
I'm a Boxing Champion in Tokyo
我在东京当拳王
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 324k Words
- Genre
- Sports
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Sporting Events
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's a little bit poisonous, you box as long as you want, and then the heroine also punches, but your sister won't box for you. She tried to fight the gangster but failed, so she hit the old woman. After writing dozens of chapters, the heroine was ready to box, and you are still down there as an audience 😁
According to the progress of this plot, it is estimated that the protagonist will not be able to officially play a game in another month.
The author's writing skills are good, but the plot progress is extremely slow. He said he wanted to be a boxing champion, but it has almost 200,000 words so far, and he has not played a formal match. I don't know why I participated in this black boxing competition organized by gangsters for no reason, and played more than ten chapters. Moreover, the organizer, who wants to rely on the 300,000 yen prize money, has several professional fighters, even boxing champions, who are speechless.
At the beginning, the protagonist acted as a sparring partner and had a fight with others. Then, we didn't see the protagonist boxing with anyone until more than 30 chapters. The character of the sister also didn't see any meaning. Apart from opposing the protagonist's boxing, there was no plot.
I wrote about an amateur boxing match from chapter 40 to chapter 89, and then went off topic to write about an NPC's fighting career, and also wrote extras for some passers-by. It's really weird. They are characters that the protagonist encounters along the way and will never appear again. Who cares about their past and present lives?
The plot is too hard-core, especially in the two-dimensional circuit, and there is no distinction between priorities. This is not a female channel, nor is it a transformation story. The male protagonist is almost written as a pendant on the female protagonist. The author should go to women's channels and write articles with female protagonists, which would be more promising.
About this book
The protagonist starts as an amateur player, and the main plot is that the protagonist steps into the professional arena and wins the gold belts of the four major organizations step by step. The pace is slow and intense, with more daily descriptions and love elements, but the key battles will be described in detail and hardcore. There is not only boxing in the middle, but also many other fighting techniques (such as jujitsu, kickboxing, MMA, etc.) As the plot develops. If you have any bad opinions, you can leave them under this post! It is convenient to delete posts (cross out) and reply.
Shennong Tasting
First: The author is very young and wrote a lot of incidents to create a disgusting supporting actress. Second: I have seen Chapter 88 so far. The system is too weird. I obviously went to watch the game, but in a random mission, the protagonist is like a licking dog. He goes up to fight like a licker, and fights again and again... I don't know what to say... I saw 8 from Chapter 70 Chapter 8, I spent two or three days reading it. If you want to read it, I added it to the bookshelf. Let's read it. It makes me feel uncomfortable. 😣 Third: Isn't the previous sectioning very good? Why after 60 chapters, the sections are divided into one large section and one large section. It's really uncomfortable to read. I stopped reading it, it was uncomfortable to read, but the author's story is still very detailed. If you can persist through chapter 88, it will suit your taste, just keep reading. Don't pay attention to what I say, I'm going crazy...
The pacing is too slow, or it has reached the point of failure. It is just one game, and it can be extended into a side story. There are several chapters about skill introduction and character introduction, but it is also speechless.
It's very well written, don't write it again in the future
Goldfinger came too late, I had no expectations!
Why not: a boxer who is seriously injured and paralyzed, a girlfriend who is a nurse, a doctor whose glasses reflect light...🙂
This book can be read as a light novel and a competitive novel at the same time. The details are well written and the plot is also developing in an interesting direction. It feels pretty good. Good luck, author.
I saw her sister drugging her
Didn't watch it later. So disgusting. What's next? Did he blow his sister's brains out?
About this book (2)
Responding to questions that some readers are concerned about 1. The male protagonist was obviously a boxer in his previous life, so why was he beaten violently at the beginning? In his previous life, the male protagonist was just an amateur boxer who entered the provincial team in China (some memories mentioned the male protagonist's previous life experience), and he couldn't even get a good ranking in the provincial team competition. Not to mention that the provincial team also has the national team, and there are players selected to participate in the Olympics, and then the Olympic champion. Up to this position, they are still just amateurs. Yes, even the Olympic champions are still amateurs, not even professional players. (Some amateur players are indeed better than many professional players, but in the end they are still a minority) Let's look at the male protagonist's opponent at the beginning, Kubo Hayabusa, who has an outstanding amateur record and a professional record of nine wins. He is ranked in the top ten among the four most authoritative organizations in professional boxing. He may only be a few wins away from the world boxing championship. Let alone the male protagonist at the provincial team level, even if he is an Olympic champion of the same weight, he may not be able to win. 2. The pace is too slow Because this book hopes that any audience, even readers who do not know any fighting-related knowledge, can understand it, so a lot of effort will be spent on explaining many details. I will pay attention to this aspect in the future and try to see if I can speed up the advancement of the plot. (So I may write 300,000 words before putting it on the shelves. Step by step, the main plot remains the same as the introduction. The protagonist will win the world boxing title step by step, and then enter a new grand plot stage) 3. Some supporting characters who appear have no sense of existence This is mainly caused by the second problem. In fact, the supporting characters whose complete names have appeared will have complete shaping and branch plots, but... It is not the time for them to appear at all! So don't be anxious, you will come out when it's time to come out. If you have any comments, you can mention them below this post. It will be convenient to delete the post (cross it out) and reply easily.
Maybe it's too realistic. .
Let me start by saying that it is a good boxing article, but to be honest, I am really not interested in boxing. Apart from Tyson and Lewis, I can't even name one more. Besides, I have watched such surreal anime as Yujiro Noma and Ten Demons and Snake Ouma. I really have no patience for novels that are close to reality. I have already said it. Can't we make it bigger if we add more points to it? At least it can have the same skill set as Killer Tennis or Kuroko's Basketball. In reality, the quality of human beings is actually quite close. If you play too many games like this, you will feel tired. I guess you will just pass it by after reading it, but I already feel a lot of irritation in the Hundred Chapters. .
It's obvious that the author wanted to write a long story, but it's too clumsy.
Why not write about Oyama Kei? I feel that Okamoto Rina is not as good-looking as Oyama, and she has also been involved in a fraud case.
The pace of this book is too slow. There is no future for a web article with this pace.
The writing is very good, the plot is okay, and the author's writing style just doesn't have a chance to be promoted! Never be a eunuch! Light novel + boxing is very interesting
What a piece of shit. The plot is outstanding and inexplicable. One day, you didn't get paid as a sparring partner and you were asked to fuck a good guy? Disgusting low-level villains everywhere, not a single game played in dozens of chapters
It's well written It's rare to see this kind of pure emotion as the main line. It's a breath of fresh air in novels nowadays.
The heroine is too ugly, she slipped away