. After all, everyone watches Ma Yun's acting and singing as a joke. Suddenly, he has an awesome male protagonist at the beginning, and it is inevitable that he will be ridiculed by the resource guy. After all, it is normal for male protagonists in entertainment stories to have a strong background, but everyone knows that the most popular person in our country must be in politics, but this is like the elephant in the room and cannot be written, and it is difficult to compare business with specialized urban business stories, and the male protagonist in online stories will not be embarrassed. Everyone knows that the result is just different in terms of JD/PDD/Douyin/Didi investment. But after all, it is an entertainment article, and the background function allows him to maintain himself and not suppress or block him. After all, acting in good dramas and improving his status step by step is an enduring pleasure. It is not easy to write entertainment articles about 95 flowers. Most of the authors are motivated by love. I still hope that the author will work hard and support you.

Why is this book so bad? Literary youth plus settings suffer from these two points, which will filter out a large number of viewers. Interacting with Little Flowers in the Entertainment Industry is very well written and is on par with the previous book.

Doesn't the author know that Lei Jun's reputation is a bit bad now?

The male protagonist is a doctor of medicine, born around 1990, and is good at both scientific research and clinical practice. For some reason, he participated in the recording of a program in 2021 (it's called Taohuawu, I might just work in a Chinese restaurant 5), and he met the female protagonist (basically Zhou Ye, it may not be a single one, no more than 3, and there is also Tian Xiwei, the last one is 95 flowers to be determined). The male protagonist's family background, the initial setting is that his mother is from Z (either the principal or secondary, he can be the leader of a certain department of the selection department or a power plant), his father has been in business for many years (biotechnology), and he understands masks in three years. In short, the relationship is in place What I need help with is: how to write after the show is over, and how to develop the plot based on the male protagonist's career? There can't be a situation where the heroine's relatives become critically ill every three days...

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It took me a few days to catch up on the latest chapter. Let me first share my thoughts and share my subjective opinions on the advantages and disadvantages. A special reminder that the following content is all personal subjective sharing and does not have objective value reference. : ①The description of Jiangzhou and fishing fires in Taohuawu and the Chinese restaurant directly enshrines the gods. I was attracted to subscribe by the description of the plot in Taohuawu ②Personally, I think Wen Qingdian's narrative method is not bad. I used Mr. Storyteller's A before I feel very good when I listen to the book on voice, laugh ③ I don't dislike the setting of the male protagonist who is a technology tycoon coming to join the entertainment industry, but in the later period it seems that he is basically engaged in the technology industry. In the early stage, the so-called semi-retirement status and people in China Entertainment seem to be off topic. I can only say that entering the entertainment industry is pure I want to get to know female stars and then sleep with them. "Dimensionality reduction attack, sleep with female stars" is more suitable (dog head) ④ Zhou Ye's happy puppy and Zhang Jingyi are free and easy and natural in the early stage, and the smiling eyes and otherworldly characters in the middle period also attracted me. The chapters of a one-woman drama perfectly combine Oda, Junko, Nan Nan and Byakugan. It is a rare highlight moment in the later period (so far). There is a kind of warm feeling that makes these people suddenly come alive, and they are no longer stereotyped characters. ⑤The male protagonist's live speeches in the early and middle stages and the author's understanding of AI were very to my liking. : ① It is not a problem to have many female protagonists and supporting characters in harem novels, but it cannot be written as a scumbag novel. To put it bluntly, it is not a problem to attract many women if you are rich and talented, but you cannot feel guilty about Yezi one second and receive calls from other women the next second. You immediately become gentle and affectionate again. This is too fragmented. It's like A's father just died and he's still grieving, but after receiving a call from his best friend, he immediately ran to the bar to dance. Do you understand this feeling? Do you feel the urge to clench your fists and beat A to death after watching it? Therefore, it is recommended to spread the timeline a little further and not move forward or backward. ②The plot in the middle and later stages is a bit dull. It is probably about the male protagonist meeting with various big bosses to start his career. The female protagonist comes to meet the male protagonist wearing xxx clothes. The male protagonist starts to give the recipe, cut vegetables and cook. After they are full of wine and food, the two start to make love to each other, and then the template is changed. The next heroine will come again. If you watch too much, it will be boring : About Zhou Ye, many people think that the author has written Zhou Ye to waste, although I personally think that the emotional frustration of the harem story should not be delayed too long because the plot is not enjoyable. This has caused the popularity of this character to decline, but I don't think Zhou Ye's writing is wasted. Anyone with a discerning eye can see that Zhou Ye's plot is just to flesh out the character. Maybe the author feels that it's too monotonous to be all about pastiche, and needs something else to enrich it, and as a It is very reasonable for Zhou Ye, the first heroine, to take on this role. However, it is a pity that Zhou Ye who likes the author's work is probably because the author gave her the character of a happy puppy. And if Zhou Ye breaks away from the character of a happy puppy, is he still the happy puppy that everyone likes? Obviously, when Happy Puppy is no longer happy, the plot that was supposed to enrich the heroine's character has suffered backlash. All readers who like this Happy Puppy will ask a philosophical question in their hearts. When Zhou Yeye grows up and returns after experiencing emotional turmoil, is he still the Happy Puppy I like? This is a matter of opinion, because I don't know, because I also asked myself this philosophical question... Then I thought, she is not... This is why I can understand the direction of her paragraphs in the later plot about Zhou Ye, but I have no expectations... My happy puppy stayed in Taohuawu. No matter what, the author's skills are there, and the descriptions of several plots make people excited. I hope the author can continue to work hard and make his works better and better.

On December 11, 2025, coconuts were at Dior House in Sanlitun, Beijing.

It's the first time I've read a book of this type and it's quite interesting. But is there too many female protagonists? Do you have any similar recommendations?

95 Flowers is currently popular, and fans generally don't have time to support the novel. The author will have to wait for a few years, and when 95 Flowers is over, fans will have time to come to Qidian for comfort.

I'm a little tired of it. The more I read, the more boring I get. The length of Zhou Ye is too short. It's too miserable.

Refined

Suddenly I feel that the protagonist's rebirth should be the new world created by the AI ​​of Thirteen 😰😰😰

When will the second update be resumed, Hakimi?

The author's writing skills, especially the detailed description of the environment and characters, are very literary and artistic, and the writing is quite graphic. The heroines are not too facial, but if it hurts the cool points that rely on hot searches to highlight or some weird cool feelings, it seems a bit fragmented😟. Overall, I am very happy to watch it 🙂‍↔️, and it looks good. Some of the transitions and connections could be smoother 😁

Did it end so suddenly?😰

This chapter is all about psychological description

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I personally like Bailu very much, but it's hard to comment on Bailu's position in this book!