Twin Cities: Starting from Mechanical Ascension

The writing is very good, the characters are created, and the plot is very good. It's just that part of the plot is a bit stupid. It's better to change the gambling part to a test. There are also the upper management of Shangcheng. The shrewd businessmen only care about profits and don't pay much attention to human birth. Big opinion, Also, the protagonist needs to develop technology to chase death, and also improve the bottom city, as well as the love line and the plot of the bottom city. They should be written together. Either the plot will be delayed or the mind will be confused and the book will enter the palace. The main line must be divided well to extend the branch line.

Look what I found, an infrastructure-style League of Legends fanfic.

Please, dear readers

When I look at it after the final, my mood will be different again. Writing a book for a newbie has the same new beauty as taking an exam after preparing for the final. Keep up the good work 👏

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A rare new author, keep it up w It's good to read it during the final period to relax your brain