Douluo: Rebirth of Yuhao, Rebuilding Peerless Glory

I will get Huo Yutong to come out. After rebirth, Huo found Tianmeng and Yi Lao in advance and went to kill Huo Yun'er, but found that he had become his younger sister.

Huo Yuhao

I have written 30 chapters and I still don't see what the author wants to write. Maybe he wants to create some weird elements. It seems that it has nothing to do with Douluo. The author's writing is too poor to express that feeling. Anyway, he just ran away.

Whether there is Mr. Shen Nong or not, the protagonist will not be able to enter Shi Laike.

Little Huo Niang

Haokan

The author writes very well, really. The writing is very innovative. This is the first time that I want to give the author a monthly vote after just reading the first three. I hope to keep it up. (I would like to give you a suggestion: if the author is stuck, don't write casually. You can write about the daily life of the protagonist or supporting characters to enrich the character's personality.) If the author cannot control the emotional line well, he can omit the emotional line... If he wants the male protagonist to have a partner, he can finally describe it in the extra chapter. What I also want to say is that the male protagonist's partner is not necessarily the female protagonist, and the female protagonist's partner is not necessarily the male protagonist. The male and female protagonists of a book are the protagonists of the book, and they were equal before. For example, Uncle Long and Xiaoyu from Jackie Chan's Adventures, Xiaolong, Xiaohu and Xiaolan from Chinese Boy, Japan's Death God and Pirates, etc.

I also think it's good for the heroine to be Qiu'er. If the author sees it, please reply if the heroine is Qiu'er.

Super beast armed?

What could make Huo Yuhao's soul unable to resist even the god-king level?

I have read Chapter 34 now, and I feel it is much better than other fans. The protagonist Huo Yuhao is well portrayed and has mature thinking. The thinking mode of other protagonists gives people a child's thinking, giving people the feeling that the world is either black or white. This Huo Yuhao has a mature and steady mind.

I can only say that the writing in Peerless Fans is very good. The portrayal of each person is very good with just a few strokes. The Shrek students are not deliberately vilified because they are opposites. The more modern settings added to the Soul Master Competition also show the impact of the Soul Master Competition on the national economy. The influence of Ji, it is written that the emperor neither wants Shrek to be strong nor wants to make him weak. He has a manly spirit for Xu Sanshi and can afford to let go of his feelings for Jiang Nannan. Ma Xiaotao also matured because of Wang Yan's words. The author did not deliberately vilify the character, but tried his best to give the character as much image as possible.

Little Huo Niang

Little Huo Niang

Who can read this update

Isn't it true that 200,000 words have not been published? Is the reading situation really so bad?

From my personal point of view, some of the disasters in the original work can be avoided, but you still have to add some disasters in other places. The blessings and disasters must be interdependent. There are some things and disasters in life that cannot be avoided, such as the hatred for the duchess, the longing for resurrecting the mother, the expectation of help and companionship from the spirit beast companions, Shrek's glory and ideological seal, Tang Sect's Recruiting for revival, Tang Wutong was put down by the little Yakuza as bait, etc. Without these, Huo is more of an ordinary person's mentality. In some aspects of his heart, he is worse than the original Huo, but some aspects are also stronger, but it is better to become black. The boy's hair grows overnight, the awakening of the rejected white tiger bloodline, and the forcible swallowing and possession of Tianmeng. The second martial soul position becomes a black big cat. Love is better than Haoqiu. The two big cats are so harmonious together. To cooperate with the soul beasts, you can use new training systems such as contracts and Dou San's blood soul rings. It is still necessary to rectify the Holy Spirit Cult (there are still many poor people). It can be won in the unification war. While saving civilians in the public eye, Shrek still focused on cutting down golden trees and annihilating Poseidon's believers. Then he merged the Royal Soul Master Academy of the Sun and Moon and the Ontology Sect as the highest institution in the empire. He launched a unification war and used the chapter of blood and tears to forge a unified empire, which can be used to set up the Evil Emperor Xuantian (Xingxujie, Guilin Madness, and Tiger Soul).

Then ask the author again. This book must have at least 800,000 words! Please reply if you see it

Endless Shennong, come out! ! ! ! ! ! !

I won't be updating anymore. If it's not finished, I have to send a message 🤫