Game of Thrones: Molten Crown

You don't write about so many good things about Game of Thrones, but you have to write about the illusory ones. I've basically read all the fanfics in the game. Anything that writes about God must be sent to you. Take a look at what you have updated in the past few days. Are all the horse gods out? I can't imagine what other outrageous things you will write in the future? Are we readers here to see you write about God? This kind of standing is easy to seriously collapse, and the combat power system completely collapses. Even if you write about God, you still can't explain why. The original author didn't even write it clearly, but you still have to stick to it. If you don't have diamonds, don't accept the porcelain. It seems that you have written well before, and you have updated so many chapters. I really can't stand these next few pictures of yours. Conquering a Dothraki requires strength. If you want sex, if you want to get out of the plot, if you want to overwhelm the protagonist, just say so. There is no need to torture readers like this.

Any Game of Thrones fan who writes about immortals and divine battles is basically Gg. After seeing your updates these days, I don't want to talk anymore. Let's open a plate. 600,000 Words eunuch.

In the period without magic, I thought the protagonist would be completely crushed if he cheated, but the author arranged 100 water warlocks for the opponent. It's so outrageous. Even the mage capital in the original book may not be able to gather 100 spellcasters during this period.

I can't seem to post a reply here. You are the one who cursed people in that post. You can't accept the tradition of the Long family. Then what kind of Game of Thrones fandom do you see that travels through Jackie Chan's family? And it's so smelly🗡😅

Game of Thrones kills the Stark family first, which is the best thing to watch

Then one must come, Valyria, your king is back, go and pick up some Valyrian heritage. During the Valyrian Empire, the 40 Dragon King Continent seems to have never been interested in Westeros, because the Eastern Continent is too fat. Even the nomadic tribe Dothraki are stronger than the other. Unify the Eastern Continent. When the time comes, they will bring the three-headed dragon and the army to conquer Dragonstone. When the time comes, Westeros Continent will remember the fear of the conquerors, and they will capture the two continents together, and the sun will never set on the Empire.

To be honest, the author saw that the Dornish people wanted to ask for the baby dragon, and the protagonist actually gave it to him. I was speechless. Even if the protagonist could get the baby dragon back in some way in the future, it would be of no use, because regardless of whether Dorne controls the baby dragon, Dorne theoretically has a dragon. Author, don't you think you are contradicting yourself when you write this? You yourself have said that there are some things that cannot be started in this way. Brother, look at what you wrote? You've already started this, haven't you learned enough of the lessons you learned back then? Author, what you wrote is like a joke, but it is just a matter of time. If Dorne dares to assassinate, the protagonist can just bring the army back to Westeros to push back after a while. Is there any need to buy such a hidden danger and find this excuse? The dragon is the most important weapon of the country, and even a verbal promise cannot be made. Author, can you understand the weight of these four words: the most important weapon of the country?

Could you please stop showing off your knowledge of inheritance law? The British eldest son system has always been based on children and then grandchildren. The 101 Great Council was also convened after the death of Bellon.

I'm a little speechless. The last few Game of Thrones novels have all started to get sick when they were transitioning to the middle stage of the game. The key is that I don't know whether it's because there is no outline or the outline is too bad. The plot of God's War is a mess. The more I write, the worse the feedback becomes. I completely write myself down as I write. I sincerely ask these fan authors who think they are very capable of research to think carefully about why God is just a background for Martin himself, and why Valemaya cannot take action in Middle-earth. I am not mindlessly opposed to God War. It is understandable that I have started to change maps after I have reached a certain point. But please change the map first and learn the basic logic and rhythm of changing the map. Don't be intoxicated in your own settings. Open your eyes and see how bad your plot is. Really start eunuch from now. After half a year, if you read the book you wrote, you won't be able to stand it.

What could have been enjoyable was forcibly wiped out by the author, such as secretly giving essence to others. Why should such things be done secretly? It's obvious that the author can give favors openly and honestly, but the author insists on such a stupid plot. Then, the supporting character sheds tears of gratitude and is willing to sacrifice his life because of the protagonist's attitude and action. Is the author overthinking this? This is suspected of forcibly subduing one's intelligence!

The fleet is really not as good as being a pirate in the disputed land occupied by the Third Daughter and the Stepstone Islands. Anyway, the only remaining Arbor Fleet and the Iron Fleet will not listen to Robert. After negotiating with Braavos, he can become the Southern King. Use the people and funds to open up the land to rob the nobles of the Stormland and Valley. Anyway, it is not your Long family's basic base. If you don't rob, no one will think of you. As long as you are willing to be a pirate, the profit will definitely be greater than the cost. Just one sentence: An iron fleet is enough for the Iron Islands to serve as princes in Westeros. Selling the fleet will definitely be a loss.

It's obviously quite beautiful in front of me, but suddenly an old man by the river comes, and he can still watch with difficulty. Suddenly he can kill the horse god, and he is fucked to death by the red god again. . So disgusting, I want to vomit

A child of several years old running around everywhere is really nonsense.

I have only read Chapter 30. Let me give you my thoughts first. The writing is good. It can be said that it is really good. However, there are problems with the character design and the identity change of the protagonist. 1. When the young master is in doubt, he must succeed if he either does not speak out or speaks out. Otherwise, it will only damage his own prestige, although there may not be anything. What prestige; 2. Tai Ah is upside down, and the disaster is endless. Anyone may betray, maybe because of feelings, maybe because of interests, or because of ambition, but no matter what, if you can't be wary of others, then you are not a qualified leader. Why do you always want to share with others if you can strengthen yourself? Whether one of you dies or the enemy dies, as long as you don't die, it's worth it; 3. Mystery, this point has good and bad aspects for the protagonist. The good one is given the identity of a prophet, which is helpful to increase prestige, but the bad one, why do you want it in the first place? To increase the credibility of the prophecy, letting the glass candle light up is like a vision coming from the sky. In ancient times, such people were born to die for the emperor, but you would be better off letting more people know about it. What if those subordinates are die-hard loyalists to your brother? What if his mother wants his son to be the king? The second one keeps using Rhaegar's name. I really can't see why? Living people cannot defeat dead people, because dead people will become more and more perfect in their memories, while living people will eat, drink, and make mistakes. Do you want to give up your position more conveniently? In short, there are fundamental problems with the portrayal of the protagonist. It feels too soft and gentle. I don't know what the emperor is like, but what I know is that there should not be an emperor digging into his own foundation.

1. You still need to read more of the original work and understand the basic settings. Don't make the mistake of saying that the world of ice and fire originally had paper and could directly develop printing technology (there was no paper in the original book, only parchment); Valyrian steel is denser than gold; and there are flaws like the yew longbow. 2. Try to write as little as possible about high demons and divine battles, and it is even better if the protagonist does not have a system!

The most stupid thing about the author is that he doesn't understand that power does not allow for a vacuum. As the number one position of the Long family, if news of your death comes out in the morning, your ministers and generals will start betting on who will be the next leader in the afternoon. Especially the protagonist's own inheritance rights are problematic. You are the author and you have a God's perspective to know that the author will be resurrected. What about the others? How did the author treat the generals and troops who defected to Little Aegon after his resurrection? If it weren't for the personal power that goes against the will of heaven, even if you are pretending to be dead at this point, you will become real dead. The power management stream is most afraid of such a plot where the protagonist comes back from the dead. As long as you write the logic, it will collapse 😅

It's so terrifying. You actually dare to write the protagonist to death during the period of the rise of such a power. How dare you? The protagonist is a leader of a power, and he is a prince who has risen from the dead king, and he is written to death in such a gorgeous way? He died under God's prophecy, it's just 😥😅, will the protagonist's power really not collapse in this way? You are already mixed inside, how can you guarantee loyalty, everyone is dead. Even if you come back from resurrection, how can the protagonist prove that the protagonist is himself? If I were a hostile force, I would accuse you of pretending or being a stand-in. Now Mr. Huang is really a stand-in. I want to see how the author plans to deal with it, or will he rely on intelligence to solve everything?

The author lacks basic knowledge about Game of Thrones. For example, Valyrian steel is very light. For example, Game of Thrones only has parchment. About the author who invented printing and papermaking, what were the consequences? A hundred years later, during the Great Revolution, your descendants will be guillotined! Why does Westeros have the same aristocratic rule for eight thousand years? Because there is no paper and gunpowder invented by the Chinese nation! There will be no Renaissance! The author lets the protagonist invent printing, and the Renaissance and the awakening of the people are inevitable! A solid foundation was laid for the complete destruction of Targaryen! Just like the French Revolution, the first to be guillotined must be the king's family! Why not like the UK? The reason is very simple. The author began to let the protagonist weaken the lords and nobles on a large scale, which is exactly the same as France! So it can only be a great revolution like France! There will be no second option!

The chapters starting from Horse God are worthless. I haven't watched Game of Thrones in its entirety, but I have watched a few American dramas. In fact, in Western mythology, God's influence on people is mostly influenced by faith, and they basically do not interfere with the secular world. Therefore, Western values ​​​​are that I am waiting for God to redeem me, but when someone comes to help him, mortals will refuse to help. A simple story, there is a flood coming soon, we will not wait and run to higher ground directly. What do Westerners say? They will choose to wait for God to redeem them, or regret whether they have done something wrong and are punished by God. In this case, they will not choose to run away. Even if a ship comes to help them, they will not leave and have to wait for God to come. After death, if the West is really crazy and asks God, I am loyal to you, why don't you save me, God will tell the West that I have sent someone to sail a boat to save you, but you refused. So Westerners' world view is not as strong as our Eastern counterparts, nor do they have as much subjective initiative/the desire and ability to break the aristocratic lineage. Compared with social changes, they strive to maintain the original social elite order from top to bottom. Even after the Industrial Revolution, although Western society broke the original elite class rule of the landed aristocracy, it established an elite social ruling order that combined the capital elite and the landed aristocratic elite. Even in the 21st century, the West is still ruled by social elites, and ordinary people at the bottom of the West do not think this is wrong. Instead, they naturally think it should be this way. So when writing Western novels, you really can't bring into the thinking of Dongda people. They really don't have this kind of thing. They don't even use aristocrats to reject social changes and maintain the original aristocratic rule...

The first few dozen pictures are okay, but after leaving the original work, the writing becomes unreadable...

I read it on QQ and saw chapter 280. The more I read, the more uncomfortable I feel. This god can't do anything, but he's going to die. Why does this god want to mess with him so much? Why did he waste so many things? The main character of a disaster is finished. The whole book is so good, and he loses all his blood.

I said I would hang you out, but unfortunately, if I had known you would delete my comments, I would have cut them all. In general~that's it! First, it changed from God basically not interfering, to indirect interference, from indirect interference to witch interference. Finally, I was KO'ed by one sentence, and I was so angry that I deleted my comment. The last sentence is: When Melisandre resurrected Snow, she was not sure that the resurrection would be successful, but the man could resurrect others if he wanted to. The witch's personal intervention is not as good as indirect interference...

The kind that starts with a naval battle involving tens of thousands of people, capturing thousands and beheading thousands. Which company in Westeros has so many navies? The core surnames fully mobilized about ten thousand people, both in the War of the Five Kings and the War of the Conquerors. Normal battles only involve a few thousand people. What's more, the navy is extremely scarce. Second, Dragonstone is not undefendable at all. It has been a military fortress for tens of thousands of years, and there are many reefs outside the island. The black rocks on the island are towering, there is no Longchun landing battle, and the difficulty of capturing it is comparable to the Eagle's Nest. Besides, Westeros has always had a weak navy. With 200 warships, it can be said that it spans the middle of the Narrow Sea. At least he's a big Yu Lun. Donne's attitude is completely outrageous. It can be said that her daughter will not die, but Aegon will not die. He should give his full support to the Targaryens. Dorne, like the North, wants to be independent. Now Blackwater Bay does not distinguish between male and female, or even never distinguish between male and female. That is what Dorne wants most. He actually came up with the plot to get his daughter back and change Aegon's surname. Not to mention married, they are legally two families. Even if he wants to come back, you are sure that Lao Bo believes in your funny surname change drama, so you choose him to believe it. No matter what you give him, the land is owned by the owner. If you want him to be a mere palace vassal, will they go back?

I feel like this book is probably The Eunuch. Wouldn't the author consider writing the Dance of Blood Dragons fanfic that he promised before?

This book feels a lot different from Molten Gold Crown. Is it because there are things in reality and I don't have time to polish it carefully, or is it just ruined?

The author rushes towards the mysterious side, it's too bad

Did the author get a job? After all, if he writes more realistically, some people will read it.

What do you mean eunuch? I can't bear to subscribe but you won't write anymore?

Awesome, a new book has been published.

Game of Thrones, if you don't write about Game of Thrones, is it still considered Game of Thrones?